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Roja

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Ghar main nahi tha khane ko beti gayi kamane ko
Ho bhura mehengayi ka aag lage zamane ko

Maa ko gam ki T.B. hai Baap ko Dhama ki Khassi thi
Katal kiya tha Bhai ne kal savere Fassi thi
Ghar main lash aaye toh paani nahi nahane ko..

Dekh akeli beti ko kuch goondon ne gher liya
Laaj ka moti loot liya kokh main nasur bho diya
Police ne pakda toh boli "Chal bazaru larki Thane ko"..

Band kamre main beti pe halaat aise guzere they
Behti Ganga dhone haath sare ke sare utare they
Andha Kanoon Nanga ho gaya Muh Kala karane ko..

Ijjat loota kar beti jab ghar main takki si aati hai
Mitti ka tel dal badan pe apni jaan gavati hai
Ghar main sab jal jate hai bemaut lage tikane ko..

Hey Upperwale.. ye kaisa anjaam diya Beti ko?
Yeh Beti ka kya gunah tha, aag main lipat jane ko?
Kehta hai zamana Betiyan gulab hote hai her aangan main khilne ko
Aaj is anjaam ka hai koyi jawab dene ko?


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aryan_mantri

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Re: Beti

«Reply #1 on: December 27, 2007, 03:51:08 AM »

mind blowing
u r really a amazing writer..


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honeyrose

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Re: Beti

«Reply #2 on: December 27, 2007, 06:56:12 AM »

Roja bohat achha likha hai appne.


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sagar_0777

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Re: Beti

«Reply #3 on: December 27, 2007, 07:13:38 AM »

yaar aap aeisa kyon likhte ho jis se ki kisi ki aankhe bhar aaye.
yaar aapne to rula hi diya dear.


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Pooja

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Re: Beti

«Reply #4 on: January 14, 2008, 08:56:44 PM »

too good Roja!! such mai apki kavita ne rula diya aor kuch waqat ke liye khamosh kar diya!!! bahoot hi ache tarike se, achi tarah se yah kavita apne likhi hai...

Kash dunia apki najar se yah sab dekh sakati ...


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Rajbir

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Re: Beti

«Reply #5 on: January 14, 2008, 09:03:47 PM »

Roja

Yeh thread maine kaise miss kar di sad5

Abhi abhi Pooja ne bataya !

Bahtareen khayal ! Bahut he reality se bharpoor !

Keep writing with this enthusiasm ! We need writers like you !


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sagar_0777

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Re: Beti

«Reply #6 on: January 15, 2008, 12:30:20 PM »

oy yaar ye maine pehle b ek baar padi hai,
yaar baar-2 rulate kyon ho,maine pehle b ye hi bola tha aaj fir ise padkar dil rone laga plzzzzzzzzzzz aiesi kavita mat likha kro yaar plzzzzzzzzzzz


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Rajbir

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Re: Beti

«Reply #7 on: January 15, 2008, 12:37:53 PM »

Sagar

Aisa he likha jaana chahiye jo hum sab ko jhanjhod kar rakh de !

Once again kudos to Roja for her brave effort !


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Pooja

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Re: Beti

«Reply #8 on: January 15, 2008, 03:07:13 PM »

sahi kaha veer ji, kal sari raat yah poem mere jahan mai rahi... her shabd haqiqat ban kar ankhon ke samne ek ek hadsa dikha raha tha..

Too good Roja, shabd nahi hai jo bata sake ki, kitani ander tak dil ko yah achi lagi hai!!!!


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BHONDU

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Re: Beti

«Reply #9 on: January 15, 2008, 05:11:00 PM »

roja ji bahut hi aacha likha hai aapne... per shayed ye kavita kisi kavita se prarit hai.. sryy per jub pad raha tha to humein aisa kyn laga jaise ye kavita kabhi humne padhi hai....bt.. nice one.

na pyaar mila,
na dulaar mila,
beti tujhe andha
ghar baar mila.
sare dukh tumko hai lene
ye kaisa tumhe adhikaar mila.
jahan betiyaan bhookhe rahe ,
kyn aisa tumhe tayouhaar mila.
kapde nhi tan dhakne ko,
tan na mila vyapaar mila.
paida hote hi chad jaati ankhen
kyn aisa tumhe sansaar mila.
her waqt kasoorvaar bane hum,
kyn ye gunaah her baar mila.
kyn ye gunaah her baar mila,.


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Pooja

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Re: Beti

«Reply #10 on: January 15, 2008, 05:15:55 PM »

wah Dost kavi ji!!! bahoot hi acha jawab likha hai apne.. simple words, deep meaning bahoot khoob!!!


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Re: Beti

«Reply #11 on: January 15, 2008, 05:31:03 PM »

Quote from: Pooja on January 15, 2008, 05:15:55 PM

wah Dost kavi ji!!! bahoot hi acha jawab likha hai apne.. simple words, deep meaning bahoot khoob!!!

than q ji....


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Pooja

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Re: Beti

«Reply #12 on: January 15, 2008, 05:39:31 PM »

Beti ki ankhon mai dekhu apna bachpan
Kar du main kaya kaya, sochein yah mera man
Her ek baat jo nikale munh se wo poori kar jaau
Man mai rahe na koi bhi armaan baki, us per wari main jaau

Kash samjh sakti yah dunia, Beti jaisa nahi hai koi
Payari si runjhun si gurria, kaise dukh de sakta hai koi
Ma –Baap ki ankhon ka tara, bhai ki dulari behna
Her ek ghar ki jo hai Izaat, aisa hai ek yah gahna....


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Re: Beti

«Reply #13 on: January 15, 2008, 05:57:19 PM »

Quote from: Pooja on January 15, 2008, 05:39:31 PM

bahut hi aacha likha hai aapne..
maa ne kaha beti se ,
beti kal main bhi beti thi.
mayke ko khusiyoon mein rakti thi.
sasuraal ke sare dukh leti thi.
kisi ki choti iccha per
kurbani main hi to deti thi.
khush hoti thi dekh chera maa ka
ki main unki hi beti thi.


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Pooja

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Re: Beti

«Reply #14 on: January 15, 2008, 05:58:37 PM »

wah kaya baat hai dost kavi ji!! Ma-beti aor dono beti bahoot khoob!!!


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