BAAT BARABAR HAIN.........(GHAYEL)

by sajid_ghayel on November 17, 2008, 08:55:02 AM
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«Reply #15 on: November 21, 2008, 09:15:48 AM »
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yeh to tumhara badappan hain taheer warna hum is kabil kaha bohat shukriya hausla afzayee ke liye
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«Reply #16 on: November 24, 2008, 12:33:52 PM »
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bahut khoob saajid jee,accha likha he aapney.

swaabhimaan mera choota nahi aur ehum tera toota nahi
baat barabar hain,baat mukhtasar hain.

faisla mein badal na saka aur tum bhee zid pur adi rahi
baat barabar hain,baat mukhtasar hain.

ghut gayi meri khwaishey,tere armaano ki immaratey bhee deh gayi
baat barabar hein, baat mukhtasar hain.

mere upar hansi duniya, tujh per bhee kase taane
baat barabar hain,baat mukhtasar hain.

tere bina bhee hu main zinda,mere bina tune bhee seekh liya jeena
baat barabar hain, baat mukhtsar hain.

Prateek
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«Reply #17 on: November 24, 2008, 12:44:49 PM »
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Quote from: Prateek Mardia on November 24, 2008, 12:33:52 PM
bahut khoob saajid jee,accha likha he aapney.

swaabhimaan mera choota nahi aur ehum tera toota nahi
baat barabar hain,baat mukhtasar hain.

faisla mein badal na saka aur tum bhee zid pur adi rahi
baat barabar hain,baat mukhtasar hain.

ghut gayi meri khwaishey,tere armaano ki immaratey bhee deh gayi
baat barabar hein, baat mukhtasar hain.

mere upar hansi duniya, tujh per bhee kase taane
baat barabar hain,baat mukhtasar hain.

tere bina bhee hu main zinda,mere bina tune bhee seekh liya jeena
baat barabar hain, baat mukhtsar hain.

Prateek
Khud ko behtar kahu main tujhse, Tujhe mujse behtar kahe zamana
Baat barabar hain, Baat mukhtasar hain
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«Reply #18 on: November 24, 2008, 02:36:04 PM »
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Bahot Badhiya Prateek Ji,.
Nice One,.
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«Reply #19 on: November 24, 2008, 02:48:18 PM »
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bahut shukriya saajid ji aur bahut shukriya aazeem bhai.

mujhey yaad tera hur sitam, jaise yaad hoga tujhe mera deewanapun
baat baraabar hain, baat mukhtasar hain.

khalish uthti mere seene mey reh reh kar,tujhey aanso aatey hey
baat baraabar hain, baat mukhtasar hain.

kabhi hichki aati hey mujhko,kabhi bedardi ko yaad karta hu
baat baraabar hain, baat mukhtasar hain.
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«Reply #20 on: November 26, 2008, 05:21:58 AM »
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wah wah wah kaya baat hai Prateek ji.. bahoot khoob likha hai apne..
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«Reply #21 on: November 26, 2008, 05:33:34 AM »
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Bahut Khoob Ghayel Ji

Maut ka intezaar may ne kiya aur tumne kiya
Maut tumhe bhi na aayee aur na hume maut aayee
Maut ne tum se aur hum se dono se ki bewafai
Baat baraabar hain, baat mukhtasar hain.
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«Reply #22 on: November 26, 2008, 05:39:51 AM »
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bahoot khoob rajesh ji
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«Reply #23 on: November 26, 2008, 05:57:37 AM »
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Thanx Pooja Ji
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«Reply #24 on: November 26, 2008, 08:50:05 AM »
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Quote from: Rajesh Harish on November 26, 2008, 05:33:34 AM
Bahut Khoob Ghayel Ji

Maut ka intezaar may ne kiya aur tumne kiya
Maut tumhe bhi na aayee aur na hume maut aayee
Maut ne tum se aur hum se dono se ki bewafai
Baat baraabar hain, baat mukhtasar hain.

Kya khoob kahi rajesh

Meri maut pe na aasoo bahaye koi, teri maut pe hasne laga zamana
Baat Barabar hain baat mukhtasar hain
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«Reply #25 on: November 28, 2008, 03:56:58 AM »
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Quote from: sajid_ghayel on November 26, 2008, 08:50:05 AM
Kya khoob kahi rajesh

Meri maut pe na aasoo bahaye koi, teri maut pe hasne laga zamana
Baat Barabar hain baat mukhtasar hain

Good one SG

Meri maut se khush hoye koi teri maut par na roye koi
Teri maut se na gharaye koi meri maut par jasan manaye koi
Baat Barabar hain baat mukhtasar hain
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«Reply #26 on: November 28, 2008, 07:44:13 AM »
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Na doli uthi teri, reh gaya main bhi kuwara
baat barabar hain baat mukhtasar
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«Reply #27 on: November 28, 2008, 07:46:56 AM »
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Quote from: sajid_ghayel on November 28, 2008, 07:44:13 AM
Na doli uthi teri, reh gaya main bhi kuwara
baat barabar hain baat mukhtasar

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«Reply #28 on: November 30, 2008, 08:56:12 AM »
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 :clap:excellent....baat barabar hain,, Thumbs UP bahut kaamal ka likha aapne......
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«Reply #29 on: November 30, 2008, 09:04:39 AM »
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Quote from: aamna_zoya on November 30, 2008, 08:56:12 AM
:clap:excellent....baat barabar hain,, Thumbs UP bahut kaamal ka likha aapne......
Thanks aamna aap bhi Kuch likhe ek hi line to likhni hain baki to "baat barabar hain, baat mukhtasar hain"
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