Betiyaan.....!!!

by Talat on March 24, 2010, 01:34:55 PM
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«Reply #15 on: April 23, 2010, 02:51:22 PM »
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Quote from: klaskar on March 25, 2010, 11:21:10 AM
Simply Superb....!!! Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Bahut khoobsurti se aapne sachchai ko apni rachna me utaara hai... bahut pyaari kavita likhi hai aapne... aajkal to bas khilona banke reh gayi hai ladkiyan ... akele baahar nikalna mushkil ho jata hai unke liye .... aur main jis shshar me rehta hoon ... hamare desh ki raajdhaani hai.. yahaan ka mahaul to sabse ganda hai ... ladkiyon ke liye main isko duniya ka sabse ganda shahar maanta hoon... kabhi kabhi unki haalat dekh kar mera khoon khaul uthta hai... par mere ek k sochne se kya hoga ... par din wo dur nahi hai Talat ji jab aapki muraad poori hogi .. meri mooraad poori hogi.. aur ladkiyon k liye ek surakshit jahaan  ban payega... wo bekhauff ghum paayenge ... iske liye sabse pehle hame apni yuva pidi ki soch ko badalna padega ... din wo dur nahi Talat ji.... jaroor hoga ... jaroor hoga ...ek din jaroor hoga !!!

Thank you so much Kapil Ji...aapne sahi kaha, aisa hi hota hai...Khuda se dua aapki baat sach ho jaaye aur sab betiyon ko amaan mile.....Bohot bohot shukriya, Kapil Ji
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«Reply #16 on: May 12, 2010, 06:32:39 AM »
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ek maayenekhaiez ghazal, eshsaas aur us par lafzo ko bakhoobi nibhaya hai aapne, khaas kar ke aakhir sher jisme dua ki arzi hai bhut hi acha laga, aapne ek bhut hi hassas topic ko bhut hi achay andaaz mai paish kia hai apni is shaandaar takhleeq ke liyn daad qubool keejiye hazir hai.



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