Baharain Aa Hi Jaayengi ...... !!!

by Talat on February 24, 2009, 06:06:54 PM
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«Reply #15 on: February 25, 2009, 02:29:20 PM »
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Yeh TERA-MERA Ka Gaan Naa Jaane Hum Kab Tak Gayenge
Raahein Wahi Hai, Manzile Wahi Hai,
Bas Waqt Ke Saath Musafir Hi Badalte Jaayenge....

Kuch Tum Badlo, Kuch Hum Badle,
Kuch Tum Samjho, Kuch Hum Samjhe,
Kuch Tum Bhoolo, Kuch Hum Bhoole,
Toote Hue Rishte Phir Apne Aap hi Juudte Jayenge....

Kuch Gile-Shikwe Tumhe Bhi Hai,
Kuch Gile-Shikwe Humein Bhi Hai,
Aakhir Kab Tak Hum Dil Mein Yuhi,
Mail Liye Chalte Jaayenge....

Ghamand Ki Tez Hawa, Vair-Virodh Ki Yeh Kaali Raat,
Insaano Ki Pehchaan Ko Rond Rahi Hai,
Zara Soch, Aakhir Mein,
Tere-Mere Chehre Ke Rang Bhala Kya Reh Jaayenge....

Suraj Ki Pehli Kiran,Ek Nayi Umeed,
Ek Naya Din Lekar Aaati Hai,
Hum Sab Saath hai To Hum Ek Hai,
Varna Aane wale Kal Mein Sirf Apne Nishaan Hi Baaki Reh Jaayenge....

"KHWIASH" Yeh Na Bhool,Ke Jab Tak Hum Saans Lete Hai,
Jab Tak Hamara Wajood Hai,
Zindagi Ke Aakhri Kadam Par
Hum Sab Khaak Mein Hi Mil Jaayenge...
             
            ~~~~~ KHWAISH~~~~~~
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«Reply #16 on: February 25, 2009, 02:41:58 PM »
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Quote from: khwaish on February 25, 2009, 02:14:51 PM
Abd Bundeli Saheb ji..Mera Iss Baat se Shayad Koi Taaluk nahi par maine jab yeh Padha..aapne jis tarah se Talat Ko Address Kiya..Mujhe Behad khushi hui yaa yeh Khoon ke Meri Aankhein Nam hui..Mujhe Iss Baat ka bahut garv hai ke aap Hum sab ke Beech Hai..Aap Sirf Bahut Ache Shayar Hi Nahi,Ek Bahut Khoobsurat Insaan Bhi Hai..MERI BHI EK CHOTI SI KHWAISH HAI,MAIN CHAHUNGA KE AAP MUJHE BHI BETA HI KAHA KARE..
Waah meyrey beytey!
Kitnaa bhaagyawaan hoon mein; bayaan naheen kar saktaa! Khushee sey aankheyn nam ho gayeen hain! Chiranjeewee bhawa! I'm all the way blessed!
May HE keep you always fit & happy & prosperous, along with all your loved ones!
                - abd bundeli
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«Reply #17 on: February 25, 2009, 02:51:58 PM »
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Quote from: abdbundeli on February 25, 2009, 02:41:58 PM
Waah meyrey beytey!
Kitnaa bhaagyawaan hoon mein; bayaan naheen kar saktaa! Khushee sey aankheyn nam ho gayeen hain! Chiranjeewee bhawa! I'm all the way blessed!
May HE keep you always fit & happy & prosperous, along with all your loved ones!
                - abd bundeli

Teh Dil Se Aapka Shukriya Abd Bundeli Saheb Ji.
..Main Alfaazo Mein Keh Nahi Sakta,Mujhe kitni Khushi Hui..
WAHEGURU Zindagi Ke Har Kadam Par Aapke Ang-Sahai Ho..
Bahut Bahut Shukriya Jo Aapne Meri Baat Rakhi...Thankyou Sooo Much!!!!!
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«Reply #18 on: February 25, 2009, 03:06:18 PM »
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Quote from: khwaish on February 25, 2009, 02:51:58 PM
Teh Dil Se Aapka Shukriya Abd Bundeli Saheb Ji.
..Main Alfaazo Mein Keh Nahi Sakta,Mujhe kitni Khushi Hui..
WAHEGURU Zindagi Ke Har Kadam Par Aapke Ang-Sahai Ho..
Bahut Bahut Shukriya Jo Aapne Meri Baat Rakhi...Thankyou Sooo Much!!!!!
Mein bahut khush hoon! May HE bless you!
                         - abd bundeli
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«Reply #19 on: February 25, 2009, 03:18:06 PM »
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TALATJI Ati sunder sakaratmak vicharro se ot-prot aapki shayari....ek nayee AAS jaga rahi hai.... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
Quote from: Celmira on February 24, 2009, 06:06:54 PM

Ye Shayari Positive Thoughts, Ek Aaas Ko Le Kar Likhi Hai...!!

Shayad Pasand Aaye...!!
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«Reply #20 on: February 25, 2009, 07:27:39 PM »
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Quote from: Roja on February 24, 2009, 06:14:44 PM
Applause Applause
Very good lines and good image Talat.... really good to read...

Dheere dheere marasim badh jayenge
Toote Hue Rishte bhi jud hi jayenge

Bahut sahi kaha...







Thanks a lot Roja dear
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«Reply #21 on: February 25, 2009, 07:48:24 PM »
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Quote from: @kaash on February 24, 2009, 06:24:48 PM

waah waah Celmira(Talat) ji..... Applause Applause

har ashaar ek se badhkar ek hai... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

wasn't aware aap itna acha likhti hain..

very positive composition....


Thank You so much Kaash Ji for your appreciation...Thanks a lot for the compliment.
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«Reply #22 on: February 25, 2009, 09:38:58 PM »
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wah wah wah bahoot khoob Celmira and Khwaish ji!!! bahoot acha likha hai app dono ne... Good work, Good Creation!!
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«Reply #23 on: February 26, 2009, 01:58:30 AM »
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Quote from: khwaish on February 25, 2009, 02:29:20 PM
Yeh TERA-MERA Ka Gaan Naa Jaane Hum Kab Tak Gayenge
Raahein Wahi Hai, Manzile Wahi Hai,
Bas Waqt Ke Saath Musafir Hi Badalte Jaayenge....

Kuch Tum Badlo, Kuch Hum Badle,
Kuch Tum Samjho, Kuch Hum Samjhe,
Kuch Tum Bhoolo, Kuch Hum Bhoole,
Toote Hue Rishte Phir Apne Aap hi Juudte Jayenge....

Kuch Gile-Shikwe Tumhe Bhi Hai,
Kuch Gile-Shikwe Humein Bhi Hai,
Aakhir Kab Tak Hum Dil Mein Yuhi,
Mail Liye Chalte Jaayenge....

Ghamand Ki Tez Hawa, Vair-Virodh Ki Yeh Kaali Raat,
Insaano Ki Pehchaan Ko Rond Rahi Hai,
Zara Soch, Aakhir Mein,
Tere-Mere Chehre Ke Rang Bhala Kya Reh Jaayenge....

Suraj Ki Pehli Kiran,Ek Nayi Umeed,
Ek Naya Din Lekar Aaati Hai,
Hum Sab Saath hai To Hum Ek Hai,
Varna Aane wale Kal Mein Sirf Apne Nishaan Hi Baaki Reh Jaayenge....

"KHWIASH" Yeh Na Bhool,Ke Jab Tak Hum Saans Lete Hai,
Jab Tak Hamara Wajood Hai,
Zindagi Ke Aakhri Kadam Par
Hum Sab Khaak Mein Hi Mil Jaayenge...
             
            ~~~~~ KHWAISH~~~~~~
WAAH KHWAHISH JEE...
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«Reply #24 on: February 26, 2009, 02:50:54 AM »
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Quote from: sanya310 on February 25, 2009, 09:27:01 AM
Beautifully written, talat di :D

mausam badal hi jaayega
baharein aa hi jayengi
phir ek nayi dastaan ki
shuruaat ho hi jayegi
nayi hawaein naye rang
naye sapne le hi ayengi
failaa kar nayi khushiyan
chun kar saare ghum
nayi ummeed de hi jaayengi
aa hi jayengi, bahaarein
aa hi jayengi..


Wah saniya dear...
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«Reply #25 on: February 26, 2009, 02:53:03 AM »
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Quote from: khwaish on February 25, 2009, 02:29:20 PM
Yeh TERA-MERA Ka Gaan Naa Jaane Hum Kab Tak Gayenge
Raahein Wahi Hai, Manzile Wahi Hai,
Bas Waqt Ke Saath Musafir Hi Badalte Jaayenge....

Kuch Tum Badlo, Kuch Hum Badle,
Kuch Tum Samjho, Kuch Hum Samjhe,
Kuch Tum Bhoolo, Kuch Hum Bhoole,
Toote Hue Rishte Phir Apne Aap hi Juudte Jayenge....

Kuch Gile-Shikwe Tumhe Bhi Hai,
Kuch Gile-Shikwe Humein Bhi Hai,
Aakhir Kab Tak Hum Dil Mein Yuhi,
Mail Liye Chalte Jaayenge....

Ghamand Ki Tez Hawa, Vair-Virodh Ki Yeh Kaali Raat,
Insaano Ki Pehchaan Ko Rond Rahi Hai,
Zara Soch, Aakhir Mein,
Tere-Mere Chehre Ke Rang Bhala Kya Reh Jaayenge....

Suraj Ki Pehli Kiran,Ek Nayi Umeed,
Ek Naya Din Lekar Aaati Hai,
Hum Sab Saath hai To Hum Ek Hai,
Varna Aane wale Kal Mein Sirf Apne Nishaan Hi Baaki Reh Jaayenge....

"KHWIASH" Yeh Na Bhool,Ke Jab Tak Hum Saans Lete Hai,
Jab Tak Hamara Wajood Hai,
Zindagi Ke Aakhri Kadam Par
Hum Sab Khaak Mein Hi Mil Jaayenge...
             
            ~~~~~ KHWAISH~~~~~~

Aawsome ... Excellant  Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #26 on: February 26, 2009, 05:25:09 AM »
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Quote from: Pooja on February 25, 2009, 09:38:58 PM
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wah wah wah bahoot khoob Celmira and Khwaish ji!!! bahoot acha likha hai app dono ne... Good work, Good Creation!!

Bahut Bahut Shukriya Pooja..


Quote from: pandit on February 26, 2009, 01:58:30 AM
WAAH KHWAHISH JEE...


Thankyou So Much Panditji...


Quote from: Roja on February 26, 2009, 02:53:03 AM
Aawsome ... Excellant  Applause Applause Applause

Bahut Bahut Shukriya Roja...
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«Reply #27 on: February 26, 2009, 08:25:41 AM »
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Quote from: Asghr on February 24, 2009, 06:51:07 PM
Celmira ji mere paas alfaz nahin hain jin se main aap ko daad de sakoohn,its out of this world, alfaz dil main utter gai. Asghr Applause Applause Applause

Bohot bohot shukriya Asghr Ji, aapne is koshish ko saraha aur pasand kiya..Is izzat afzaai ka bohot shukriya.
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«Reply #28 on: February 26, 2009, 08:41:33 AM »
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Quote from: khwaish on February 24, 2009, 06:58:32 PM
Bahut Bahut Khoob Dost..Bahut Hi Khoobsurat Aur Dil Ko Chunne Wale Baatein Kahin hai aapne..Har Ek ashaar Bahut Hi Meaningful aur Positive Feelings Ke Saath likhi gayi hai.. Applause Applause Applause Applause

kuch likhne ki koshish zaroor rahegi...

Bohot bohot shukriya Dost Khwaish...aapka humesha mera hausla badhana mujhe bohot achcha lagta hai.....Bohot shukriya Dost.
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«Reply #29 on: February 26, 2009, 09:52:35 AM »
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 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Waah bohat khoob Celmira sis wonderfull lines...


Bohat khoob doston... Thumbs UP
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