Baharain Aa Hi Jaayengi ...... !!!

by Talat on February 24, 2009, 06:06:54 PM
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Ye Shayari Positive Thoughts, Ek Aaas Ko Le Kar Likhi Hai...!!

Shayad Pasand Aaye...!!
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«Reply #1 on: February 24, 2009, 06:14:44 PM »
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 Applause Applause
Very good lines and good image Talat.... really good to read...

Dheere dheere marasim badh jayenge
Toote Hue Rishte bhi jud hi jayenge

Bahut sahi kaha...





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«Reply #2 on: February 24, 2009, 06:51:07 PM »
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Quote from: Celmira on February 24, 2009, 06:06:54 PM

Ye Shayari Positive Thoughts, Ek Aaas Ko Le Kar Likhi Hai...!!

Shayad Pasand Aaye...!!

Celmira ji mere paas alfaz nahin hain jin se main aap ko daad de sakoohn,its out of this world, alfaz dil main utter gai. Asghr Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #3 on: February 24, 2009, 06:58:32 PM »
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Bahut Bahut Khoob Dost..Bahut Hi Khoobsurat Aur Dil Ko Chunne Wale Baatein Kahin hai aapne..Har Ek ashaar Bahut Hi Meaningful aur Positive Feelings Ke Saath likhi gayi hai.. Applause Applause Applause Applause

kuch likhne ki koshish zaroor rahegi...
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«Reply #4 on: February 24, 2009, 09:12:34 PM »
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Bahut hi khoob Talat
 khushi huyee
 Mashallah se kafi umda hai

dad qubool ho



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«Reply #5 on: February 24, 2009, 10:12:08 PM »
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bahut he accha likha hai talat jee..
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«Reply #6 on: February 25, 2009, 08:46:47 AM »
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Bohat Khoob Talat... Clapping Smiley

De sath hamara koi to hum bhi sawar jayege
Tere jaise nahi tera saya nazar aayege

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«Reply #7 on: February 25, 2009, 09:15:23 AM »
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Bahoot bahoot khoob Talat sis Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #8 on: February 25, 2009, 09:27:01 AM »
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Beautifully written, talat di :D

mausam badal hi jaayega
baharein aa hi jayengi
phir ek nayi dastaan ki
shuruaat ho hi jayegi
nayi hawaein naye rang
naye sapne le hi ayengi
failaa kar nayi khushiyan
chun kar saare ghum
nayi ummeed de hi jaayengi
aa hi jayengi, bahaarein
aa hi jayengi..
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«Reply #9 on: February 25, 2009, 10:44:02 AM »
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After a long time read something from ur side,
& as always u writte wonderfull... Clapping Smiley  Clapping Smiley

Keep going Celmira dear,

Shally.
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«Reply #10 on: February 25, 2009, 11:21:50 AM »
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Talat jee,

namaste:

sab se pahle ek achchhi tehreer ke liye mere taraf se daad aur mubaaraq baad qubool keejiye.. mujhe aap ki yeh koshish achchhi lagii... sab se khaas baat hai aap ki shaayari me.n har sher ke dono misre(lines) me.n co-realation hona... aur yeh aap ki kaamyaabi hai.. Usual Smile lekin agar aap thoda sa radeef aur qaafiye ka khaayal kare.ngii to aap ke tehreer aur bhi nikhaar jaayegii...

dheere dheere marasim baDh hi jaaye.nge
TooTe hu'ye rishte bhi juD hi jaaye.nge

ab jaisi kii pahla sher, yahaa.n koii  qaafiya nahii.n. lekin aap ne aage ke shero.n me.n qaafiye a khayaal rakkha hai, agar aap shuru ke sher (matle) me.n yeh Khayaal rakhti to, aap ki tehreer aur bhi behtar lagti.. Usual Smile ummeed hai aap meri baato.n ko sakaartmak Dhangh hi le.ngi..

maine jo kaha woh mera khayaal hai, baaqi aap behtar jaan,ti hai.n Usual Smile

aap ki tehreer achchhi lagii, daad!
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«Reply #11 on: February 25, 2009, 12:28:38 PM »
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Quote from: Celmira on February 24, 2009, 06:06:54 PM

Ye Shayari Positive Thoughts, Ek Aaas Ko Le Kar Likhi Hai...!!

Shayad Pasand Aaye...!!

It,s lovely, Talat Bitia! I'm happy you wrote it!
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«Reply #12 on: February 25, 2009, 02:06:41 PM »
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Quote from: sanya310 on February 25, 2009, 09:27:01 AM
Beautifully written, talat di :D

mausam badal hi jaayega
baharein aa hi jayengi
phir ek nayi dastaan ki
shuruaat ho hi jayegi
nayi hawaein naye rang
naye sapne le hi ayengi
failaa kar nayi khushiyan
chun kar saare ghum
nayi ummeed de hi jaayengi
aa hi jayengi, bahaarein
aa hi jayengi..


Bahut Ache Sanya..Nice Addition By You Too.. Applause Applause
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«Reply #13 on: February 25, 2009, 02:14:15 PM »
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Waah waah waah Kya Khoob Likha Hai Talat Didi, Ek Ek Ashaar Mashallah Dil Choone Waale Hain,.

Bohat badhiya Nice One,.
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«Reply #14 on: February 25, 2009, 02:14:51 PM »
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Quote from: abdbundeli on February 25, 2009, 12:28:38 PM
It,s lovely, Talat Bitia! I'm happy you wrote it!
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Abd Bundeli Saheb ji..Mera Iss Baat se Shayad Koi Taaluk nahi par maine jab yeh Padha..aapne jis tarah se Talat Ko Address Kiya..Mujhe Behad khushi hui yaa yeh Kahoon ke Meri Aankhein Nam hui..Mujhe Iss Baat ka bahut garv hai ke aap Hum sab ke Beech Hai..Aap Sirf Bahut Ache Shayar Hi Nahi,Ek Bahut Khoobsurat Insaan Bhi Hai..MERI BHI EK CHOTI SI KHWAISH HAI,MAIN CHAHUNGA KE AAP MUJHE BHI BETA HI KAHA KARE..
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