**Bahaut dukh hota hai mujhe** by Rahim

by dead heart on February 26, 2010, 10:29:49 PM
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Pata nahin ke yeh kalam yeh section main dalna hai ya nahin...Main toh bas ek awaz dil ki, ek pukar dil ki, ek shikayat dil ki ponchana chahta hoon...Umeed hai pasand bhi ayegi aur meri awaz dil ko chooegi..

Main ek dukhi mann se kehta hoon ke aj ke halat ke hisab se dekha jaye toh Pakistani aur Musalman atangwadi samjhe jate hai...Yeh kalam har ek shariff Pakistani aur shariff Musalman ki awaz hai...Atleast yeh meri dil ki awaz hai...Yeh dil jo thak gaya hai giri hui nazron se dekha jana, thukraya jana, ilzam sehte sehte..

Yeh kalam ager apke dil tak ponchi ho toh next time ek Pakistani ko terrorist bulane se pehle, yeh kalam yaad kar lena...Next time ek musalman ko terrorist samajne se pehle, yeh kalam yaad kar lena...
Yeh kalam mere dil ki guzarish bhi hai, shikayat bhi hai, guhar bhi hai, dua bhi hai, arzoo bhi hai, cheek bhi hai...Pata nahin aur kya kya hai...

Ager kisi ko bhi achi nahin lagi ho ya dukh poncha ho, toh bada dil rakh 'Rahim' ko maaf kardena...


Bahaut dukh hota hai mujhe…

Atangwadi aur deshatgard bulaya jata hoon,
Kyun main ek insaan nahin samjha jata hoon,
Kya ek musalman hona ek gunaah hai?
Ager nahin; toh kyun aisi giri hui nazron se dekha jata hoon?
Bahaut dukh hota hai mujhe…

Mana ke meri mazhab ke kuch log galat kar rahe hai,
Par kyun hum saab galat samjhe jaa rahe hai?
Hum main bhi kuch aise hai jo aman aur shanti chahte hai,
Duniya walon ke tane sunn; ander hi ander marte jaa raha hoon,
Bahaut dukh hota hai mujhe…

Mere watan ko bhi aj kal galat nazron se dekha jata hai,
Halake uss main duniya bhar ki khubsoorati samayi hai,
Bas kuch zalimon ne yahan dehshat phelayi hai,
Bass unn chandd ki wajah se main barbad hua jaa raha hoon,
Bahaut dukh hota hai mujhe…

Ager who hume marr rahe hai toh hume bhi unhe marna chahiye,
Mager ehsaas hota hai ke Allah ne logon ko marne ke liye nahin banaya,
Ab toh bas uss parvardigar se yehi dua mangta hoon,
Ke mere watan aur mazhab; dono ko bacha le,
Phir se who izzat nawaz de jo humara haq hai,
Phir se mohobat fela de iss andheri duniya main,
Par tab tak,
Main ujaadta jaa raha hoon,
Dard main tadapta jaa raha hoon,
Ander hi ander toot’te jaa raha hoon,
Lekin haan jaise barson se saab karte aye hai,
Main bhi bardasht karte jaa raha hoon,
Sab sehte jaa raha hoon,
Mager sache; bhari; udaas; shikayat bhare dil se kehta hai ‘Rahim’,
Bahaut dukh hota hai mujhe…


~Rahim~
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«Reply #1 on: February 26, 2010, 10:52:42 PM »
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Rahim Bro,

Aapne bohot hassaas aur dil chuu lene waali nazm likhi hai.....Aap ki takleef jaaiz hai......Dehshatgardon ka koi mazhab nahin hota lekin chunki wo mazhab ka naam le kar, mazhab ki aad le kar fitna phailaate hain, zulm karte hain to isi wajah se na sirf wo particular mazhab badnaam hota hai balki uss mazhab ko belong karne waale maasoon log bhi suffer karte hain...Aaj kuch logon ki wajah se na-jaane kitne maasom logon ko dukh aur takleef uthani pad rahi hai...Bas dua hai Allah reham farmaaye aur chain-o-sukoon faraham kare, ameen.
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«Reply #2 on: February 27, 2010, 04:27:38 AM »
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WAH KYA BAAT HAI    RAHIM JI.......

KOI MAZHAB NAHI HOTA HAI AATANKWADI KA
IN KO DARZA MILA HI NAHI HAI INSAAN KA
NA SIKH HAI NA ISAYI NA HINDU HAI NA MUSALMAAN HAI
MAZHAB KE NAAM SE KHOON BAHANA INKA KAAM HAI YE TOH HAIWAAN HAI..
 
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«Reply #3 on: February 27, 2010, 08:46:15 AM »
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Rahim Bro aapne iss Nazm se ak sachai saamne laaai hai hai Jaisa Talat di ne bhi kaha ki Kisi ak ki saza sabko nahi deni chaiye...

Aur agar aaj dekha jaaye tho India mea bhi kuch aise log hai jo Dard bhasha ke naam par Galat baaton ka bakaan karte hai aur desh mea nafrat fehlaate hai....

Aur Jo bhi log Galat karte hai woh kisi bhi Mazhab ya darm ke nahi ho sakte aur Na hi woh Insaaniyat sabd se waakif hai aise Logo ki wajah se sabko aatankwaad kehna teek nahi.

My salute to Your Nazm Bhai... Bahooot Bahoot Bahoot Bahoot Khoob Likha hai .. Well done !
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«Reply #4 on: February 27, 2010, 09:05:14 AM »
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Rahim bhai aapke dard ko samajh sakti hoon.bahut dhuk hua aapke nazm padke.Talat ji ,Sophi ji Cara ji aap sabke baato mein sachai hai.Rahim bhai dil chota mat kar.allah sab teek kardega. sad11
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«Reply #5 on: February 27, 2010, 09:59:56 AM »
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Rahim , Dil Ko chunne Wale Jazbaat Hai Aapki iss Nazm Mein..Bahut Dard Hai isme..Iss Nazm Ko Main Ek Pukaar Ka Darja De sakta Hoon..Yeh Pukaar hai Unn Logon ke Liye Jo Mazhab Ka Naam Lekar Aatank Failaate Hai..Aur Ache-Bure Insaan Har Mazhab Mein Paaye Jaate Hai...

Insaan Galat Ho Sakta Hai Par kabhi uska mazhab Nahi!!!!!

Kuch Hi Din pehle,My Name Is Khan Movie Dekhi thi..Usme Ek Scene Dil ko Chu Gaya Tha..Uske Kuch Dialouges Yaad reh Gaye..Woh Likh raha Hoon..

Iss Duniya Mein Sirf Do Kisam Ke Insaan Hai

Ache Insaan Jo Acha Kaam Karte Hai

Aur Bure Insaan Jo Bura Kaam Karte Hai

Bas Yehi Fark hai Insaano mein Aur Koi Fark Nahi!!!!!!
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«Reply #6 on: February 27, 2010, 10:56:49 AM »
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Bahaut bahaut shukriya Talat di, Cara jee, Divya di, Madhu di aur Khwahish jee waqt dene ke liye...
Bahaut sahi kaha aap sabhi ne...
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«Reply #7 on: February 27, 2010, 09:00:01 PM »
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Bahut khoob rahiim ji kaafi gehrayi hai apki iss nazm mein,apka dukhi hona jayaz bhi hai agar har baar bina kisi matlab k koi kisi ko badnaam karega tou insaan aakhir kahan tak seh payega..galti koi kare aur bhare koi..jaisa ki celmira ji ne kaha gunehgaro ka koi mazhab nhi hota..usi trh hamein ya duniya mein kisi ko bhi kisi bhi mazhab aur uske logo pe ungliya uthane ka koi adhikar nhi hai...sab khuda k banaye bande hai tou khuda ko hi sahi galat ka faisla karne dena chahiye yu apas mein dooriya badhane se kisi ko kuch haasil nhi hoga...khair kehti rahi tou kehti jaungi..bahut hi umda peshaksh hai...Applause Applause
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«Reply #8 on: February 27, 2010, 10:26:41 PM »
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Shukriya Geet jee...Good thoughts as well!!!
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«Reply #9 on: February 28, 2010, 01:04:11 PM »
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Usual Smile
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«Reply #10 on: April 25, 2010, 01:15:25 PM »
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mere dost main kucch kahoonga toh lagega apne doston kii baaton ko dohra raha hoon
bas itna kehana hai kii tu musalmaan hai hai, ya pakistani hai , ya tu iraaq ya america ka hai isse mujhe koi matlab nahin mere liye toh mera chhota bhai........ i m frm india and i m a hindu,,,,aur mere liye dharm se upar insaaniyat hai .....toh mere dost kabhi kissii se milo toh apne pahle naam k saath milo jo sirf tumhaari pehchaan deta hai na kii dharm kiii
isliye hi main salil likhta hoon salil shukla nahin
mere bhai ho tum aur main bas itna kehna chahta hoon kii dilon main mohabbat rakho itna qaafi hai khud ko aur mulk ko badalne k liye .......inshallah hamaari aur tumhaari duayein kabool hongi
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«Reply #11 on: April 25, 2010, 01:49:06 PM »
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Bahaut shukriya Bhaijan...Bahaut sahi baat kehdi apne...
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«Reply #12 on: April 27, 2010, 11:07:49 AM »
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bahut khoob baat kahi apne sahil ji...
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«Reply #13 on: June 02, 2010, 08:25:05 PM »
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HUMAIN APNAY AP KO DEKHNA CHAIYE K HUM KON HAIN NA KISI PAR TOMAT LAGANA CHAIYE OK SAMMER FROM PAK
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«Reply #14 on: August 03, 2010, 05:34:36 AM »
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tumhari ek line mujhe thik nahi lagi ke tumne likha hai ke muslman hona gunah hai kya ? ye bat tum kisse puch rahe ho koun hote log jo is bat ka faisla karenge ke muslman hone gunah hai . aur ye to khusnasibi hai hamari jo humpe horahe hai sitam taki majburi ke halat me bhi hum rakh sake apne iman ko buland . aur imtehan unka hota hai jo iske layek hote hain hume to bas imtehan dena hai uske bad to khuda hai hi hamare liye.
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