*Bacchein* -Panna 2:Tanziya aur Tehreekbaksh Shayariyan

Roja

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«Reply #15 on: October 09, 2009, 04:41:38 PM »

Quote from: Just_Hate_Love on October 06, 2009, 01:31:45 PM

...freak dear...it just moved me away...such a good creation...keep writing...really loved and specailly this lines
..'ilm ke saudagaron... ...jawaan hone lage bachche.."

Thank you very much for reading me JHL


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Re: *Bacchein*

«Reply #16 on: October 12, 2009, 08:21:25 AM »

...you are always welcome... hello


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Re: *Bacchein*

«Reply #17 on: October 16, 2009, 09:39:56 AM »

Quote from: Roja on September 16, 2009, 06:02:03 PM

Yu ebadatgaah mein rone lage bacche,
Farsh chupchap ashqkon se dhone lage bacche

Bhook, Lachari, Gareebi baksh di usne,
Zindagi ke boj ko tone lage bacche

Shehar se aane lage hai ghaat mein behshi
Sunte hai ab gaon mein khone lage bacche

Ilm ke saudagaron ko bechkar bachpan
Waqt se pehle jawan hone lage bacche

Is badalte daur ki nazron se ho shankit
Dhur rishte-naton se hone lage bacche

Hotelon, kaar-kaanon mein guzare din,
Raat mein footpaat per sone lage bacche

Nith kusangathi aur vyaasan ke jaal mein faskar
Fhasal satyanaash ki bone lage bacche

Mashallah Bohat Achcha Likha Hai Aapne, Ek Sachchai Ko Chehra Diya Hai,.


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Re: *Bacchein*

«Reply #18 on: October 16, 2009, 08:00:06 PM »

har baar ki tarah is baar bhi tumhaari lekhni ka loha maan gaye roja...bahoooooooooot hi umda Applause


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Roja

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Re: *Bacchein*

«Reply #19 on: October 20, 2009, 03:02:22 AM »

Quote from: Azeem on October 16, 2009, 09:39:56 AM

Mashallah Bohat Achcha Likha Hai Aapne, Ek Sachchai Ko Chehra Diya Hai,.

Thank you dear Azeem for reading me


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Roja

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«Reply #20 on: October 20, 2009, 03:03:06 AM »

Quote from: bekarar on October 16, 2009, 08:00:06 PM

har baar ki tarah is baar bhi tumhaari lekhni ka loha maan gaye roja...bahoooooooooot hi umda Applause

Shukriya Bhaiya


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NETRAPAL

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Re: *Bacchein*

«Reply #21 on: December 08, 2009, 11:29:22 AM »

bahut khoob roja ji,

bahut achee vishay pe aapne likhaa hai hamare paas ek sahar se bhee do bachche laapta hai kai mahine ho gaye abhee tak pataa nahi hai....

Netra..


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Re: *Bacchein*

«Reply #22 on: December 08, 2009, 11:43:55 AM »

Halaate Hazra par mabni bahut mu-assar poety aapne share ki hai Roja Ji. Aaj ke hallat kitne badtar ho gaye hai, insani qadren kitni ghat gayee hain maloom hota hai. Shukriya aisi poetry share kare ke liye.


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