Beete Hue pal par Aansu Bahana, Ek Kamzor ki Nishaani hai

by khwaish on November 17, 2008, 03:18:18 PM
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«Reply #75 on: January 05, 2009, 06:11:28 PM »
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Quote from: khwaish on January 05, 2009, 05:19:40 PM
Bahut Bahut Khoob Pooja.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
Rajeshji,Jasbirji,sajid Hdayatji..aap sab ne bhi bahut Khoob likha.. Applause Applause

tHANKS KHWAISH


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«Reply #76 on: January 05, 2009, 06:12:49 PM »
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Quote from: khwaish on January 05, 2009, 05:38:38 PM
Sach hi kehte Hai Log, Yeh Duniya Ajab Hai,
Hai Yahan Par Kuch Nahi Bhi, Aur Sab Hai.....


Zindagi ki raahon par chalte-chalte thak sa gaya musafir,
Jaanta tah Manzil milegi zaroor,Dard ka Anth Nischint hai!!!
Magar Woh Anth kab hai......


Jism Toota Sa hai, Saans Phuli si hai,
Magar phir bhi Halaat se ladne ka Jazba hai,
Mitti ka Putla hai Insaan,Aur Dekho  Himmat Kya Gazab Hai.....


Khel Sukh-Dukh ka Chalta Rahega  "KHWAISH"
Azaadi Na Tab Thi, Na Ab Hai....


WAH KYA BAAT HAI KHWAISH, VERY NICE

JASBIR SINGH
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«Reply #77 on: January 05, 2009, 06:16:21 PM »
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WAH KYA BAAT HAI KHWAISH, VERY NICE

JASBIR SINGH

Thanx a lot Paaji!!!
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«Reply #78 on: January 06, 2009, 02:20:29 AM »
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Quote from: khwaish on January 05, 2009, 05:15:23 PM
Bahut Bahut Khoob Abdji..bahut acha likha hai aapne. Applause Applause
Thanks a lot, khwaish ji!
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«Reply #79 on: January 10, 2009, 09:40:01 PM »
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Bahut Bahut Khoob Pooja.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
Rajeshji,Jasbirji,sajid Hdayatji..aap sab ne bhi bahut Khoob likha.. Applause Applause

Bohat bohat shokria Khwaish ji...
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«Reply #80 on: January 13, 2009, 07:39:41 PM »
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Quote from: sjid hadayat on January 10, 2009, 09:40:01 PM
Bohat bohat shokria Khwaish ji...
Sajid Hadayat

Quote from: abdbundeli on January 06, 2009, 02:20:29 AM
Thanks a lot, khwaish ji!
         - abd bundeli


Shukriya Aap Sab Ka...
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«Reply #81 on: January 14, 2009, 03:58:49 AM »
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Quote from: khwaish on November 17, 2008, 03:18:18 PM
BEETE HUE PAL PAR AANSU BAHANA TO,
EK KAMZOR KI NISHAANI HAI,
AANE WAL PAL KE LIYE,
APNE AAJ KO SAWAARNA,
HI ZINDEGAANI HAI...
                --KHWAISH--

Ghamo ki andhiyon mein
bahut dagmagaye honge tere yeh kadam
Ab Chalna hai to Muskurakar Chal...

Log Kehte Rahenge,Inka Kaam Hai Kehna,
Har Mushkil Halaat mein,apna sar utha kar chal...

Na Soch Kya Beeti Tere Dil Mein, Jab tu Tanha Tha,
Aaj Jo tere Saath Hai,Usse Apna kar chal....

Rishte Sirf Nibhte Hai woh, jinme pyaar mohabbat ho,
Dil se kabhi Vair,jalan, virodh ko Mita kar chal...

Sar Waha par Jhuka,jahan iss sar ki Koi Keemat ho,
Khuda ke Baad, Apne Maa-Baap Ke aage sar jhuka kar chal....

Zindagi mein har cheez ko paane ki aarzoo mein,
Insaan Kabhi Khud ki pehchaan bhi kho baitha hai,
"KHWAISH" kabhi khud ko kisi ke liye Luta kar Chal....

Kisi aur ke aansuo ko apni aankhon se baha kar To dekh,
Kisi Rote ko Kabhi Hasa kar Chal....

Patharo ki Chot se Darr kar,
Apne kadmo ko Peeche ki Taraf Naa Modna "KHWAISH"
Yeh pathar ki Chot hi Seedhi Bankar,
Tujhe Teri Manzil Tak Pahunchayegi,
Iss Dard Ko Apne Dil Mein Saja Kar Chal.....

"KHWAISH" koi shayar nahi, jo alfaazo se khelna jaane,
Jo dil mein hota hai, uss soch ko Kaagaz par utaar kar chal....



Wah wah.... bahut khoob bahut khoob... Applause
Sorry for late comment Khwaish ji.
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«Reply #82 on: January 14, 2009, 04:00:30 AM »
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Quote from: Pooja on November 17, 2008, 05:33:04 PM
Beete hue pal ko chor pana hai mushkil
samet kar use kahin daba pana hai mushkil
insaan wo he jo chal sake in sabke bawjood
samjh kar bhi jo  na samjhe, usko samjhana hai mushkil

Mila hai jo dard, to kaha le jaaye use hum
her dard ho jaaye khatam, wo dawa pana hai mushkil
Beeta hue pal per ansoo aa he jaate hai
her waqat dunia se ansoo chupana hai mushkil


Wah isko kehte hai Pooja chaap... Bahut accha likha hai didi aapne.. Usual Smile
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«Reply #83 on: January 14, 2009, 04:04:59 AM »
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Quote from: Celmira on November 18, 2008, 01:17:43 PM


Beeti baaton ko bhula ke chalna hai
Haan ab hume muskura ke chalna hai
Kisne kiya galat, kaun tha sahi
In baaton se dil hata ke chalna hai

Dil toota tha aur dard bhi gehra tha
Paanv ke neeche jaise jalta sahra tha
Kaun tha saath, kaun reh gaya peeche
Kya ghum jo bina karavan ke chalna hai

In baaton se dil hata ke chalna hai

Soch main kahin ek toofaan hai daba
Ghum-o-ashk ka koi saamaan hai chupa
Raahat na deti hon dil ki jo yaadain
Un baaton ko kahin dafna ke chalna hai

In baaton se dil hata ke chalna hai

Liye dil main ek nayi subah ki aas
Ummeedon ki roshni ko liye ab saath
Waqt ke kaale andheron se guzarna hai
Haan ab hume muskura ke chalna hai

Beeti baaton ko bhula ke chalna hai

This is really very good Talat ....
Dilne dilse kaha WOW .....Very good.  Applause Applause
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«Reply #84 on: January 22, 2009, 01:20:42 PM »
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Quote from: pankshivam on November 26, 2008, 05:35:04 AM
Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Har labz yahan khuda ne kaha hai
Jo dil se utara hai, Vo labjo me bayan hai...

Bahoot khub Pooja ji
Bahoot khub Ghayal Sahab
Bahoot khub Khwaishji
Bahoot khub Celmira ji
 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Bohot bohot shukriya Pankshivam Ji
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«Reply #85 on: January 22, 2009, 01:23:20 PM »
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Bohot Khoob Rajesh Ji, Pooja, Sajid Ji, Jasbir Ji
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«Reply #86 on: January 22, 2009, 01:24:09 PM »
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Quote from: khwaish on January 05, 2009, 05:09:57 PM
Bahut Bahut Bahut Khoob Celmira....Kya Likha hai aapne..
bahut ache.. Applause Applause Applause Applause


Shukriya Khwaish aapko pasand aaya, dil khush ho gaya.
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«Reply #87 on: January 22, 2009, 01:25:30 PM »
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Quote from: khwaish on January 05, 2009, 05:38:38 PM
Sach hi kehte Hai Log, Yeh Duniya Ajab Hai,
Hai Yahan Par Kuch Nahi Bhi, Aur Sab Hai.....


Zindagi ki raahon par chalte-chalte thak sa gaya musafir,
Jaanta tah Manzil milegi zaroor,Dard ka Anth Nischint hai!!!
Magar Woh Anth kab hai......


Jism Toota Sa hai, Saans Phuli si hai,
Magar phir bhi Halaat se ladne ka Jazba hai,
Mitti ka Putla hai Insaan,Aur Dekho  Himmat Kya Gazab Hai.....


Khel Sukh-Dukh ka Chalta Rahega  "KHWAISH"
Azaadi Na Tab Thi, Na Ab Hai....


Bohot Khoob...ye lines ek insaan ki bechaini ko bakhoobi bayaan karti hain.....bohot khoob Khwaish
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«Reply #88 on: January 22, 2009, 01:26:24 PM »
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Quote from: Roja on January 14, 2009, 04:04:59 AM
This is really very good Talat ....
Dilne dilse kaha WOW .....Very good.  Applause Applause

Bohot bohot shukriya Roja dear
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«Reply #89 on: January 24, 2009, 04:06:48 AM »
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Quote from: Roja on January 14, 2009, 03:58:49 AM
Wah wah.... bahut khoob bahut khoob... Applause
Sorry for late comment Khwaish ji.

Bahut Bahut Shukriya Roja..aur Sorry Kis Baat ka..Aapne Padha aur saraha Yehi Bahut Hai..
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