Baharain Aa Hi Jaayengi ...... !!!

by Talat on February 24, 2009, 06:06:54 PM
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«Reply #30 on: February 26, 2009, 01:37:55 PM »
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Quote from: pandit on February 24, 2009, 10:12:08 PM
bahut he accha likha hai talat jee..



Thanks a lot Pandit Ji
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«Reply #31 on: February 26, 2009, 02:28:47 PM »
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Quote from: sajid_ghayel on February 25, 2009, 08:46:47 AM
Bohat Khoob Talat... Clapping Smiley

De sath hamara koi to hum bhi sawar jayege
Tere jaise nahi tera saya nazar aayege

-SG-

Shukriya Sajid Ji....aur dosti main saya ban ke nahin, do dost saath saath chalte hain...
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«Reply #32 on: February 26, 2009, 02:29:37 PM »
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Beautifuly written Talat...
No words left to appreciate.
Just WONDERFUL...
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«Reply #33 on: February 26, 2009, 05:52:05 PM »
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Quote from: salma786 on February 25, 2009, 09:15:23 AM
Bahoot bahoot khoob Talat sis Clapping Smiley



Thanks a lot Salma dear
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«Reply #34 on: February 27, 2009, 12:31:39 PM »
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Quote from: sanya310 on February 25, 2009, 09:27:01 AM
Beautifully written, talat di :D

mausam badal hi jaayega
baharein aa hi jayengi
phir ek nayi dastaan ki
shuruaat ho hi jayegi
nayi hawaein naye rang
naye sapne le hi ayengi
failaa kar nayi khushiyan
chun kar saare ghum
nayi ummeed de hi jaayengi
aa hi jayengi, bahaarein
aa hi jayengi..


Thanks a lot Nobi

Very beautiful lines from you....Aameen !
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«Reply #35 on: February 27, 2009, 12:32:49 PM »
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Quote from: k.shael on February 25, 2009, 10:44:02 AM
After a long time read something from ur side,
& as always u writte wonderfull... Clapping Smiley  Clapping Smiley

Keep going Celmira dear,

Shally.

Thank You so much Shally for reading and appreciating this work. Thanks dear...
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«Reply #36 on: February 27, 2009, 01:28:46 PM »
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Quote from: divyam on February 25, 2009, 11:21:50 AM
Talat jee,

namaste:

sab se pahle ek achchhi tehreer ke liye mere taraf se daad aur mubaaraq baad qubool keejiye.. mujhe aap ki yeh koshish achchhi lagii... sab se khaas baat hai aap ki shaayari me.n har sher ke dono misre(lines) me.n co-realation hona... aur yeh aap ki kaamyaabi hai.. Usual Smile lekin agar aap thoda sa radeef aur qaafiye ka khaayal kare.ngii to aap ke tehreer aur bhi nikhaar jaayegii...

dheere dheere marasim baDh hi jaaye.nge
TooTe hu'ye rishte bhi juD hi jaaye.nge

ab jaisi kii pahla sher, yahaa.n koii  qaafiya nahii.n. lekin aap ne aage ke shero.n me.n qaafiye a khayaal rakkha hai, agar aap shuru ke sher (matle) me.n yeh Khayaal rakhti to, aap ki tehreer aur bhi behtar lagti.. Usual Smile ummeed hai aap meri baato.n ko sakaartmak Dhangh hi le.ngi..

maine jo kaha woh mera khayaal hai, baaqi aap behtar jaan,ti hai.n Usual Smile

aap ki tehreer achchhi lagii, daad!

Mayank Ji,

Ye khushnaseebi hai meri ki mujhe aapse kuch seekhne ko mila hai....

Bohot bohot shukrguzar hoon aapki...aapse detail main is baare main baat karna chahti hoon...par behtra hai ki pehle un doston ko jawab de doon jinhone ne meri ghazal ko padha aur saraha Usual Smile

Talat
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«Reply #37 on: February 27, 2009, 01:36:53 PM »
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Quote from: abdbundeli on February 25, 2009, 12:28:38 PM
It,s lovely, Talat Bitia! I'm happy you wrote it!
                                   - abd bundeli
                               

Its my pleasure and honour to get an appreciation from you Babu Ji...Khuda aapka saaya humare sar pe humesha qaayam rakhe...aapko salamat rakhe.. {Ameen}.
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«Reply #38 on: February 27, 2009, 01:43:20 PM »
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Quote from: Jaanasheen on February 25, 2009, 02:14:15 PM
Waah waah waah Kya Khoob Likha Hai Talat Didi, Ek Ek Ashaar Mashallah Dil Choone Waale Hain,.

Bohat badhiya Nice One,.

Bohot bohot shukriya, Azeem
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«Reply #39 on: February 27, 2009, 02:40:22 PM »
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Quote from: Celmira on February 27, 2009, 01:36:53 PM
Its my pleasure and honour to get an appreciation from you Babu Ji...Khuda aapka saaya humare sar pe humesha qaayam rakhe...aapko salamat rakhe.. {Ameen}.
You're welcome! Thanks for your kind wishes!
                     - abd bundeli
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«Reply #40 on: March 02, 2009, 12:36:15 PM »
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Quote from: ANAAM on February 25, 2009, 03:18:06 PM
TALATJI Ati sunder sakaratmak vicharro se ot-prot aapki shayari....ek nayee AAS jaga rahi hai.... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Bohot bohot shukriya Anaam Ji..aapne padha aur saraha...
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«Reply #41 on: March 02, 2009, 12:36:57 PM »
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Quote from: Pooja on February 25, 2009, 09:38:58 PM
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wah wah wah bahoot khoob Celmira and Khwaish ji!!! bahoot acha likha hai app dono ne... Good work, Good Creation!!

Thanks a lot Pooja for the appreciation Usual Smile
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«Reply #42 on: March 02, 2009, 12:37:55 PM »
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Quote from: honeyrose on February 26, 2009, 09:52:35 AM
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Waah bohat khoob Celmira sis wonderfull lines...


Bohat khoob doston... Thumbs UP

Thanks a lot Honey Sis
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«Reply #43 on: March 02, 2009, 12:38:46 PM »
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Quote from: angel4u on February 26, 2009, 02:29:37 PM
Beautifuly written Talat...
No words left to appreciate.
Just WONDERFUL...

Thank you so much Angel Usual Smile
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«Reply #44 on: March 02, 2009, 12:39:20 PM »
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Quote from: khwaish on February 25, 2009, 02:29:20 PM
Yeh TERA-MERA Ka Gaan Naa Jaane Hum Kab Tak Gayenge
Raahein Wahi Hai, Manzile Wahi Hai,
Bas Waqt Ke Saath Musafir Hi Badalte Jaayenge....

Kuch Tum Badlo, Kuch Hum Badle,
Kuch Tum Samjho, Kuch Hum Samjhe,
Kuch Tum Bhoolo, Kuch Hum Bhoole,
Toote Hue Rishte Phir Apne Aap hi Juudte Jayenge....

Kuch Gile-Shikwe Tumhe Bhi Hai,
Kuch Gile-Shikwe Humein Bhi Hai,
Aakhir Kab Tak Hum Dil Mein Yuhi,
Mail Liye Chalte Jaayenge....

Ghamand Ki Tez Hawa, Vair-Virodh Ki Yeh Kaali Raat,
Insaano Ki Pehchaan Ko Rond Rahi Hai,
Zara Soch, Aakhir Mein,
Tere-Mere Chehre Ke Rang Bhala Kya Reh Jaayenge....

Suraj Ki Pehli Kiran,Ek Nayi Umeed,
Ek Naya Din Lekar Aaati Hai,
Hum Sab Saath hai To Hum Ek Hai,
Varna Aane wale Kal Mein Sirf Apne Nishaan Hi Baaki Reh Jaayenge....

"KHWIASH" Yeh Na Bhool,Ke Jab Tak Hum Saans Lete Hai,
Jab Tak Hamara Wajood Hai,
Zindagi Ke Aakhri Kadam Par
Hum Sab Khaak Mein Hi Mil Jaayenge...
             
            ~~~~~ KHWAISH~~~~~~

Badi sachchai hai aapki is shayari main Khwaish...Chaar din ki iss zindagi main bhi hum apni jhooti ana ki wajah se khud ko bhi takleef dete hain, aur doosron ko bhi....Kaash waqt rehte ye baat sab samajh saken.....!!

Bohot behtareen likha hai Dost  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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