BAAT BARABAR HAIN.........(GHAYEL)

by sajid_ghayel on November 17, 2008, 08:55:02 AM
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Tumne hame bhula diya, humne tumhe bhula diya
Baat barabar hain, baat mukhtasar hain

Tumne kaha bevafa hame, humne kaha bevafa tumhe
Baat barabar hain, baat mukhtasar hain

Path_thar mile hain humko, phool tumko bhi mile nahi
Baat barabar hain, baat mukhtasar hain

Tanha guzari humne apni zindagi, tumko bhi baad mere koi mila nahi
Baat barabar hain, Baat mukhtasar hain

Na mili shero ko dad mere, kabil-e-tareef tumne bhi kuch likha nahi
Baat barabar hain, baat mukhtasar hain

Hua duniya se rukhsat GHAYEL, maut tumko bhi to aayee
Baar Barabar hain, baat mukhtasar hain

                     -Sajid Ghayel-
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«Reply #1 on: November 17, 2008, 09:11:59 AM »
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bahoot khoob sajid... Applause Applause
tumhe bhi sabne thukraya, mujhe bhi apno ne choda
na shayr bana mai bhi, na likhna tumne hi choda
Baat barabar hai baat mukhtsar hain
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«Reply #2 on: November 17, 2008, 09:32:49 AM »
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Quote from: bekarar on November 17, 2008, 09:11:59 AM
bahoot khoob sajid... Applause Applause
tumhe bhi sabne thukraya, mujhe bhi apno ne choda
na shayr bana mai bhi, na likhna tumne hi choda
Baat barabar hai baat mukhtsar hain
thanks sanjeev and equally good reply  Applause
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«Reply #3 on: November 17, 2008, 09:53:09 AM »
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Waah.. Waah.. Kya baat hai..
Adle ko Badle wali Shayari... Laughing hard

Oops.. I mean.. Sajid ji, likha aapne bhi aisa ki kiya kamaal hai, aur Sanjeev ji.. likha aapne bhi aisa.. ki kamaal par hua dhamaal hai..

Good hai ji.. Applause
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«Reply #4 on: November 17, 2008, 10:02:13 AM »
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Bohat Badhiya sajid Bhai,.
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«Reply #5 on: November 17, 2008, 10:21:04 AM »
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lagta hai sajid so gaya hai.......
bahoot bahoot shukriya shikha.....wo kahte hain na ki "sangat ka asar" to bas yun samajhiye ke aap logon ki sangat me kuch likh lete hain...
lekin aapka hisaab to baaqi hi bata raha hai.......
baat na to barabar hai aur na hi mukhtsar
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«Reply #6 on: November 17, 2008, 11:18:01 AM »
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Quote from: Jaanasheen on November 17, 2008, 10:02:13 AM
Bohat Badhiya sajid Bhai,.
thanks azeem yaar duniya bhar ke liye itna pyaara likhte ho kabhi do char sher hamari jholi me i mean hamare topic me bhi daal diya karo samundar me se 2 lota pani nikal liya jaye to sanumdar kam thode hi hota hai
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«Reply #7 on: November 17, 2008, 11:21:55 AM »
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Quote from: Mahiya on November 17, 2008, 09:53:09 AM
Waah.. Waah.. Kya baat hai..
Adle ko Badle wali Shayari... Laughing hard

Oops.. I mean.. Sajid ji, likha aapne bhi aisa ki kiya kamaal hai, aur Sanjeev ji.. likha aapne bhi aisa.. ki kamaal par hua dhamaal hai..

Good hai ji.. Applause
Quote from: bekarar on November 17, 2008, 10:21:04 AM
lagta hai sajid so gaya hai.......
bahoot bahoot shukriya shikha.....wo kahte hain na ki "sangat ka asar" to bas yun samajhiye ke aap logon ki sangat me kuch likh lete hain...
lekin aapka hisaab to baaqi hi bata raha hai.......
baat na to barabar hai aur na hi mukhtsar
Yaar sanjeev inse kehke koi fayda nahi badi kanjus ho gayee hain aajkal mehngayee ke hisab se apne khayal kharch karti hain  Laughing hard
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«Reply #8 on: November 17, 2008, 11:36:02 AM »
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Quote from: sajid_ghayel on November 17, 2008, 11:21:55 AM
Yaar sanjeev inse kehke koi fayda nahi badi kanjus ho gayee hain aajkal mehngayee ke hisab se apne khayal kharch karti hain  Laughing hard

lolz...
Sanjeev Ji ne kaha, Ya aapne kaha..
Humne toh kisi ko bhi nahin suna.. tongue3



Aap logo ke saamne likna bada mushkil kaam hai,
Naa likhwaaiye humse, abhi baaki thoda naam hai..  icon_silent

Aapki funny shayari par saari duniya hansti hai,
Lekin Hum par toh sirf fabtiya hi kassi jaayegi..
Hum jo sharminda hue toh, aapko bhi sharam aayegi..
Aur Phir.. Sochiye,
Baat barabar ho jaayegi, Baat Mukhtsar kehlaayegi...  BangHead
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«Reply #9 on: November 17, 2008, 12:45:04 PM »
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Quote from: Mahiya on November 17, 2008, 11:36:02 AM
lolz...
Sanjeev Ji ne kaha, Ya aapne kaha..
Humne toh kisi ko bhi nahin suna.. tongue3



Aap logo ke saamne likna bada mushkil kaam hai,
Naa likhwaaiye humse, abhi baaki thoda naam hai..  icon_silent

Aapki funny shayari par saari duniya hansti hai,
Lekin Hum par toh sirf fabtiya hi kassi jaayegi..
Hum jo sharminda hue toh, aapko bhi sharam aayegi..
Aur Phir.. Sochiye,
Baat barabar ho jaayegi, Baat Mukhtsar kehlaayegi...  BangHead
Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

yeh hui na baat mohtarma aap bhale se kam likhe lekin zarur likhe jab bhi lkihti hain achcha hi likhti hain

hamari shayri par sari duniya hasti hain
aur hum aap par haste hain Giggle

mizah ka subject dhoondna nahi padta
jo bhi likhte hain jee bas aapko soch ke likhte hain Laughing hard
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«Reply #10 on: November 17, 2008, 03:03:53 PM »
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geh geh geh geh re, geh re sahiba... pyaar mein soda nahee!
tho ye hisaab bara bar karnay kee baat kahaan se agaee?

dil tumne diya, dil maine bhi diya,
pyaar tumne bhi kiya pyaar maine bhi kiya,
baat barabar hai, baat mukhtasar hai...
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«Reply #11 on: November 17, 2008, 05:02:35 PM »
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bahoot khoon SG and Bekarar ji

Acha sath de rahe hai app Mahiya aor AD!!
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«Reply #12 on: November 18, 2008, 07:53:00 AM »
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Quote from: anjaan dharkan on November 17, 2008, 03:03:53 PM
geh geh geh geh re, geh re sahiba... pyaar mein soda nahee!
tho ye hisaab bara bar karnay kee baat kahaan se agaee?

dil tumne diya, dil maine bhi diya,
pyaar tumne bhi kiya pyaar maine bhi kiya,
baat barabar hai, baat mukhtasar hai...
Itne khoobsurat jawab ke liye bohat shukriya anjan
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Quote from: Pooja on November 17, 2008, 05:02:35 PM
bahoot khoon SG and Bekarar ji

Acha sath de rahe hai app Mahiya aor AD!!
Thanks pooja
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«Reply #14 on: November 21, 2008, 07:44:37 AM »
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baat barabar hain sajid bhai
bahut khoob likha aapne Applause
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