Bande Hi mile sub kissi me bandagi nahi mili !!

by abdulqadeer on January 19, 2009, 10:22:04 AM
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«Reply #60 on: January 22, 2009, 03:26:15 AM »
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Quote from: Jaanasheen on January 21, 2009, 01:29:34 PM
Duniya Ka Ek Alag Hi Chehra Dekhaa Maine,.
Dekh Kar Bebasi Logon Ki, Ye Sochaa Maine,.

Sach Kaha Zamaane Ne Ke Duniya Ne Aasmaaan Ko Choo Liya,.
Shayad Isliye Dilon Ko, Taaron Ki Tarah Toot-te Dekhaa Maine,.

Sach Hai, Ke Duniya Ne Tarrakhi Kar Li "Azeem,.
Shayad Isliye Mohabbat Ko, Mit-te Dekhaa Maine,.

Bijli Ki Ab Kisi Ko Bhi Pareshaani Nahi Yahaan,.
Nafraton Ki Aag Se, Gharon Ko, Sulag-te Dekhaa Maine,.

Wo Daur Hi Kitna Pyaara Tha "Azeem, Jab Duniya Peeche Thi,.
Is Daur Mein, Bhai Ko, Bhai Ka Dushman Ban-te Dekhaa Maine,.

Bhale Aaj Duniya Mein Kami Nahi Paison Ki "Azeem,.
Magar Jagaah Jagaah, Insaanon Ko Bhook Se Mar-te Dekhaa Maine,.

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Subhan Allah Chute Kya LIkha Hai mere bhai Kasam Khuda ki Maza Agaya Dost mere !!Maine Kaha Tha ke halath sher likhega to wazan apna ap paida ho jayega !! Kya Kahene is sher ke " Jaga jaga Insanoo ko bhook se marte dekha maine " wah wah azeem jiyo sher !!allah sub khush rakhe !!

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«Reply #61 on: January 22, 2009, 03:30:14 AM »
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Quote from: bekarar on January 21, 2009, 02:23:57 PM
bahoot khoob sajid.....lekin thodi padhai bhi kar le yaar ..warna exam me shayri likh ke aa gaya to fir.... Is it SO! Is it SO!
apart from jooke...bahoot achche se aapne silsile ko badhaya hai ab kuch meri taraf se bhi jhelna padega....
to arz kiya hai...

mai hairaan hum mere ehsaason ko hua kya hai
har baat pe kah deta hun, mujhe khabar nahi mili,

kai log jeete hain, marate hain andheron me
aisi bhi raaten hain, jinhe sahar nahi mili

manjar to bekarar ko bhi ye sab dekhe se lagate hain,
par hume qadeer aur sajid si, nazar nahi mili,


bahoth bahoth shukriya is nacheez ko itni izzath bakshi apne aur khushi howi ye jaan ke apne ghazal ki feeling mahesoos kiya ..
aur Wah Wah Bekarar ji Kya kahene apki is chuti ghazal ki "wah saab wah " Aisi bhi raath hai jise savera nahi mila " kya kahene is sher ki khud me kai sawal ko simte howe zamane se shikyat karta howa nazara ata ye sher !! maza agaya sahab may bless all of us !!

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«Reply #62 on: January 22, 2009, 03:33:59 AM »
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Quote from: sajid_ghayel on January 21, 2009, 03:03:16 PM
Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Arey meri jan agar exam me kuch nahi sooja to 4 ya 5 ghazal aaram se likh looga dont worry sabse pehle tujhe post karuga  DOH

Aur yaar tere shero me apna nam dekh kar dil khush ho gaya itni izzat mat de ghayel ke liye teri dosti hi bohat hain... lekin ab kuch na kuch to kehna padega par jawab me shayri mat karna warna muje bhi chain nahi milega bina jawab diye......

Shor hain har taraf bum ke dhamako ka 
Koi din aisa nahi jise diwali nahi mili !!

Khoon se lal hai badan mere desh ka
Koi din aisa nahi jise holi nahi mili

Safed chader pe lipti yeh kiski beva hain
Barso huye ise koi rangeen choli nahi mili

Matam hain bebasi hain sannata hain GHAYEL ke watan me
Kisi dar pe hame aaj koi rangoli nahi mili!!

                -SAJID GHAYEL-

Arre Wah wah mere dost kasam khuda ki maza agaya is ghazal me apki kya kahene yaara mere "kissi Dar pe aaj hame koi rangoli nahi mili" kya likha yaar tumhari ghazal ka nagina hai ye sher meri nazar me !! aur sajid sorry yaar maine tumhe is thread ko padne ke liye bolaya tha tumhari studies me disturb hogaya meri wajhe se !! abhi concentrate karo ok!! may allah Allah will success all of us in every pathof our life !! Ameen

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«Reply #63 on: January 22, 2009, 04:25:47 AM »
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Quote from: Pooja on January 21, 2009, 06:37:13 PM
bahoot khoob Qadeer ji, Bejarar ji, SG, Khwaish ji, HumTum  and Lil bro

Thanks A lot pooja Ji !!

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«Reply #64 on: January 22, 2009, 05:23:57 AM »
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Quote from: Prateek Mardia on January 21, 2009, 07:13:13 PM
bahut hi dumdaar peshkash hai aapki Qadeer bhai.
Ghayel ji, khwaish ji,jaansheen ji,aap sub ki kalam ki maujudgi ne in panno ko behtareen bana diya hai.bahut khoob likha hai sab ne,sabko haardik badhai.

Shukriya Prateek ji apne is nacheen ki ghazalko waqath diya aur isko izzath bakshi ahesan hai apka bhai !!

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«Reply #65 on: January 22, 2009, 05:38:10 AM »
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Quote from: Jaanasheen on January 21, 2009, 01:03:23 PM
Waah waah,.
Subhan Allah Bhai,.
Subhan Allah,.

Mujhe To Khushi Hai,.
Ke Hume Do Do Bade Bhai Mile Hain,.
Jo Itni Achchi Shayari Likhte Hain,.
Jo Dilon Ke Andar Ghuss Kar Hulchul Machaa Deti Hai,.

Nice One Sajid Bhai,.
And Andul Qadeer Bhai,.

May Alla Bless You,.

Shukriya Azeem Aur Kamaal ka likha tune maza agaya !! Alla Tumhe Khush rakhe Azeem meri duvaen hamesha ap ke sath hain !!

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«Reply #66 on: January 22, 2009, 06:41:03 AM »
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Quote from: bekarar on January 21, 2009, 02:04:04 PM
jitna likhun tareef me kam hoga....baat kahne ke aapke nirale andaaz ko mera salaam.....dad kabool karen qadeer sahab...

Shukriya Janab Izzath bakshi hai apne is nacheez ko likhne ko dil karta hai ap jaise qadardanoo ke bich !!

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«Reply #67 on: January 22, 2009, 07:20:05 AM »
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Quote from: HumTum on January 21, 2009, 03:20:20 PM
Janab Qadeer Ji.... Aap ki Ghazal hamare dil mein ghar kar gyi...kucch sachiyon se rubru karwa gyi ... Sach bahut umda likha hai apne ...  'teh dil se daad kabool kijiye!




Bahoth Bahoth Shukriya Janab Apne Is nacheez ko izzath bakshi mahefil me ahesan mand hain apke janab !! Allah Apko khush rakhe !!

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«Reply #68 on: January 22, 2009, 07:21:16 AM »
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Quote from: HumTum on January 21, 2009, 03:20:20 PM
Janab Qadeer Ji.... Aap ki Ghazal hamare dil mein ghar kar gyi...kucch sachiyon se rubru karwa gyi ... Sach bahut umda likha hai apne ...  'teh dil se daad kabool kijiye!



Jha apna sa koi nazar aaye woh mehfil nahin mili
Jise dunda kiye hum ta umr woh manzil nahin mili

Jiske dekhe se hi aa jaye mere zehn-o-dil ko qarar
Asie koi shonkh haseena, koi chanhal nahin mili

Chend roz se bechain hoon mein, preshaan hoon mein
Shiqwa nahin mila unse koi, Shikayaat nahin mili

Haan, Yun to milne ko sankadon mile hai "HumTum"
Magar sach ke kissi se apni tabiyaat nahin mili!!


HumTum

Wah Wah Wah Bahoth Qoob kya kahene is Ghazal Sahab Maza Agaya janab likhte raha yunhi !!

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«Reply #69 on: January 22, 2009, 09:00:49 AM »
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Bas Bhaijaan Aapke Kehne Par, Ek Koshish Ki Hai,,.
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«Reply #70 on: January 22, 2009, 09:25:10 AM »
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Quote from: Jaanasheen on January 22, 2009, 09:00:49 AM
Aameen,.
Bas Bhaijaan Aapke Kehne Par, Ek Koshish Ki Hai,,.
Hatt Ke,.

Meri baath maan ne ke liye shukriya chute bhai !! dekho tumhari kushish kamiyaab howi na likhte raha inshallah kamiyabi milega tumhe zaroor !! Allah tumhe izzath bakshe aur khush rakhe mere bhai !!

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«Reply #71 on: January 22, 2009, 01:04:55 PM »
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«Reply #72 on: January 24, 2009, 05:10:08 AM »
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Quote from: Jaanasheen on January 22, 2009, 01:04:55 PM
Aameen,.


Sum Ameen !! Allah Tumhe Khush rakhe aur abaad rakhe !!

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«Reply #73 on: January 25, 2009, 07:57:05 AM »
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Quote from: sajid_ghayel on January 21, 2009, 03:09:32 PM
Bohat shukriya Qadeer as i said hum to bas tumko follow kar rahe kuch likha kaha hain.....credit is all yours

Shukriya Janab Ye apka badath Pan hai jo nachiz ko apne kalamoo ka credit de rahe ho !!

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«Reply #74 on: January 25, 2009, 02:42:49 PM »
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Quote from: sajid_ghayel on January 21, 2009, 03:29:37 PM
Wah masha_allah kasam khuda ki maine aaj tak kisi thread me itne khoobsurat aur original yoinidans ke kalam ek sath nahi dekhe (Maybe i have missed better than this one..) Jo bhi likha ja raha hain dil se likha ja raha hain mere kalam ke alawa har kalam is thread me zabardast hainnnnnnnn veryyyyyyyy gooddddd HUM TUM

Shikwa nahi mila...... wah yar wahhhhhhhhhhhhhh

Sajid mujhe bura laga ke tum khud ke kalaam se mutmain nahi ho mere bhai aisa nahi kahete !! apne Masha allah bahoth umda likha hai !!

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