Bazaar me khade.....(Ghayel)

by sajid_ghayel on November 12, 2008, 07:48:04 AM
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Bazaar* me khade hain aao batein kare bazaar ki
Banake chehra sanjeeda guftugu kare bekaar ki

Jung aisi bhi hain dekhi kehne laga sipahi
Sarhad ki hifazat hum kare kaun hifazat kare parivaar ki

Subah ko baiju bavra sham hote hote ban jata hain majnu
Lanat bhejo aise aashiqo pe kya halat kardi pyaar ki

Itna bhi kya sajna sawarna ke shakl hi pehchan me na aaye
Sach poocho to yaro ab kaha woh lazzat deedar-e-yaar ki

Jo man me aaye likhta hain na adab na shaoor shayri ka
Aur us par GHAYEL ki himmat dekho mange dad apne har aashar ki

                                                -Sajid Ghayel-

* Shayer ne yaha duniya ki jagah bazaar lafz ka istemaal kiya hain
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«Reply #1 on: November 12, 2008, 12:31:04 PM »
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Bohat khoob Sajid ji... Applause
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«Reply #2 on: November 12, 2008, 01:26:10 PM »
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thank you honey
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bohat khoob Sajid g..!!!
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shukriya sadia jee
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«Reply #5 on: November 12, 2008, 03:03:06 PM »
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bahut accha likha hai Sajid jii
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Achcha likha hai Sajid Ji
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 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley good work SG
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thank you girls
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«Reply #9 on: November 13, 2008, 05:32:39 AM »
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spam4 kabra sab jag nirdhana dhanvanta na koi,
dhanvanta taye janiye jaape Raam naam dhan hoye.
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«Reply #10 on: November 13, 2008, 05:49:11 AM »
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jitne bhi raaz hai , raaz rahne do,
jitne bhi etraaz hai, etraaz rahnein do,
jab bhi dil se dil milna chahe ,
yeh na kahna janeman ki aaj rahne do......
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«Reply #11 on: November 13, 2008, 07:58:09 AM »
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beautiful lines arjun
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«Reply #12 on: November 13, 2008, 10:00:46 AM »
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Quote from: sajid_ghayel on November 12, 2008, 07:48:04 AM
Bazaar* me khade hain aao batein kare bazaar ki
Banake chehra sanjeeda guftugu kare bekaar ki

Jung aisi bhi hain dekhi kehne laga sipahi
Sarhad ki hifazat hum kare kaun hifazat kare parivaar ki

Subah ko baiju bavra sham hote hote ban jata hain majnu
Lanat bhejo aise aashiqo pe kya halat kardi pyaar ki

Itna bhi kya sajna sawarna ke shakl hi pehchan me na aaye
Sach poocho to yaro ab kaha woh lazzat deedar-e-yaar ki

Jo man me aaye likhta hain na adab na shaoor shayri ka
Aur us par GHAYEL ki himmat dekho mange dad apne har aashar ki

                                                -Sajid Ghayel-

* Shayer ne yaha duniya ki jagah bazaar lafz ka istemaal kiya hain



Sajid ji... Ki ho gaya aap nu??  DOH
Inna sohna likhoge toh hum jaise toh ek hi gazal baar baar padhte reh jaayege... Usual Smile
Sach.. har ek sheir kamaal ka likha hai..  Applause Bahut achha laga padh kar.. Thumbs UP
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«Reply #13 on: November 13, 2008, 10:26:53 AM »
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Quote from: Mahiya on November 13, 2008, 10:00:46 AM
Sajid ji... Ki ho gaya aap nu??  DOH
Inna sohna likhoge toh hum jaise toh ek hi gazal baar baar padhte reh jaayege... Usual Smile
Sach.. har ek sheir kamaal ka likha hai..  Applause Bahut achha laga padh kar.. Thumbs UP
Padhne wala aapki tarah sohna ho to ghazal khud ba khud sohni ho jati hain. Tareef ke liye bohat shukriya mahi.
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«Reply #14 on: November 14, 2008, 06:58:35 PM »
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Bahut achcha likha hai Sajid Ji
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