Beete Hue pal par Aansu Bahana, Ek Kamzor ki Nishaani hai

by khwaish on November 17, 2008, 03:18:18 PM
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BEETE HUE PAL PAR AANSU BAHANA TO,
EK KAMZOR KI NISHAANI HAI,
AANE WAL PAL KE LIYE,
APNE AAJ KO SAWAARNA,
HI ZINDEGAANI HAI...
                --KHWAISH--

Ghamo ki andhiyon mein
bahut dagmagaye honge tere yeh kadam
Ab Chalna hai to Muskurakar Chal...

Log Kehte Rahenge,Inka Kaam Hai Kehna,
Har Mushkil Halaat mein,apna sar utha kar chal...

Na Soch Kya Beeti Tere Dil Mein, Jab tu Tanha Tha,
Aaj Jo tere Saath Hai,Usse Apna kar chal....

Rishte Sirf Nibhte Hai woh, jinme pyaar mohabbat ho,
Dil se kabhi Vair,jalan, virodh ko Mita kar chal...

Sar Waha par Jhuka,jahan iss sar ki Koi Keemat ho,
Khuda ke Baad, Apne Maa-Baap Ke aage sar jhuka kar chal....

Zindagi mein har cheez ko paane ki aarzoo mein,
Insaan Kabhi Khud ki pehchaan bhi kho baitha hai,
"KHWAISH" kabhi khud ko kisi ke liye Luta kar Chal....

Kisi aur ke aansuo ko apni aankhon se baha kar To dekh,
Kisi Rote ko Kabhi Hasa kar Chal....

Patharo ki Chot se Darr kar,
Apne kadmo ko Peeche ki Taraf Naa Modna "KHWAISH"
Yeh pathar ki Chot hi Seedhi Bankar,
Tujhe Teri Manzil Tak Pahunchayegi,
Iss Dard Ko Apne Dil Mein Saja Kar Chal.....

"KHWAISH" koi shayar nahi, jo alfaazo se khelna jaane,
Jo dil mein hota hai, uss soch ko Kaagaz par utaar kar chal....
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«Reply #1 on: November 17, 2008, 04:22:46 PM »
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Har baar ki tarah.. Bahut hi alag, aur bahut hi behetereen peshkash Khwaish Ji..  Applause  Applause

Kamaal te dhamaal da likhiya hai...  icon_thumleft

Likhte Rahiyega... Usual Smile
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«Reply #2 on: November 17, 2008, 04:59:45 PM »
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 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

wah kay abaat hai, hamesha ki tarah bahoot khoob...khwaish ji
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«Reply #3 on: November 17, 2008, 05:33:04 PM »
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Beete hue pal ko chor pana hai mushkil
samet kar use kahin daba pana hai mushkil
insaan wo he jo chal sake in sabke bawjood
samjh kar bhi jo  na samjhe, usko samjhana hai mushkil

Mila hai jo dard, to kaha le jaaye use hum
her dard ho jaaye khatam, wo dawa pana hai mushkil
Beeta hue pal per ansoo aa he jaate hai
her waqat dunia se ansoo chupana hai mushkil
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«Reply #4 on: November 17, 2008, 06:03:22 PM »
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good poetry khwaish.. bohat achay  Applause
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«Reply #5 on: November 17, 2008, 07:08:03 PM »
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Quote from: Mahiya on November 17, 2008, 04:22:46 PM
Har baar ki tarah.. Bahut hi alag, aur bahut hi behetereen peshkash Khwaish Ji..  Applause  Applause

Kamaal te dhamaal da likhiya hai...  icon_thumleft

Likhte Rahiyega... Usual Smile

Thankyou so much mahiya..aapne padha aur phir saraha..
thanx a lot. icon_salut
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«Reply #6 on: November 17, 2008, 08:29:54 PM »
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as usual good addition pooja.... sunny
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«Reply #7 on: November 17, 2008, 08:57:49 PM »
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 Applause Applause
bahoot khoob khwahish...bro....
aur behtreen jawab pooja ji... Applause
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«Reply #8 on: November 17, 2008, 09:46:58 PM »
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bahoot bahoot shukaria SH and Bekarar ji!!
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«Reply #9 on: November 18, 2008, 05:37:35 AM »
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Bahut khoob khwaish ji
bahut hi sunder



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«Reply #10 on: November 18, 2008, 05:40:37 AM »
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pooja ji as usual
bahut hi umda likha hai aap ne



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«Reply #11 on: November 18, 2008, 05:45:09 AM »
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Quote from: baadal102 on November 18, 2008, 05:40:37 AM
pooja ji as usual
bahut hi umda likha hai aap ne



Baadal

shukaria baadal ji
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«Reply #12 on: November 18, 2008, 06:25:47 AM »
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Quote from: Pooja on November 17, 2008, 04:59:45 PM
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wah kay abaat hai, hamesha ki tarah bahoot khoob...khwaish ji

Bahut Bahut Shukriya Pooja.. icon_salut
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«Reply #13 on: November 18, 2008, 06:30:08 AM »
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Quote from: Pooja on November 17, 2008, 05:33:04 PM
Beete hue pal ko chor pana hai mushkil
samet kar use kahin daba pana hai mushkil
insaan wo he jo chal sake in sabke bawjood
samjh kar bhi jo  na samjhe, usko samjhana hai mushkil

Mila hai jo dard, to kaha le jaaye use hum
her dard ho jaaye khatam, wo dawa pana hai mushkil
Beeta hue pal per ansoo aa he jaate hai
her waqat dunia se ansoo chupana hai mushkil


Wah Wah Wah..Bahut Khoob Pooja.. Applause Applause Applause
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Quote from: sjid hadayat on November 17, 2008, 06:03:22 PM
good poetry khwaish.. bohat achay  Applause

Bahut Bahut Shukriya aapka sjid hadayat ji...
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