Bechaini...!!!

by Talat on March 19, 2010, 01:49:15 PM
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Aaj jaane kis mood main hoon, thodi bechaini si hai....Pehli line is poem ki zehan main aayi aur bas ek saans main poori poem likhti gayi. Ab kaisi ban padi hai, pata nahin.....
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«Reply #1 on: March 19, 2010, 02:00:08 PM »
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Bahut bahut Khoob Talat Dost!!!

Kuch Alag, kuch Hatkar.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #2 on: March 19, 2010, 02:58:32 PM »
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Thank You so much Khwaish Dost
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«Reply #3 on: March 19, 2010, 03:41:27 PM »
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Bahut hi nehtrin Celmira ji....ek alag hi andaaz mein likha aapne.....
Andaaz apna apna......bahut khoob.... Usual Smile  Applause  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #4 on: March 19, 2010, 03:55:56 PM »
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 Applause Applause Applause

bahut khoob talat ji really speach less
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«Reply #5 on: March 21, 2010, 07:21:16 AM »
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Wah Celmira ji,bhale ek saans mein likhi aapne par bahut hi badiyaa likhi,great work.excellent Hats off to you! Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Thumbs UP
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«Reply #6 on: March 21, 2010, 05:44:26 PM »
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Halaate-hazra par bahut achhi poem likhi Talat ji. Aise subject par likhna zara mushkil hota hai,magar aapne badi khoobsurti se aaj ke daur ki akkasi ki hai.
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«Reply #7 on: March 21, 2010, 05:50:05 PM »
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 Applause Applause Applause

bahut khoobsurat peshkash.aapke shabdon ke chayan aur andaaz-e-bayaan sadev dumdaar hote hai!!
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«Reply #8 on: March 21, 2010, 05:55:55 PM »
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wow behad khoobsurat rachana likhi hai Talat.. Good creation.
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«Reply #9 on: March 21, 2010, 06:10:27 PM »
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Dil ko maine goli maari
khoob nibhayi duniyadaari
fir bhee kuch nahi milta hai
yeh mun katra katra rista hai!


Sahi galat sub kar ke dekha
nahi badal paaya mein rekha
sub kuch haasil fir bhee muflis
kaise keh du chalta hai!!
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«Reply #10 on: March 22, 2010, 01:57:46 PM »
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Quote from: Nikhaar on March 19, 2010, 03:41:27 PM
Bahut hi nehtrin Celmira ji....ek alag hi andaaz mein likha aapne.....
Andaaz apna apna......bahut khoob.... Usual Smile  Applause  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Thank you so much dear....
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«Reply #11 on: March 23, 2010, 12:42:41 PM »
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Quote from: baadal102 on March 19, 2010, 03:55:56 PM
Applause Applause Applause

bahut khoob talat ji really speach less

Thanks a lot Baadal Ji for reading and appreciating....
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«Reply #12 on: March 23, 2010, 01:03:45 PM »
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BAHUT ACHHI LIKHI HAI CELMIRA JI.
 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
HAQIKAT BAYAAN KI HAI.
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«Reply #13 on: March 23, 2010, 06:34:03 PM »
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Quote from: madhuwesh on March 21, 2010, 07:21:16 AM
Wah Celmira ji,bhale ek saans mein likhi aapne par bahut hi badiyaa likhi,great work.excellent Hats off to you! Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Thumbs UP

Thanks so much for your appreciation dear Madhu Ji
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«Reply #14 on: March 23, 2010, 08:01:13 PM »
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bahot acha............. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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