Bande Hi mile sub kissi me bandagi nahi mili !!

by abdulqadeer on January 19, 2009, 10:22:04 AM
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«Reply #30 on: January 20, 2009, 01:50:15 PM »
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Quote from: abdulqadeer on January 19, 2009, 10:22:04 AM
ghazal ke isharoon ko samjah gaye to daad se nawaz dena !!

Dhondte rahe umra bhar manzil nahi mili !!
Charagon ki sarparasti me raushni nahi mili !!
Tera har zulm sar ankhoon pe utha lete !!
Manga  bahoth khuda se magar zindagi nahi mili !!

Muddath tak tere shaher me dhoondte rahe hum !!
Bande hi mile sub kissi me bandagi nahi mili !!

Umra bhar apne begunha hone ki saza kati humne !!
Gunha hoga jo mustaqbil ko maazi ki haqiqath nahi mili !!

Gali ke har nukkad pe maine maa-baap ki laash dekhi !!
Shayad kissi bete ko daulath-a- wasihath nahi mili !!

Kab tak khush bahali ki baten karke tassali doge !!
Aj bhi mere desh me kissi bhuke ko rooti nahi mili !!

Waqath ne hame  kuch is qadar badal diya !!
Aine hazaro dekhe magar apni surath nahi mili !!

Aur un parindoon ki bagawath jaiz hai Qadeer !!
Jinhe raath guzarne apne hi paid ki shaaqen nahi mili !!

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Tareef karne ke liye shabdon ki kami hai Qadeer Ji..

Aapne Bahut khoobsurti se aapne khayaalon ko baandha hai.. Bahut achhi rachna hai.. Likhte rahiyega.. Thumbs UP
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«Reply #31 on: January 20, 2009, 01:52:52 PM »
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Quote from: sajid_ghayel on January 20, 2009, 01:49:29 PM
Qadeer khud ko rok nahi paya aur kisi tarah time nikal ke kuch likha hain bas yu samajhna aapne hi likha hain.....

Woh shehar bohat dhoondha, jaha thoda ho andhera
Jalti na ho koi, woh basti nahi mili !!

Izzat se uthe doli, khushiyo ki mile sej
Gareeb beti ke baap ko, aisi koi khushi nahi mili !!

Do roti ki hain ghulamai, do saso ki hain ghulami
Desh azad to hain mera, q muje azadi nahi mili !!

Woh kitna zaheen tha, tha ghar me sabka ladla
Mar gaya woh bhookhe pet, par naukri nahi mili !!

Q meri sune koi, GHAYEL me khas kya hain
Jab dhoondta raha khuda bhi, use bandagi nahi mili !!

                           -Sajid Ghayel-

Waah Waah... Bahut khoob likha hai aapne Sajid ji..

Sach kadwa hota hai lekin aapki lekhni kadwe sach ko bhi khoobsurati mein dhaal deti hai..

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«Reply #32 on: January 20, 2009, 02:04:14 PM »
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Masha'Allah,

Abdul Jee Kya La-Jawab Likha Hai Aapne.
Aapki Shayari Mein Aik Ajeeb Si Kashish Dikhi.
Aapki Jitni Bhi Tareef Ki Jaye Kam Hai!

Bas Aap Likhte Rahiye,
Khush Rahiye..
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«Reply #33 on: January 20, 2009, 04:43:16 PM »
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Quote from: sajid_ghayel on January 20, 2009, 01:49:29 PM
Qadeer khud ko rok nahi paya aur kisi tarah time nikal ke kuch likha hain bas yu samajhna aapne hi likha hain.....

Woh shehar bohat dhoondha, jaha thoda ho andhera
Jalti na ho koi, woh basti nahi mili !!

Izzat se uthe doli, khushiyo ki mile sej
Gareeb beti ke baap ko, aisi koi khushi nahi mili !!

Do roti ki hain ghulamai, do saso ki hain ghulami
Desh azad to hain mera, q muje azadi nahi mili !!

Woh kitna zaheen tha, tha ghar me sabka ladla
Mar gaya woh bhookhe pet, par naukri nahi mili !!

Q meri sune koi, GHAYEL me khas kya hain
Jab dhoondta raha khuda bhi, use bandagi nahi mili !!

                           -Sajid Ghayel-

Bahut Bahut Khoob Sajid Bhai..Aapne Bhi Khoob Likha Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #34 on: January 20, 2009, 04:54:48 PM »
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Ek Choti Si Koshish Meri Taraf Se Bhi..Naa Pasand Aaye To Gustaaki Maaf Kar Dena...

Har Khushi Ke Aankh Mein Aansuu Mile
Ek Hi Sikke Ke Do Pehlu Mile...

Zindagi Ko Jeene Ki Wajah Dhoond Raha Tha Woh,
Usse Har Mod Par Jo Mushkile Mile....

Yeh To Apne-Apne Haulso Ki Baat Hai,
Yahan To Suraj Se Bhidte Hue Jugnu Mile....

Uske Aankh se Aansuo Ka Karvaan Rukhta Bhi Kaise,
Aankhon mein uske jo Ghamo ke Samundar Mile....

Bhagaawat Koi Kar Bhi Nahi Sakta Apne Taqdeer Se,
Insaan To Chahhega Usse Duniya Ki Har Khushi Mile....


"khwaish" Aaj Ke Daur Mein
Insaan Insaan se mile To Kya Mile??
Baat To Tab Hai
Jab Dil Dil Se Mile....
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«Reply #35 on: January 20, 2009, 05:00:50 PM »
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bahoot khoob khwaish ji
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«Reply #36 on: January 20, 2009, 05:16:36 PM »
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Quote from: khwaish on January 20, 2009, 04:54:48 PM
Ek Choti Si Koshish Meri Taraf Se Bhi..Naa Pasand Aaye To Gustaaki Maaf Kar Dena...

Har Khushi Ke Aankh Mein Aansuu Mile
Ek Hi Sikke Ke Do Pehlu Mile...

Zindagi Ko Jeene Ki Wajah Dhoond Raha Tha Woh,
Usse Har Mod Par Jo Mushkile Mile....

Yeh To Apne-Apne Haulso Ki Baat Hai,
Yahan To Suraj Se Bhidte Hue Jugnu Mile....

Uske Aankh se Aansuo Ka Karvaan Rukhta Bhi Kaise,
Aankhon mein uske jo Ghamo ke Samundar Mile....

Bhagaawat Koi Kar Bhi Nahi Sakta Apne Taqdeer Se,
Insaan To Chahhega Usse Duniya Ki Har Khushi Mile....


"khwaish" Aaj Ke Daur Mein
Insaan Insaan se mile To Kya Mile??
Baat To Tab Hai
Jab Dil Dil Se Mile....


WAH WAH KHAWISH , KYA PYARI BAAT KAHI HAI AAP NE
Baat To Tab Hai
Jab Dil Dil Se Mile

BAHUT HI BADIYA...

JASBIR SINGH
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«Reply #37 on: January 21, 2009, 07:53:20 AM »
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Quote from: Mahiya on January 20, 2009, 01:50:15 PM
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Tareef karne ke liye shabdon ki kami hai Qadeer Ji..

Aapne Bahut khoobsurti se aapne khayaalon ko baandha hai.. Bahut achhi rachna hai.. Likhte rahiyega.. Thumbs UP

Bahot Bahot Shukriya Mahiya Ji appne hamari Ghazal ko waqath diya aur isko baqoobi samjha !! Apke Ahesan mandh hain hum !!

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«Reply #38 on: January 21, 2009, 08:27:19 AM »
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Quote from: sajid_ghayel on January 20, 2009, 01:25:34 PM
Pyare dost ki pyari si farmaish thi ke main yeh ghazal miss na karu aur Qurban jaoo us farmaish pe warna itni achchi peshkash shayed miss ho jati.
Bohat khoob Qadeer Jab aakhe ek manzar dekhti hain dimag me aur rooh jab us manzar ko mehsoos karti hain tab dil se jo aawaz nikalti hain kasam khuda ki ya to SHAYRI ho sakti hain ya DUA.

Ghayel tumhare is kalam ko dil se salam karta hain Qadeer  Clapping Smiley



Bahoth Bahoth Shukriya Sajid Apne Hamari Ghazal padke hamme Samman Diya !! Aur Shukriya janab apne is nacheez ko izzath bakshi allah hum sub ko zindagi ki rah me kamiyabi ata farma-a-Ameen Sum Ameen !!

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«Reply #39 on: January 21, 2009, 09:39:41 AM »
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Quote from: Jhuki Palkein on January 20, 2009, 02:04:14 PM
Masha'Allah,

Abdul Jee Kya La-Jawab Likha Hai Aapne.
Aapki Shayari Mein Aik Ajeeb Si Kashish Dikhi.
Aapki Jitni Bhi Tareef Ki Jaye Kam Hai!

Bas Aap Likhte Rahiye,
Khush Rahiye..


Bahoth Shukriya Janab Apne mere is kalam ko izaad bakshi aur hame hame dad se nawaza apke ahesan mandh hai hum bhai !!

Qadeer Toopchi
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«Reply #40 on: January 21, 2009, 12:53:39 PM »
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Quote from: sajid_ghayel on January 20, 2009, 01:49:29 PM
Qadeer khud ko rok nahi paya aur kisi tarah time nikal ke kuch likha hain bas yu samajhna aapne hi likha hain.....

Woh shehar bohat dhoondha, jaha thoda ho andhera
Jalti na ho koi, woh basti nahi mili !!

Izzat se uthe doli, khushiyo ki mile sej
Gareeb beti ke baap ko, aisi koi khushi nahi mili !!

Do roti ki hain ghulamai, do saso ki hain ghulami
Desh azad to hain mera, q muje azadi nahi mili !!

Woh kitna zaheen tha, tha ghar me sabka ladla
Mar gaya woh bhookhe pet, par naukri nahi mili !!

Q meri sune koi, GHAYEL me khas kya hain
Jab dhoondta raha khuda bhi, use bandagi nahi mili !!

                           -Sajid Ghayel-

Bahoth Umda Sajid Bhai Maza Agaya Kya Likha hai yaar !! Allah tumhe Khush rakhe !!

Qadeer Toopchi
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«Reply #41 on: January 21, 2009, 12:55:19 PM »
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Quote from: khwaish on January 20, 2009, 04:54:48 PM
Ek Choti Si Koshish Meri Taraf Se Bhi..Naa Pasand Aaye To Gustaaki Maaf Kar Dena...

Har Khushi Ke Aankh Mein Aansuu Mile
Ek Hi Sikke Ke Do Pehlu Mile...

Zindagi Ko Jeene Ki Wajah Dhoond Raha Tha Woh,
Usse Har Mod Par Jo Mushkile Mile....

Yeh To Apne-Apne Haulso Ki Baat Hai,
Yahan To Suraj Se Bhidte Hue Jugnu Mile....

Uske Aankh se Aansuo Ka Karvaan Rukhta Bhi Kaise,
Aankhon mein uske jo Ghamo ke Samundar Mile....

Bhagaawat Koi Kar Bhi Nahi Sakta Apne Taqdeer Se,
Insaan To Chahhega Usse Duniya Ki Har Khushi Mile....


"khwaish" Aaj Ke Daur Mein
Insaan Insaan se mile To Kya Mile??
Baat To Tab Hai
Jab Dil Dil Se Mile....

Wah ji Wah Bahoth Badiya Peshkash Hamesha ki tarah !! Shukriya Janab Hamari Thread pe likhne ke liye !! Allah sub ko khush o qurram rakhe !! Ameen !!

Qadeer Toopchi
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«Reply #42 on: January 21, 2009, 01:03:23 PM »
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Quote from: sajid_ghayel on January 20, 2009, 01:49:29 PM
Qadeer khud ko rok nahi paya aur kisi tarah time nikal ke kuch likha hain bas yu samajhna aapne hi likha hain.....

Woh shehar bohat dhoondha, jaha thoda ho andhera
Jalti na ho koi, woh basti nahi mili !!

Izzat se uthe doli, khushiyo ki mile sej
Gareeb beti ke baap ko, aisi koi khushi nahi mili !!

Do roti ki hain ghulamai, do saso ki hain ghulami
Desh azad to hain mera, q muje azadi nahi mili !!

Woh kitna zaheen tha, tha ghar me sabka ladla
Mar gaya woh bhookhe pet, par naukri nahi mili !!

Q meri sune koi, GHAYEL me khas kya hain
Jab dhoondta raha khuda bhi, use bandagi nahi mili !!

                           -Sajid Ghayel-

Waah waah,.
Subhan Allah Bhai,.
Subhan Allah,.

Mujhe To Khushi Hai,.
Ke Hume Do Do Bade Bhai Mile Hain,.
Jo Itni Achchi Shayari Likhte Hain,.
Jo Dilon Ke Andar Ghuss Kar Hulchul Machaa Deti Hai,.

Nice One Sajid Bhai,.
And Andul Qadeer Bhai,.

May Alla Bless You,.
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Duniya Ka Ek Alag Hi Chehra Dekhaa Maine,.
Dekh Kar Bebasi Logon Ki, Ye Sochaa Maine,.

Sach Kaha Zamaane Ne Ke Duniya Ne Aasmaaan Ko Choo Liya,.
Shayad Isliye Dilon Ko, Taaron Ki Tarah Toot-te Dekhaa Maine,.

Sach Hai, Ke Duniya Ne Tarrakhi Kar Li "Azeem,.
Shayad Isliye Mohabbat Ko, Mit-te Dekhaa Maine,.

Bijli Ki Ab Kisi Ko Bhi Pareshaani Nahi Yahaan,.
Nafraton Ki Aag Se, Gharon Ko, Sulag-te Dekhaa Maine,.

Wo Daur Hi Kitna Pyaara Tha "Azeem, Jab Duniya Peeche Thi,.
Is Daur Mein, Bhai Ko, Bhai Ka Dushman Ban-te Dekhaa Maine,.

Bhale Aaj Duniya Mein Kami Nahi Paison Ki "Azeem,.
Magar Jagaah Jagaah, Insaanon Ko Bhook Se Mar-te Dekhaa Maine,.

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