Azadi nahi mili........( Ghayel ):Tanziya aur Tehreekbaksh Shayariyan

sajid_ghayel

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Found an old work of mine from a thread, sharing again by posting in new thread....hope you will like it.

Woh shehar bohat dhoondha, jaha thoda ho andhera
Jalti na ho koi, woh basti nahi mili !!

Izzat se uthe doli, khushiyo ki mile sej
Gareeb beti ke baap ko, aisi koi khushi nahi mili !!

Do roti ki hain ghulami, do saso ki hain ghulami
Desh azad to hain mera, q muje azadi nahi mili !!

Woh kitna zaheen tha, tha ghar me sabka ladla
Mar gaya woh bhookhe pet, par naukri nahi mili !!

Q meri sune koi, Ghayel me khas kya hain
Jab dhoondta raha khuda bhi, use bandagi nahi mili !!

Shor hain har taraf bum ke dhamako ka
Koi din aisa nahi jise diwali nahi mili !!

Khoon se lal hai badan mere desh ka
Koi din aisa nahi jab ise holi nahi mili

Safed chader pe lipti yeh kiski vidhwa hain
Barso huye ise koi rangeen choli nahi mili

Matam hain bebasi hain sannata hain Ghayel ke watan me
Kisi dar pe hame aaj koi rangoli nahi mili!!

-SG-


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Rajesh Harish

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Re: Azadi nahi mili........( Ghayel )

«Reply #1 on: April 27, 2009, 07:44:20 AM »

Good one Ghayel Ji


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Pooja

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Re: Azadi nahi mili........( Ghayel )

«Reply #2 on: April 27, 2009, 04:42:34 PM »

Good work Sajid!!


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sajid_ghayel

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Re: Azadi nahi mili........( Ghayel )

«Reply #3 on: April 29, 2009, 02:00:16 PM »

Quote from: Pooja on April 27, 2009, 04:42:34 PM

Good work Sajid!!

Quote from: Rajesh Harish on April 27, 2009, 07:44:20 AM

Good one Ghayel Ji

Thank You........Rajesh & Pooja, par pata nahi q aisa lagta hain hum apne apne thread me ziyada busy hain aur others post par comment nahi de rahe hain.

I request everybody the way we expect reply on our thread the same way others too expect that. If you have miss its ok.........appreciating someone work is fun too trust me.


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Re: Azadi nahi mili........( Ghayel )

«Reply #4 on: April 29, 2009, 07:20:15 PM »

Mashallah Bohat Khoob Behtareen Andaaz Mien Aapne Desh Ka Haal Bataaya Hai,.

Great Job, Sajid Bhai,.


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Talat

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Re: Azadi nahi mili........( Ghayel )

«Reply #5 on: April 29, 2009, 08:26:30 PM »

Quote from: sajid_ghayel on April 27, 2009, 07:25:13 AM

Found an old work of mine from a thread, sharing again by posting in new thread....hope you will like it.

Very good creation indeed..... Bohot Khoob Sajid Ji icon_thumleft


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Roja

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Re: Azadi nahi mili........( Ghayel )

«Reply #6 on: April 30, 2009, 03:01:59 AM »

Bahut accha likha hai aapne Sajid ji...
Last four lines toh bahut bahut accha likha. Those lines touched my heart. Keep up.


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SARVESH RASTOGI

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Re: Azadi nahi mili........( Ghayel )

«Reply #7 on: May 02, 2009, 04:01:33 PM »

Quote from: sajid_ghayel on April 27, 2009, 07:25:13 AM

Found an old work of mine from a thread, sharing again by posting in new thread....hope you will like it.

Bahut bahut khoob Ghayal Ji
Badi achchhi shairy pesh ki hai aapne
Very good, very very good.
SARVESH RASTOGI


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junaidqadir

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Re: Azadi nahi mili........( Ghayel )

«Reply #8 on: May 03, 2009, 09:39:33 AM »

Subhan allah mere dost jitni baar bhi tarif ki jiye is kalam kam hi hogi hamesha zinda rahene wali kalam hai ye sajid sahab apke is kalam mujhe bhi apna khuch yaad aya agar pasand aye to nawaz dena !!

Dhondte rahe umr bhar manzil nahi mili !!
Charagon ki sarparasti me raushni nahi mili !!
Tera har zulm sar ankhon per utha lete !!
Maanga bahoth khuda se magar zindagi nahi mili !!

Muddath tak tere shaher me dhoondte rahe hum !!
Bande hi mile sub kissi me bandage nahi mili !!

Umr bhar apne begunha hone ki saza kaati humne !!
Gunha hoga jo maazi ko mustaqbil ki haqeeqath nahi mili !!

Galli ke har nukkad per maine maa baap ki laash dekhi !!
Shayad kissi bete ko daulath-a-wasihath nahi mili !!

Aur waqath ne hame khuch is qadar badal diya !!
Aaine hazaro dekhe apni surath nahi mili !!

Kab tak khush bahali ki baten karke tassali doge !!
Aaj bhi mere desh me kissi bhooke ko rooti nahi mili !!

Aur un parindon ki bagawath jaiz hai qadeer !!
Jinhe raath guzarne apne hi paid ki shaaqen nahi mili !!

qadeer


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sajid_ghayel

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Re: Azadi nahi mili........( Ghayel )

«Reply #9 on: May 05, 2009, 12:38:09 PM »

Quote from: Azeem on April 29, 2009, 07:20:15 PM

Mashallah Bohat Khoob Behtareen Andaaz Mien Aapne Desh Ka Haal Bataaya Hai,.

Great Job, Sajid Bhai,.

Nawazish Karam hain Chote....


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honeyrose

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Re: Azadi nahi mili........( Ghayel )

«Reply #10 on: May 05, 2009, 12:40:48 PM »

Quote from: sajid_ghayel on April 27, 2009, 07:25:13 AM

Found an old work of mine from a thread, sharing again by posting in new thread....hope you will like it.

Wah wah Sajid ji bohat khoob g88 creation
beautifull lines....


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sajid_ghayel

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Re: Azadi nahi mili........( Ghayel )

«Reply #11 on: May 07, 2009, 06:58:21 AM »

Quote from: Celmira on April 29, 2009, 08:26:30 PM

Very good creation indeed..... Bohot Khoob Sajid Ji icon_thumleft

Nawazish Karam hain Behan...


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khamosh_aawaaz

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Re: Azadi nahi mili........( Ghayel )

«Reply #12 on: May 07, 2009, 08:43:36 AM »

Quote from: sajid_ghayel on April 27, 2009, 07:25:13 AM

Found an old work of mine from a thread, sharing again by posting in new thread....hope you will like it.

WAAAH WAAAH BAHAUT BAHUT ACHCHEY....VERII VERII NAAICE...S_G


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sajid_ghayel

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Re: Azadi nahi mili........( Ghayel )

«Reply #13 on: June 12, 2009, 09:26:01 AM »

Quote from: Roja on April 30, 2009, 03:01:59 AM

Bahut accha likha hai aapne Sajid ji...
Last four lines toh bahut bahut accha likha. Those lines touched my heart. Keep up.

Thank You Roja for your time and comment..


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shab

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Re: Azadi nahi mili........( Ghayel )

«Reply #14 on: June 12, 2009, 11:13:51 AM »

BAHUT DARD BHARI,SAJID BHAI & SHIHAB SAHAB
CARRY ON


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