*Bacchein*

by Roja on September 16, 2009, 06:02:03 PM
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Yu ebadatgaah mein rone lage bacche,
Farsh chupchap ashqkon se dhone lage bacche

Bhook, Lachari, Gareebi baksh di usne,
Zindagi ke boj ko tone lage bacche

Shehar se aane lage hai ghaat mein behshi
Sunte hai ab gaon mein khone lage bacche

Ilm ke saudagaron ko bechkar bachpan
Waqt se pehle jawan hone lage bacche

Is badalte daur ki nazron se ho shankit
Dhur rishte-naton se hone lage bacche

Hotelon, kaar-kaanon mein guzare din,
Raat mein footpaat per sone lage bacche

Nith kusangathi aur vyaasan ke jaal mein faskar
Fhasal satyanaash ki bone lage bacche
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«Reply #1 on: September 17, 2009, 02:40:39 AM »
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Wah bahut khoob roja ji,really sad ,dil ko chu gayee aapke kavita Thumbs UP Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #2 on: September 17, 2009, 05:56:24 AM »
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Quote from: Roja on September 16, 2009, 06:02:03 PM

Yu ebadatgaah mein rone lage bacche,
Farsh chupchap ashqkon se dhone lage bacche

Bhook, Lachari, Gareebi baksh di usne,
Zindagi ke boj ko tone lage bacche

Shehar se aane lage hai ghaat mein behshi
Sunte hai ab gaon mein khone lage bacche

Ilm ke saudagaron ko bechkar bachpan
Waqt se pehle jawan hone lage bacche

Is badalte daur ki nazron se ho shankit
Dhur rishte-naton se hone lage bacche

Hotelon, kaar-kaanon mein guzare din,
Raat mein footpaat per sone lage bacche

Nith kusangathi aur vyaasan ke jaal mein faskar
Fhasal satyanaash ki bone lage bacche
KYA BAAT HAI ROJA JI......

KOMAL PHOOLON KI TARAHA CHEHERE HAI JINKE,
WO SAKHT KANNTON KI TARAHA DIKHNE LAGE HAI BACCHE.

KHELNE KOODNE KE DIN HAI JINKE,
WO DEKHO KAISE RO RAHE HAI BACCHE.

KHAA PEEKE MASTI MEIN RAHENE KE DIN HAI JINKE,
WO BHOOKHA PET KAISE SO RAHE HAI BACCHE.

JO BOJ IS UMAR MEIN UTTHA NAHIN PATEY,
WO BOJ KAISE JEL RAHE HAI BACCHE.

GAREEBI AUR LACHARI KA FAIDA UTTHA KE BEHSHI,
BAIL-BAKRION KI TARHA BECH RAHE HAI BACCHE.

JISM KE BAZAAR MEIN BHI AB TOH,
HAWASIYON KA SHIKAR BAN NE LAGE HAI BACCHE.

KAHETE HAI KAL KA DESH CHALAYENGEN AAJ KE BACCHE,
FIR SOCHO KAL KA DESH KAISE HOGA,
JAB AISI ZINDAGI JEEPAYEGEN BACCHE.
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«Reply #3 on: September 17, 2009, 07:20:23 AM »
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Wah Cara ji aapne bhi bahut khoob likha. icon_thumleft Applause  Applause Applause  Applause:
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smardia
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«Reply #4 on: September 17, 2009, 08:08:19 AM »
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Rojaajee bahut he sateek...
aaj k sach se avgat karati....
dil ko chhone wali rachna hai aapki.... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Desh ka bhavishya hote hain bachche
Dil k bahut sachche hote hain bachche
Hote Umra k v tajoorbe k bahut kachche
Fayda utha lete hain uska kuchh luchche


Quote from: Roja on September 16, 2009, 06:02:03 PM

Yu ebadatgaah mein rone lage bacche,
Farsh chupchap ashqkon se dhone lage bacche

Bhook, Lachari, Gareebi baksh di usne,
Zindagi ke boj ko tone lage bacche

Shehar se aane lage hai ghaat mein behshi
Sunte hai ab gaon mein khone lage bacche

Ilm ke saudagaron ko bechkar bachpan
Waqt se pehle jawan hone lage bacche

Is badalte daur ki nazron se ho shankit
Dhur rishte-naton se hone lage bacche

Hotelon, kaar-kaanon mein guzare din,
Raat mein footpaat per sone lage bacche

Nith kusangathi aur vyaasan ke jaal mein faskar
Fhasal satyanaash ki bone lage bacche
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Talat
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«Reply #5 on: September 17, 2009, 12:38:37 PM »
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Bohot Khoob Roja dear  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley


Very nice contributions, Cara Ji and Surendra Ji icon_thumleft
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Pooja
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«Reply #6 on: September 17, 2009, 08:08:50 PM »
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Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley ek ek shabd samaj ki kadvi suchai ko darshata hua... kamaal@dhamaal.superbbb likha hai Roja....

Dil Khush ho gaya itani achi kavita parr kar aor utna he dar gaya samaj ki in kadavi suchai ko parr kar!!!!
 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Good creation dear!!!
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«Reply #7 on: September 19, 2009, 06:40:57 AM »
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Bahoot Bahoot Khoob ! Dil ka janjor kar rakh de ak aisa kalam likha hai bahoot Bahoot Khoob!
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Roja
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«Reply #8 on: October 02, 2009, 03:39:14 PM »
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Quote from: cara on September 17, 2009, 05:56:24 AM
KYA BAAT HAI ROJA JI......

KOMAL PHOOLON KI TARAHA CHEHERE HAI JINKE,
WO SAKHT KANNTON KI TARAHA DIKHNE LAGE HAI BACCHE.

KHELNE KOODNE KE DIN HAI JINKE,
WO DEKHO KAISE RO RAHE HAI BACCHE.

KHAA PEEKE MASTI MEIN RAHENE KE DIN HAI JINKE,
WO BHOOKHA PET KAISE SO RAHE HAI BACCHE.

JO BOJ IS UMAR MEIN UTTHA NAHIN PATEY,
WO BOJ KAISE JEL RAHE HAI BACCHE.

GAREEBI AUR LACHARI KA FAIDA UTTHA KE BEHSHI,
BAIL-BAKRION KI TARHA BECH RAHE HAI BACCHE.

JISM KE BAZAAR MEIN BHI AB TOH,
HAWASIYON KA SHIKAR BAN NE LAGE HAI BACCHE.

KAHETE HAI KAL KA DESH CHALAYENGEN AAJ KE BACCHE,
FIR SOCHO KAL KA DESH KAISE HOGA,
JAB AISI ZINDAGI JEEPAYEGEN BACCHE.


Wah Cara ji bahut khoob  Applause Applause
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«Reply #9 on: October 02, 2009, 03:40:11 PM »
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Quote from: smardia on September 17, 2009, 08:08:19 AM
Rojaajee bahut he sateek...
aaj k sach se avgat karati....
dil ko chhone wali rachna hai aapki.... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Desh ka bhavishya hote hain bachche
Dil k bahut sachche hote hain bachche
Hote Umra k v tajoorbe k bahut kachche
Fayda utha lete hain uska kuchh luchche

Bahut bahut shukriya Smardia ji... and aapne b bahut sahi likha hai
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«Reply #10 on: October 02, 2009, 03:40:43 PM »
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Quote from: madhuwesh on September 17, 2009, 07:20:23 AM
Wah Cara ji aapne bhi bahut khoob likha. icon_thumleft Applause  Applause Applause  Applause:

Thanks dear Madhu
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«Reply #11 on: October 02, 2009, 03:41:16 PM »
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Quote from: Celmira on September 17, 2009, 12:38:37 PM
Bohot Khoob Roja dear  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley


Very nice contributions, Cara Ji and Surendra Ji icon_thumleft

Thank you very much dear Talat
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Roja
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«Reply #12 on: October 02, 2009, 03:42:25 PM »
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Quote from: Pooja on September 17, 2009, 08:08:50 PM
Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley ek ek shabd samaj ki kadvi suchai ko darshata hua... kamaal@dhamaal.superbbb likha hai Roja....

Dil Khush ho gaya itani achi kavita parr kar aor utna he dar gaya samaj ki in kadavi suchai ko parr kar!!!!
 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Good creation dear!!!

Thanks for reading Pooja di
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«Reply #13 on: October 06, 2009, 01:31:45 PM »
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Quote from: Roja on September 16, 2009, 06:02:03 PM

Yu ebadatgaah mein rone lage bacche,
Farsh chupchap ashqkon se dhone lage bacche

Bhook, Lachari, Gareebi baksh di usne,
Zindagi ke boj ko tone lage bacche

Shehar se aane lage hai ghaat mein behshi
Sunte hai ab gaon mein khone lage bacche

Ilm ke saudagaron ko bechkar bachpan
Waqt se pehle jawan hone lage bacche

Is badalte daur ki nazron se ho shankit
Dhur rishte-naton se hone lage bacche

Hotelon, kaar-kaanon mein guzare din,
Raat mein footpaat per sone lage bacche

Nith kusangathi aur vyaasan ke jaal mein faskar
Fhasal satyanaash ki bone lage bacche


...freak dear...it just moved me away...such a good creation...keep writing...really loved and specailly this lines
..'ilm ke saudagaron...   ...jawaan hone lage bachche.."
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«Reply #14 on: October 06, 2009, 01:33:12 PM »
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...good one Cara and Smardia...you two gave good response to Roja...liked it too...keep writing...
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