Betiyaan.....!!!

by Talat on March 24, 2010, 01:34:55 PM
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This ghazal is for all the victims of physical abuse, at the hands of strangers,
friends, relatives, and sadly in many cases, by their own brothers and fathers.

My heart goes out for all those young girls and women
whose lives have been tormented and destroyed.
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«Reply #1 on: March 24, 2010, 01:54:13 PM »
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Bahut Bahut Aur bahut Khoob Talat Dost!!!!

Aapki Iss Soch,Aapki Iss Koshish Ko Mera Salaam!!!!! icon_salut

Yeh Sach hai,Har Jageh,Har Shehar Yeh Sab Ho raha Hai..Hum sab Humare Ird-Gird Yeh Hote dekhte hai,par Chup Reh jaate Hai, Iss Sach ko lafzon Mein Utaarna Hi Bahut Badi Baat Hai.....

Bahut Hi khoooooooooooooob Talat Dost!!

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«Reply #2 on: March 24, 2010, 06:21:32 PM »
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behtreen peshkash celmira ji Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #3 on: March 24, 2010, 06:27:14 PM »
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Quote from: khwaish on March 24, 2010, 01:54:13 PM
Bahut Bahut Aur bahut Khoob Talat Dost!!!!

Aapki Iss Soch,Aapki Iss Koshish Ko Mera Salaam!!!!! icon_salut

Yeh Sach hai,Har Jageh,Har Shehar Yeh Sab Ho raha Hai..Hum sab Humare Ird-Gird Yeh Hote dekhte hai,par Chup Reh jaate Hai, Iss Sach ko lafzon Mein Utaarna Hi Bahut Badi Baat Hai.....

Bahut Hi khoooooooooooooob Talat Dost!!

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Thanks a lot Khwaish Dost...bas kal se hi dil kuch dukha hua tha ek news dekh ke...aur us tarah ki news har roz padhne ko milti hai....isi dard aur gusse ko alfaaz main utaarne ki koshish ki hai.......Thanks dear friend for appreciating it.
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«Reply #4 on: March 24, 2010, 06:30:13 PM »
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none so good ever written or read

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«Reply #5 on: March 25, 2010, 08:06:05 AM »
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Quote from: adil bechain on March 24, 2010, 06:21:32 PM
behtreen peshkash celmira ji Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Bohot bohot shukriya Adil Ji iss hausla-afzaai ka.
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«Reply #6 on: March 25, 2010, 09:29:52 AM »
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 :icon_salut:Wah Celmira ji dil ko chu gayi aapke gazal,bahut dard aur khoobsurti se likhi aapne,mahesoos bhi kiya ladkiyon ke dard.excellent creation Hats off to you! Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Thumbs UP
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«Reply #7 on: March 25, 2010, 10:24:56 AM »
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Bahut behtreen ghazal pesh ki Talat ji aapne. Duniya ka adha hissa hote hue bhi ladkiyon ki wo qadr nahi hoti jiski wo haqdaar hain. Aur is daur mein to zyadatar log beti ki paidaaish se hi bachne ki koshish karte hain. Pata nahi kyon ye baat aise logon ki samajh mein kyon nahi aati ke agar ladki nahi hogi to phir ladke bhi kahan se paida honge. Ek bahut bade mas-ale par likhkar aapne bakhubi apni qalam ka kamaal dikhaya hai.
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«Reply #8 on: March 25, 2010, 11:21:10 AM »
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Simply Superb....!!! Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Bahut khoobsurti se aapne sachchai ko apni rachna me utaara hai... bahut pyaari kavita likhi hai aapne... aajkal to bas khilona banke reh gayi hai ladkiyan ... akele baahar nikalna mushkil ho jata hai unke liye .... aur main jis shshar me rehta hoon ... hamare desh ki raajdhaani hai.. yahaan ka mahaul to sabse ganda hai ... ladkiyon ke liye main isko duniya ka sabse ganda shahar maanta hoon... kabhi kabhi unki haalat dekh kar mera khoon khaul uthta hai... par mere ek k sochne se kya hoga ... par din wo dur nahi hai Talat ji jab aapki muraad poori hogi .. meri mooraad poori hogi.. aur ladkiyon k liye ek surakshit jahaan  ban payega... wo bekhauff ghum paayenge ... iske liye sabse pehle hame apni yuva pidi ki soch ko badalna padega ... din wo dur nahi Talat ji.... jaroor hoga ... jaroor hoga ...ek din jaroor hoga !!!
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«Reply #9 on: March 25, 2010, 02:14:50 PM »
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Quote from: thegrimreaper on March 24, 2010, 06:30:13 PM
none so good ever written or read

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Thank You so much Reaper Ji for this appreciation, Good to see you.....
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«Reply #10 on: March 29, 2010, 11:44:20 AM »
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bahut hi badhiya likha hai
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«Reply #11 on: March 29, 2010, 05:13:31 PM »
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Quote from: Shihab on March 24, 2010, 06:34:25 PM
Bahut Khub Talat Ji..... Applause

Bohot shukriya Shihab
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«Reply #12 on: March 29, 2010, 06:28:54 PM »
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Quote from: @kaash on March 25, 2010, 08:23:14 AM
Celmira ji aapko dil se badhai aisi behatreen prastuti par,aapne hamesha hi apni kavitaon me alag alag rang rakhe hain aur alag alag muddon par likha.
really a great poem  Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
ladki hoke bhi aapne ladkiyun par hone vale zulm aur jan kalyaan par khoob likha jispar aaj kal kum padhne ko milta hai,aapke is jazbe ko bhi salaam  icon_salut yun hi likhte rahiye  icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause

ek koshish kar rahe hain

sach hai aaj samaaj me ladkiyun ki izzat kahan hoti hai
aaj bhi ladkiyan shoshan ka shikaar hoti hai
kabhi bhroon hatya me hi maar di jati gairon kabhi apno ke dwara
vo chhali jati hai mansik santaap ke dwara
aaj bhi dahej hatya me aurat mari jati hai
aarakhchhan ka adhikaar pakar bhi nyaay se vanchit rah jati hai

Thanks a lot Kaash Ji for deeply analyzing this ghazal.....Thanks so much for your appreciation...

Aapne bhi bohot khoob likha hai iss topic pe Applause Applause Applause
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Quote from: madhuwesh on March 25, 2010, 09:29:52 AM
:icon_salut:Wah Celmira ji dil ko chu gayi aapke gazal,bahut dard aur khoobsurti se likhi aapne,mahesoos bhi kiya ladkiyon ke dard.excellent creation Hats off to you! Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Thumbs UP

Thanks a lot Madhu Ji for the appreciation......
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Quote from: riyaz106 on March 25, 2010, 10:24:56 AM
Bahut behtreen ghazal pesh ki Talat ji aapne. Duniya ka adha hissa hote hue bhi ladkiyon ki wo qadr nahi hoti jiski wo haqdaar hain. Aur is daur mein to zyadatar log beti ki paidaaish se hi bachne ki koshish karte hain. Pata nahi kyon ye baat aise logon ki samajh mein kyon nahi aati ke agar ladki nahi hogi to phir ladke bhi kahan se paida honge. Ek bahut bade mas-ale par likhkar aapne bakhubi apni qalam ka kamaal dikhaya hai.

Aap ka tah-e-dil se shukriya Riyaz Ji...bilkul theek kaha aapne......aapne ise padha aur saraha, bohot shukriya...
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