Beete Hue pal par Aansu Bahana, Ek Kamzor ki Nishaani hai

by khwaish on November 17, 2008, 03:18:18 PM
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«Reply #45 on: November 19, 2008, 04:32:32 PM »
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 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
bahoot bahoot khoob Celmira, SG and Abd ji!! sabhi ne ek se bar kar ek likha hai....
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sjid hadayat
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«Reply #46 on: November 19, 2008, 06:58:18 PM »
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Bohat khoob Celmira ji aur bandli ji...

Sajid Hadayat
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«Reply #47 on: November 20, 2008, 04:41:25 AM »
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Pooja ji/sjid hadayat ji!
Thanls a lot!
           - abd bundeli
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«Reply #48 on: November 20, 2008, 08:49:19 AM »
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Bohot bohot shukriya, Pooja, Sajid H ji
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«Reply #49 on: November 20, 2008, 08:50:10 AM »
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Quote from: abdbundeli on November 19, 2008, 02:15:36 PM
Yaad aataa hai baar-baar usee kaa cheyhraa:
Jisey bhulaaney kee koshish hazaar kartey hain!
Kabhi to aab jhalaktaa hai surkh aankhoun sey,
Kabhi gouhar hazaar saath-saath jhartey hain!!
                                  - abd bundeli


Bohot hi khoob Abd Ji
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«Reply #50 on: November 20, 2008, 10:06:46 AM »
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Quote from: Celmira on November 20, 2008, 08:50:10 AM
Bohot hi khoob Abd Ji
Celmira ji!
Thanks you liked the quartet!
           - abd bundeli
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«Reply #51 on: November 22, 2008, 08:41:08 AM »
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bahoot khoob khwaish ji Applause
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Rajesh Harish
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«Reply #52 on: November 22, 2008, 08:44:51 PM »
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Bahut hi badhiya likha hai Khwaish Ji aap ne
Pooja Ji jawaab bhi kamaal ka diya hai aap ne

Zindagi jeene ke liye hai usko achche se jeeo
Har ek uljhano ko suljha kar chal
Maut bhi agar aa jaye us se bhi ladh jaao
Na jeet sako to us ke humsafar ban kar chal
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«Reply #53 on: November 25, 2008, 08:04:44 AM »
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bahut accha likha hai khwaish  Applause
kuch der se aayi hoon par bahut accha laga aapka yeh kalaam
aur pooja di aapne bhi kaabil-e-tareef likha hai Applause
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Pooja
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«Reply #54 on: November 26, 2008, 05:19:13 AM »
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nice work Rajesh ji...

Thanks Diya
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pankshivam
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«Reply #55 on: November 26, 2008, 05:35:04 AM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Har labz yahan khuda ne kaha hai
Jo dil se utara hai, Vo labjo me bayan hai...

Bahoot khub Pooja ji
Bahoot khub Ghayal Sahab
Bahoot khub Khwaishji
Bahoot khub Celmira ji
 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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Pooja
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«Reply #56 on: November 26, 2008, 05:36:16 AM »
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bahoot bahoot shukaria Pank ji
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«Reply #57 on: November 26, 2008, 09:08:44 AM »
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Quote from: pankshivam on November 26, 2008, 05:35:04 AM
Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Har labz yahan khuda ne kaha hai
Jo dil se utara hai, Vo labjo me bayan hai...

Bahoot khub Pooja ji
Bahoot khub Ghayal Sahab
Bahoot khub Khwaishji
Bahoot khub Celmira ji
 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
Quote from: Pooja on November 19, 2008, 04:32:32 PM
Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
bahoot bahoot khoob Celmira, SG and Abd ji!! sabhi ne ek se bar kar ek likha hai....
Thank you very much Pooja and Shivam
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«Reply #58 on: November 26, 2008, 05:17:07 PM »
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Quote from: Rajesh Harish on November 22, 2008, 08:44:51 PM
Bahut hi badhiya likha hai Khwaish Ji aap ne
Pooja Ji jawaab bhi kamaal ka diya hai aap ne

Zindagi jeene ke liye hai usko achche se jeeo
Har ek uljhano ko suljha kar chal
Maut bhi agar aa jaye us se bhi ladh jaao
Na jeet sako to us ke humsafar ban kar chal


Khoob kaha Rajesh ji... acha hay....

Sajid Hadayat
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«Reply #59 on: November 26, 2008, 06:51:39 PM »
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Quote from: Rajesh Harish on November 22, 2008, 08:44:51 PM
Bahut hi badhiya likha hai Khwaish Ji aap ne
Pooja Ji jawaab bhi kamaal ka diya hai aap ne

Zindagi jeene ke liye hai usko achche se jeeo
Har ek uljhano ko suljha kar chal
Maut bhi agar aa jaye us se bhi ladh jaao
Na jeet sako to us ke humsafar ban kar chal


Kon chahta hai ki zindagi uljhati rahe
na chale bas koi, to koi kaya kare
bade dil se banaya ek ashiana humne
apna he, tinka tinka bikhra de, to koi kaya kare

laskh koshish kar lo, ansoo aa he jaate hai
dekh khush haal ashianein, dil roye to ankhia kaya kare
hai kamjori to yah kamjori he sahi
Kadvi zindagi ki suchai, jab tadpaye to Pooja kaya kare!!!
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