Beti

by Roja on December 27, 2007, 02:30:32 AM
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«Reply #15 on: January 15, 2008, 06:09:18 PM »
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Pooja, Vikram bhai

Bahut achcha laga aap dono ko yahan likhte dekh kar !

Roja ne pehle bhi bahut boldly aur vishyon par likha hai !

She is a tough and bold girl and won't hesitate to highlight the burning isuues.

Aap dona ne yahan likha .... keep going !
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«Reply #16 on: January 15, 2008, 06:10:05 PM »
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shukaria veer ji!!!
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«Reply #17 on: January 15, 2008, 06:44:54 PM »
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sukriya rajbir, aapne kuch nhi likha
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«Reply #18 on: January 16, 2008, 06:26:44 AM »
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Quote from: BHONDU on January 15, 2008, 05:11:00 PM
roja ji bahut hi aacha likha hai aapne... per shayed ye kavita kisi kavita se prarit hai.. sryy per jub pad raha tha to humein aisa kyn laga jaise ye kavita kabhi humne padhi hai....bt.. nice one.

na pyaar mila,
na dulaar mila,
beti tujhe andha
ghar baar mila.
sare dukh tumko hai lene
ye kaisa tumhe adhikaar mila.
jahan betiyaan bhookhe rahe ,
kyn aisa tumhe tayouhaar mila.
kapde nhi tan dhakne ko,
tan na mila vyapaar mila.
paida hote hi chad jaati ankhen
kyn aisa tumhe sansaar mila.
her waqt kasoorvaar bane hum,
kyn ye gunaah her baar mila.
kyn ye gunaah her baar mila,.


Kahi pada jaisa laga? pata nahi Bhondu ji. Mai toh pehli baar ye hi forum main likha kahi aur bi nahi likha..?
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«Reply #19 on: January 16, 2008, 06:30:28 AM »
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Quote from: Rajbir on January 15, 2008, 06:09:18 PM
Pooja, Vikram bhai

Bahut achcha laga aap dono ko yahan likhte dekh kar !

Roja ne pehle bhi bahut boldly aur vishyon par likha hai !

She is a tough and bold girl and won't hesitate to highlight the burning isuues.

Aap dona ne yahan likha .... keep going !

Raj ji mai bahut hesitate ki likhne ko. darr laga kaun kaise lega dil pe. Maine kahi aur forum pe yeh nahi likha hai. Yo per hi likha hai. Pata nahi kyu aisa laga bhondu ji ko k yeh unhe pada jaisa laga. Vaise yeh paper main aaya tha asal main un incidents ko dil pe rakhkar kaha tha yeh. Any way aap mujhe himmat dete hai saat dete hai isliye kuch likhne ki prayas rakhti hu.

Shukhriya once again bhai.
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«Reply #20 on: January 16, 2008, 06:54:20 AM »
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Roja this post which u have
written is simply so touching..

Kehte hai Beti ghar ki laxmi.
Phir bhi,Beti hothi hai ghar ka bojh..
Har dukho ko sahanashillata se sambhal teh huhe
aaghe chali hai Beti..
Ghar peh uski shaadi ke bojh..
Phir Zindagi bhar ka jeevan ka bojh
Bojh hi bojh likhe uski kismat..
Saath kasmo ke Vaado ke liye chali beti..
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«Reply #21 on: January 16, 2008, 06:59:53 AM »
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Roja, Its really very inspirational and good work by you.

Sometimes, words seems less to praise someone.. Usual Smile Well, I am in same condition after reading this post... Usual Smile


Very Very Nice Replies Bhondu ji, Pooja di and HoneyRose...
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«Reply #22 on: January 16, 2008, 05:12:58 PM »
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Thanks Shikha and good one Honeyrose!!!
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«Reply #23 on: January 17, 2008, 12:25:21 PM »
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Quote from: Roja on January 16, 2008, 06:26:44 AM
Kahi pada jaisa laga? pata nahi Bhondu ji. Mai toh pehli baar ye hi forum main likha kahi aur bi nahi likha..?   
srry roja ji per shayed meri momory ne kaha ki ye humne pehle aisa kahi suna hai.. per bahut hi aachi kosis thi her sher kahi na kahi kisi se milte hai... so dont mind .. lets write.
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«Reply #24 on: January 24, 2008, 02:02:55 AM »
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No Bhondu ji.. bura kaise lagega.. Aap ne hamara likha pada yehi mere liye bahut khushi ki baat hai.

Thanks Shikha di, Pooja di and Honey dear.
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«Reply #25 on: January 24, 2008, 02:07:29 AM »
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Jawani kab uski diwani hoti hai
Dulhan to ek raat main purani hoti hai
Jisse talab ho roj roj taze phoolon ki
Hasil usko kaliyon ki meharbani hoti hai
Zindagi jo guzaar de kanton per tanha
Hasil uski raatein suhani hoti hai..
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«Reply #26 on: January 24, 2008, 05:13:35 AM »
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Bohat khoobh Roja dear.. Usual Smile

Appne aasu chupa thi hai beti..
Rishtey banathi hai beti..
Ghar ka bojh uttha thi hai beti..
Ghar lagtha hai soona bina beti..
Jaise bina chidiyon ki subah..
Ghar ki laaj hoti hai beti..
Ghar ki khaliyan hoti hai beti
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«Reply #27 on: January 24, 2008, 02:04:37 PM »
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Quote from: Roja on January 24, 2008, 02:07:29 AM
Jawani kab uski diwani hoti hai
Dulhan to ek raat main purani hoti hai
Jisse talab ho roj roj taze phoolon ki
Hasil usko kaliyon ki meharbani hoti hai
Zindagi jo guzaar de kanton per tanha
Hasil uski raatein suhani hoti hai

roja ji shayed bahut aacha likha hai...
per srry mujhe matlab samjhana padega... mujhe thik se khuch samajh mein nhi aaya
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«Reply #28 on: May 16, 2009, 07:39:23 PM »
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roja dear
aaj apki ye rachna achanak post ke related link me mili....
kitna dard hai isme aur sacha varnan laga...aksar aisa hota hai.
bahut dil dahlane wala manjar likh dala hai...

beti.....
ashq ankho me kahi jam chale
saanse bhi uski tham tham chale
kaise jiye bhala befikari se
sath maa ke shabd sang rahe
ye na karna wo na karnaa
dunia walo s ebhi darnaa
yahi dimag me har dam chale
ruh me jaise uske gam pale
har ek baat pe hairan hai
sabki nasihato se pareshan hai
ghar ke sab kaam kaz karne ko
hath uske to hardam chale
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«Reply #29 on: May 20, 2009, 12:32:24 PM »
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Quote from: Rajbir on January 15, 2008, 06:09:18 PM
Pooja, Vikram bhai

Bahut achcha laga aap dono ko yahan likhte dekh kar !

Roja ne pehle bhi bahut boldly aur vishyon par likha hai !

She is a tough and bold girl and won't hesitate to highlight the burning isuues.

Aap dona ne yahan likha .... keep going !

Thanks Raj ji aapne meri shayri ko tarif ki. Thanks again..
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