Beete Hue pal par Aansu Bahana, Ek Kamzor ki Nishaani hai

by khwaish on November 17, 2008, 03:18:18 PM
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«Reply #15 on: November 18, 2008, 07:02:11 AM »
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wonderfull khwaish ji  Applause
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«Reply #16 on: November 18, 2008, 07:21:41 AM »
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  Applause Applause Applausekhwaish ji!
Lovely, highly optimistic and inspiring!
                           - abd bundeli
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«Reply #17 on: November 18, 2008, 10:01:55 AM »
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bohat sanjeeda aur bohat umda kalam likha hain aapne khwaish  Clapping Smiley

Itna na jama kar dard dil me ke bhoj ban jaye
Hal-e-dil apna ghayel ko suna kar chal
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«Reply #18 on: November 18, 2008, 12:41:40 PM »
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Quote from: khwaish on November 17, 2008, 03:18:18 PM
BEETE HUE PAL PAR AANSU BAHANA TO,
EK KAMZOR KI NISHAANI HAI,
AANE WAL PAL KE LIYE,
APNE AAJ KO SAWAARNA,
HI ZINDEGAANI HAI...
                --KHWAISH--

Ghamo ki andhiyon mein
bahut dagmagaye honge tere yeh kadam
Ab Chalna hai to Muskurakar Chal...

Log Kehte Rahenge,Inka Kaam Hai Kehna,
Har Mushkil Halaat mein,apna sar utha kar chal...

Na Soch Kya Beeti Tere Dil Mein, Jab tu Tanha Tha,
Aaj Jo tere Saath Hai,Usse Apna kar chal....

Rishte Sirf Nibhte Hai woh, jinme pyaar mohabbat ho,
Dil se kabhi Vair,jalan, virodh ko Mita kar chal...

Sar Waha par Jhuka,jahan iss sar ki Koi Keemat ho,
Khuda ke Baad, Apne Maa-Baap Ke aage sar jhuka kar chal....

Zindagi mein har cheez ko paane ki aarzoo mein,
Insaan Kabhi Khud ki pehchaan bhi kho baitha hai,
"KHWAISH" kabhi khud ko kisi ke liye Luta kar Chal....

Kisi aur ke aansuo ko apni aankhon se baha kar To dekh,
Kisi Rote ko Kabhi Hasa kar Chal....

Patharo ki Chot se Darr kar,
Apne kadmo ko Peeche ki Taraf Naa Modna "KHWAISH"
Yeh pathar ki Chot hi Seedhi Bankar,
Tujhe Teri Manzil Tak Pahunchayegi,
Iss Dard Ko Apne Dil Mein Saja Kar Chal.....

"KHWAISH" koi shayar nahi, jo alfaazo se khelna jaane,
Jo dil mein hota hai, uss soch ko Kaagaz par utaar kar chal....



Dil khush ho gaya aapki iss shayari ko padh kar Khwaish ...Jitni tareef karun kam hai.....Bohot bohot bohot khoob dost Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #19 on: November 18, 2008, 12:57:11 PM »
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Quote from: Pooja on November 17, 2008, 05:33:04 PM
Beete hue pal ko chor pana hai mushkil
samet kar use kahin daba pana hai mushkil
insaan wo he jo chal sake in sabke bawjood
samjh kar bhi jo  na samjhe, usko samjhana hai mushkil

Mila hai jo dard, to kaha le jaaye use hum
her dard ho jaaye khatam, wo dawa pana hai mushkil
Beeta hue pal per ansoo aa he jaate hai
her waqat dunia se ansoo chupana hai mushkil


Beautiful reply Pooja Applause Applause
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«Reply #20 on: November 18, 2008, 01:17:43 PM »
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Beeti baaton ko bhula ke chalna hai
Haan ab hume muskura ke chalna hai
Kisne kiya galat, kaun tha sahi
In baaton se dil hata ke chalna hai

Dil toota tha aur dard bhi gehra tha
Paanv ke neeche jaise jalta sahra tha
Kaun tha saath, kaun reh gaya peeche
Kya ghum jo bina karavan ke chalna hai

In baaton se dil hata ke chalna hai

Soch main kahin ek toofaan hai daba
Ghum-o-ashk ka koi saamaan hai chupa
Raahat na deti hon dil ki jo yaadain
Un baaton ko kahin dafna ke chalna hai

In baaton se dil hata ke chalna hai

Liye dil main ek nayi subah ki aas
Ummeedon ki roshni ko liye ab saath
Waqt ke kaale andheron se guzarna hai
Haan ab hume muskura ke chalna hai

Beeti baaton ko bhula ke chalna hai
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«Reply #21 on: November 18, 2008, 03:35:48 PM »
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Bas ab ek jabeen kafi hain safar-e-zindagi ke liye
Yu to hazaro se mil mila ke chalna hain

                      -sg-
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«Reply #22 on: November 18, 2008, 03:42:42 PM »
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Quote from: kaushikbhawna008 on November 18, 2008, 07:02:11 AM
wonderfull khwaish ji  Applause

Thankyou so much Bhawna ji
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«Reply #23 on: November 18, 2008, 03:45:21 PM »
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Quote from: bekarar on November 17, 2008, 08:57:49 PM
Applause Applause
bahoot khoob khwahish...bro....
aur behtreen jawab pooja ji... Applause

Bahut Bahut Shukriya Sanjeev Bro...
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«Reply #24 on: November 18, 2008, 03:49:02 PM »
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Quote from: abdbundeli on November 18, 2008, 07:21:41 AM
  Applause Applause Applausekhwaish ji!
Lovely, highly optimistic and inspiring!
                           - abd bundeli

Bahut Bahut Shukriya AbdBundeli Saheb aapka..
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«Reply #25 on: November 18, 2008, 03:51:37 PM »
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Quote from: sajid_ghayel on November 18, 2008, 10:01:55 AM
bohat sanjeeda aur bohat umda kalam likha hain aapne khwaish  Clapping Smiley

Itna na jama kar dard dil me ke bhoj ban jaye
Hal-e-dil apna ghayel ko suna kar chal

Bahut Bahut Shukriya Sajid Saheb Aapka..aapke comments ka intezaar sa tha..

Aur Wah, Bahut acha likha aapne.. Applause
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«Reply #26 on: November 18, 2008, 03:58:00 PM »
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Quote from: Celmira on November 18, 2008, 12:41:40 PM
Dil khush ho gaya aapki iss shayari ko padh kar Khwaish ...Jitni tareef karun kam hai.....Bohot bohot bohot khoob dost Applause Applause Applause

Talat, aapne waqt nikala aur padha, wahi bahut hai mere liye

Aapke Haulse-Afsaai ke liye bahut bahut shukriya talat aapka..
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Quote from: sajid_ghayel on November 18, 2008, 03:35:48 PM
Bas ab ek jabeen kafi hain safar-e-zindagi ke liye
Yu to hazaro se mil mila ke chalna hain

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Bahut Bahut Khoob sajid saheb.. Applause Applause
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Quote from: baadal102 on November 18, 2008, 05:37:35 AM
Bahut khoob khwaish ji
bahut hi sunder



Baadal

Thankyou so much Baadalji..
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bahut bahut shukriya aap sab ka jinhone waqt nikala aur yahan par comments diye.. icon_salut
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