Bande Hi mile sub kissi me bandagi nahi mili !!

by abdulqadeer on January 19, 2009, 10:22:04 AM
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ghazal ke isharoon ko samjah gaye to daad se nawaz dena !!

Dhondte rahe umra bhar manzil nahi mili !!
Charagon ki sarparasti me raushni nahi mili !!
Tera har zulm sar ankhoon pe utha lete !!
Manga  bahoth khuda se magar zindagi nahi mili !!

Muddath tak tere shaher me dhoondte rahe hum !!
Bande hi mile sub kissi me bandagi nahi mili !!

Umra bhar apne begunha hone ki saza kati humne !!
Gunha hoga jo mustaqbil ko maazi ki haqiqath nahi mili !!

Gali ke har nukkad pe maine maa-baap ki laash dekhi !!
Shayad kissi bete ko daulath-a- wasihath nahi mili !!

Kab tak khush bahali ki baten karke tassali doge !!
Aj bhi mere desh me kissi bhuke ko rooti nahi mili !!

Waqath ne hame  kuch is qadar badal diya !!
Aine hazaro dekhe  apni surath nahi mili !!

Aur un parindoon ki bagawath jaiz hai Qadeer !!
Jinhe raath guzarne apne hi paid ki shaaqen nahi mili !!

Qadeer Toopchi
From India !!
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«Reply #1 on: January 19, 2009, 10:27:43 AM »
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Waah Bhaijaan,.
waah,.
Subhan Allah,.

Bohat Hi Badhiya Hai.
Aapne To Haqeeqar Bayaan Kardi,.
Pehli Bar Mujhe Kisi Shayar Se Itni Mohabbat Hui Hai,.
May Allah Bless You,.

Khush Raho Aabaad raho,.
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«Reply #2 on: January 19, 2009, 11:16:00 AM »
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Quote from: Jaanasheen on January 19, 2009, 10:27:43 AM
Waah Bhaijaan,.
waah,.
Subhan Allah,.

Bohat Hi Badhiya Hai.
Aapne To Haqeeqar Bayaan Kardi,.
Pehli Bar Mujhe Kisi Shayar Se Itni Mohabbat Hui Hai,.
May Allah Bless You,.

Khush Raho Aabaad raho,.


Shukriya Mere Dost Tumne Itni Izzath dedi Ke Ap Qalam Ko Sunch Samajh ke Chalana Padega !! Tumhari ye Izzath Afza-e-ka Tahe dil se Shukriya Ada karta hon Azeem !!

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«Reply #3 on: January 19, 2009, 11:21:50 AM »
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Bahoot khoob abdul ji!
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«Reply #4 on: January 19, 2009, 11:29:09 AM »
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Little late aa, i sleep latenight,i woke kup late,i found u late, ifriend on u late, but.....I early receive, i receive SMS earyly, i miss earlly..... Good monring
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«Reply #5 on: January 19, 2009, 11:41:24 AM »
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Quote from: salma786 on January 19, 2009, 11:21:50 AM
Bahoot khoob abdul ji!
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«Reply #6 on: January 19, 2009, 11:49:56 AM »
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Quote from: salma786 on January 19, 2009, 11:21:50 AM
Bahoot khoob abdul ji!

Bahoth Bahoth shukriya Janab ap ne meri Ghazal ka apna waqath diya !!

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«Reply #7 on: January 19, 2009, 12:07:39 PM »
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Quote from: abdulqadeer on January 19, 2009, 11:16:00 AM
Shukriya Mere Dost Tumne Itni Izzath dedi Ke Ap Qalam Ko Sunch Samajh ke Chalana Padega !! Tumhari ye Izzath Afza-e-ka Tahe dil se Shukriya Ada karta hon Azeem !!

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Bhaijaan,.
Sharminda Kyun Karte Ho,.
Ye Hamaari Khushnaseebi Hai, Ke Hum Aap Jaise Bade Shayaron ke Beech Mein Hain,.
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«Reply #8 on: January 19, 2009, 12:45:02 PM »
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Quote from: Jaanasheen on January 19, 2009, 12:07:39 PM
Bhaijaan,.
Sharminda Kyun Karte Ho,.
Ye Hamaari Khushnaseebi Hai, Ke Hum Aap Jaise Bade Shayaron ke Beech Mein Hain,.

shukriya azeem ye apka badath pan hai jo ap hame itni izzath de rahe hain !!

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«Reply #9 on: January 19, 2009, 01:23:26 PM »
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Quote from: abdulqadeer on January 19, 2009, 10:22:04 AM
Dhondte rahe umra bhar manzil nahi mili !!
Charagon ki sarparasti me raushni nahi mili !!

Tera har zulm sar ankhoon pe utha lete !!
Manga  bahoth khuda se magar zindagi nahi mili !!

Muddath tak tere shaher me dhoondte rahe hum !!
Bande hi mile sub kissi me bandagi nahi mili !!

Umra bhar apne begunha hone ki saza kati humne !!
Gunha hoga jo mustaqbil ko maazi ki haqiqath nahi mili !!

Gali ke har nukkad pe maine maa-baap ki laash dekhi !!
Shayad kissi bete ko daulath ki wasihath nahi mili !!

Kab tak khush bahali ki baten karke tassali doge !!
Aj bhi mere desh me kissi bhuke rooti nahi mili !!

Waqath ne hame  kuch is qadar badal diya !!
Aine hazaro dekhe magar apni surath nahi mili !!

Aur un parindoon ki bagawath jaiz hai Qadeer !!
Jinhe raath guzarne apni hi paid ki shaaqen nahi mili !!

Qadeer Toopchi
From India !!
The thoughts have been very well executed! The poet appears to be struggling to find his rightful place in the society, in his beloved's heart, in the world at large and in the cosmos as well! Keep it up!
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«Reply #10 on: January 19, 2009, 02:13:49 PM »
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bahut khoob qadeer ji.........keep it up... Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #11 on: January 20, 2009, 03:34:26 AM »
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Quote from: abdbundeli on January 19, 2009, 01:23:26 PM
The thoughts have been very well executed! The poet appears to be struggling to find his rightful place in the society, in his beloved's heart, in the world at large and in the cosmos as well! Keep it up!
                    - abd bundeli


Bahoth bahoth shukriya janab yo india pe ap jaise senior aur eak majhle howe shayar ki agar daad mil jaye to qamayabi nazar ane lagti hai !! shukriya abd ji ke apne meri ghazal pe miyari nazar dali ahesan mand hain hum apke !! Allah hum sub ko khush rakhe !!

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«Reply #12 on: January 20, 2009, 04:26:48 AM »
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Quote from: fairy2633 on January 19, 2009, 02:13:49 PM
bahut khoob qadeer ji.........keep it up... Clapping Smiley

Shukriya Fairy Ji Apne Hamari Ghazal Ko Waqath Diya Janab !!

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«Reply #13 on: January 20, 2009, 04:28:59 AM »
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Bahut Khoob Qadeer Ji
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«Reply #14 on: January 20, 2009, 05:00:45 AM »
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Quote from: Rajesh Harish on January 20, 2009, 04:28:59 AM
Bahut Khoob Qadeer Ji

Bahoth Bahoth Shukriya Rajesh Ji apne ne meri Ghazal ko pada aur pasand kiya !!

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