Besharam Duniya - Based on Real Incidence

by songwriter_123 on January 26, 2010, 08:07:00 AM
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«Reply #15 on: January 28, 2010, 04:32:58 PM »
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i  m not thinking about it yaar ,and will post soon .....Thanks
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«Reply #16 on: January 29, 2010, 02:19:54 AM »
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Very different topic and aapne jo sach hai wo bahut hi khoobsurati se kaha. Likhne wale kuch log nazuk se kehte hai.. aur kuch Tappad marke kehte hai. aur aapne tappad marke jo sach hai wo kaha. Bahut khoob and welcome to yoindia Amit ji  Applause Applause
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«Reply #17 on: January 29, 2010, 04:51:52 PM »
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Thanks a lot for liking it friends ,

Thanks for understanding what i mean to say by this poem, i know few friends doesnot like it because i used duniya word in my poem .....

I hav used that because its not the one case i have seen, these are happening in all over india now these peoples are thinking how to fool people and earn money.

Even i consider myself in this duniya , because i think if someone whom i dont need in need come to me and ask me 1000 rs money and he required urgency i wont give him even a single 100 rs, tats y i used besharam word but if i hav to spent on my clothes and on my gf etc i will spend 2000 or 3000.

This is the reality which we hav to accept ........

Anyway this is truth that some likes ur poem or some hate it , but i dont wanna fight bec i knw they hav their own reason to dislikes it.

So i guess we should close the matter here and will post a good poem " Khuda bolta hai :" soon


Thanks to all of u for ur nice feedback

Aamit
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«Reply #18 on: January 29, 2010, 04:56:16 PM »
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Thanks for understanding what i mean to say by this poem, i know few friends doesnot like it because i used duniya word in my poem .....

I hav used that because its not the one case i have seen, these are happening in all over india now these peoples are thinking how to fool people and earn money.

Amit ji jab kuch khayalaat hum mehfil mein pesh karte hai to sab ka reply positive hi rehna aisa nahi sochna. Kabhi negetive replies ko b aap positive se dekhna.

Jo aapne mehsoos kiya likha hai. aur jaisa aapne feel kiya hum sab ne b kabhi ya kahi kiya hai. so your emotions are true in someway.

Kuch hutke kuch chehre ko dikhlaya hai aapne shabash ji  Thumbs UP
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«Reply #19 on: January 29, 2010, 05:00:03 PM »
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Thanks malli and trust me i have taken their negative feedback as positive vibes .....

Thank u once agn for liking it

Aamit
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