Beete Hue pal par Aansu Bahana, Ek Kamzor ki Nishaani hai

by khwaish on November 17, 2008, 03:18:18 PM
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«Reply #90 on: January 24, 2009, 04:08:09 AM »
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Quote from: Celmira on January 22, 2009, 01:24:09 PM
Shukriya Khwaish aapko pasand aaya, dil khush ho gaya.

Bahut Bahut Shukriya Celmira..aap ne jo Itni Izzat Bakshi Hai..
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«Reply #91 on: January 24, 2009, 04:09:29 AM »
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Bohot Khoob...ye lines ek insaan ki bechaini ko bakhoobi bayaan karti hain.....bohot khoob Khwaish

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«Reply #92 on: February 01, 2009, 03:34:09 PM »
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Bohot Khoob Rajesh Ji, Pooja, Sajid Ji, Jasbir Ji

Bohat shokria Celmira ji...

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«Reply #93 on: February 02, 2009, 03:23:38 PM »
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Waah Waah Waah,.
Bohat Hi Achche Khwaaish Bhai,.
Very Very Nice,.

Har Baar Ki Taraj,.
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«Reply #94 on: February 07, 2009, 06:48:54 AM »
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Waah Waah Waah,.
Bohat Hi Achche Khwaaish Bhai,.
Very Very Nice,.

Har Baar Ki Taraj,.

Bahut Bahut Shukriya Azeem Bro..Aap Bhi Kuch Likhte To Chaar Chand Lag Jaate..
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«Reply #95 on: February 07, 2009, 07:10:13 AM »
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wah wah pooja apka jawab la jawab hai nice one again

beete hue pal jab na hum chhorh paate hain
laakh bhulna chahun yeh aur yaad aate hain
bheerh mein hun duniya ki, tanahayee mein, aankhon se chhalk jaate hain.

rakhta hum muskurahat chehre par, dard aankhon mein jhalak jaate hain.
roshan hai diya door kahin waadi mein "tanhaa"
log akela usse chhorh aate hain.

-----nitin
Quote from: Pooja on November 17, 2008, 05:33:04 PM
Beete hue pal ko chor pana hai mushkil
samet kar use kahin daba pana hai mushkil
insaan wo he jo chal sake in sabke bawjood
samjh kar bhi jo  na samjhe, usko samjhana hai mushkil

Mila hai jo dard, to kaha le jaaye use hum
her dard ho jaaye khatam, wo dawa pana hai mushkil
Beeta hue pal per ansoo aa he jaate hai
her waqat dunia se ansoo chupana hai mushkil
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«Reply #96 on: February 07, 2009, 07:13:28 AM »
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Thanks Rawat ji and Nice lines!!
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«Reply #97 on: February 07, 2009, 07:21:02 AM »
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shukriya pooja ji. bas apki dua hai
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«Reply #98 on: February 07, 2009, 07:30:04 AM »
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Great Sir,

Keep it up.

Really very nice.

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«Reply #99 on: February 12, 2009, 06:30:49 PM »
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Quote from: rawattanha on February 07, 2009, 07:10:13 AM
wah wah pooja apka jawab la jawab hai nice one again

beete hue pal jab na hum chhorh paate hain
laakh bhulna chahun yeh aur yaad aate hain
bheerh mein hun duniya ki, tanahayee mein, aankhon se chhalk jaate hain.

rakhta hum muskurahat chehre par, dard aankhon mein jhalak jaate hain.
roshan hai diya door kahin waadi mein "tanhaa"
log akela usse chhorh aate hain.

-----nitin

Bahut Khoob Nitinji..Bahut acha likha hai aapne. Applause Applause
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«Reply #100 on: February 13, 2009, 12:41:51 PM »
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aap sab log dua kijiyega ki meri joh khwahish hai jald poori ho.
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«Reply #101 on: March 13, 2009, 01:20:31 PM »
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Quote from: rawattanha on February 13, 2009, 12:41:51 PM
aap sab log dua kijiyega ki meri joh khwahish hai jald poori ho.

Dear Rawat Ji,

Aap ki her jaaiz Khawish  Allah Pak pori keray Aamin..

Duaa go
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«Reply #102 on: March 20, 2009, 05:07:46 PM »
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wah wah pooja apka jawab la jawab hai nice one again

beete hue pal jab na hum chhorh paate hain
laakh bhulna chahun yeh aur yaad aate hain
bheerh mein hun duniya ki, tanahayee mein, aankhon se chhalk jaate hain.

rakhta hum muskurahat chehre par, dard aankhon mein jhalak jaate hain.
roshan hai diya door kahin waadi mein "tanhaa"
log akela usse chhorh aate hain.

-----nitin


WAH RAWAT, VERY NICE



YAAD UNKI TANHA KAR JATI HAI
YEH SITAM HAR BAAR DHAATI HAI
KOI UNHEY HAMARA SANDESH PAHUCHA DEH
TANHAYI MEH HARR RAAT GUJAR JATI HAI



JASBIR SINGH
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«Reply #103 on: May 31, 2011, 10:57:59 AM »
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Quote from: prmchawla on February 07, 2009, 07:30:04 AM
Great Sir,

Keep it up.

Really very nice.

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PrmChawla Ji,Aapka Bahut bahut shukriya par aap plz mujhe Sir Naa Kahe..Utni Mujh mein Kaabliyat Nahi.. icon_flower
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