Bechaini...!!!

by Talat on March 19, 2010, 01:49:15 PM
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«Reply #15 on: March 25, 2010, 08:05:13 AM »
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Quote from: riyaz106 on March 21, 2010, 05:44:26 PM
Halaate-hazra par bahut achhi poem likhi Talat ji. Aise subject par likhna zara mushkil hota hai,magar aapne badi khoobsurti se aaj ke daur ki akkasi ki hai.

Tah-e-dil se shukriya Riyaz ji, aapko ye peshkash pasand aayi...
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«Reply #16 on: March 25, 2010, 02:13:42 PM »
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Quote from: Prateek Mardia on March 21, 2010, 05:50:05 PM
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bahut khoobsurat peshkash.aapke shabdon ke chayan aur andaaz-e-bayaan sadev dumdaar hote hai!!





Bohot bohot shukriya Prateek Ji, ek muddat ke baad apne thread pe aapke comments dekh kar khushi hui.....Bohot shukriya iss hausla-afzaai ka....
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«Reply #17 on: April 23, 2010, 02:53:54 PM »
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Quote from: Pooja on March 21, 2010, 05:55:55 PM
wow behad khoobsurat rachana likhi hai Talat.. Good creation.

Thanks a lot Pooja Didi
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«Reply #18 on: April 23, 2010, 02:55:26 PM »
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Quote from: Prateek Mardia on March 21, 2010, 06:10:27 PM
Dil ko maine goli maari
khoob nibhayi duniyadaari
fir bhee kuch nahi milta hai
yeh mun katra katra rista hai!


Sahi galat sub kar ke dekha
nahi badal paaya mein rekha
sub kuch haasil fir bhee muflis
kaise keh du chalta hai!!



Bohot Khoon Prateek Ji, bohot gheri baat keh gaye in panktiyon main aap......
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«Reply #19 on: April 23, 2010, 03:10:16 PM »
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kya baat hai di ek naya andaaz hai aapki kalam ka magar achcha laga
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«Reply #20 on: May 12, 2010, 06:23:19 AM »
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kya baat hai ye andaaz pehle kabhi nahi daikha magr kya khoob hai, daad qubool keejiye bhut khoob


aslam
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«Reply #21 on: May 21, 2010, 12:36:29 AM »
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Bahut khoob
par in panktiyon mein shayaraana nazakat kam, vyangya zyaada prastut lagta hai

good its different

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