BHIKAREE

by NETRAPAL on November 18, 2008, 05:58:33 AM
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aaj fir mere ghar ek bhikaree ayaa hai
n maleen vastraa n sookhaa tan uskaa
ankho me n jaane kaisee bhook laayaa hai

chehre pe chamak, kar shwet vastra dhaaran
liye mota pet lag raha wo kalyoogee saa raavan
haatho ko jode odh sabhytaa kaa aawran
khada bina jholee bina katore ke, aaj
mere ghar kaisaa ye bhikaree ayaa hai.

kuch kuch yaad aayaa hai mujhe
ye cheheraa pahchaan saa lagaa mujhe
aysaa hee bhikaaree ek pahale bhee ayaa tha
aashwaashno ka katora  wo saath lyaa tha
ham the kee us par dayaa kar gaye
apnaa keemtee mat usko de gaye

paanch warsho kaa samay nikal gyaa
ye bhikaree fir dware hmaare aagayaa
koree bato ka ye geet fir gaayegaa
jhoote aaswaasno ke saath gidgidaayegaa
ham naadan fir fans jayenge
keemtee mat fir ise de jaayenge

ye panch saal me ek baar ataa hai
panch saal kee bheek ek bar me le jaataa hai..
panch saal wo pet bhar khtaa hai
fir wahee bhikaare ban jtaa hai
aaj fir mere ghar wahee bhikaaree
aayaa hai......

Netra......
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«Reply #1 on: November 18, 2008, 06:03:19 AM »
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ha ha ha... Laughing hard Bahut khoob... Applause

Khoob tanz kiya hai aapne aaj ke netaaon par..
Netra ji.. Bahut sahi kaha hai aapne, aur bahut vyagaatmak tareeke se kaha hai...
Hamari dheron shubh-kaamnaaye aapke is naye kalaam ke liye.. Thumbs UP
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«Reply #2 on: November 18, 2008, 06:59:21 AM »
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NETRAPAL ji!
Bahut sey hamaarey Netaa, aisey hi hain! Sachchaayee hai! Un kaa bhi NARCO TEST ho jaaye to 'bheid' khuley! Achchhaa 'wyang' hai!
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«Reply #3 on: November 18, 2008, 09:12:17 AM »
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thanks Mahiya ji and thanks abdbundeli ji for reply.......

netra....
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«Reply #4 on: November 18, 2008, 12:30:55 PM »
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wah wah netra ji bahoot hi kamal likha aur khoob tanj hai aaj ke netaon par..
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«Reply #5 on: November 18, 2008, 12:35:23 PM »
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Bohot Khoob Netra Ji .... Politicians aur election pe jo tanziyah shayari likhi hai aapne, tareef ke qaabil hai Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #6 on: November 18, 2008, 04:02:15 PM »
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Bohat khoob netra jee shayed meri itni aukat nahi ke main is mahan rachna pe tippani du bas aapse prathna hain hamesha yuhi likhte rahiyega

ek choti si bhet...

Jab bhi dil karta hain uska bohat rone ko
Woh aisi baat karta hain ke zamane ko hasee aa jati hain
Aur itna na akad apni shayri pe tu ghayel
Natrapal ki rachnao ko tujpe hasee aa jati hain

                    -sg-
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«Reply #7 on: November 18, 2008, 06:29:22 PM »
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 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Hamesha ki tarah bahoot he rachnatamk rachna parstut ki hai apne Netra ji!!! dil khush ho gaya.. aise he likhte rahe!!
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«Reply #8 on: November 19, 2008, 04:35:57 AM »
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thanks bekrar ji, clemira ji, sajid bhai or pooja ji....

netra....
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«Reply #9 on: November 19, 2008, 04:44:39 AM »
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Quote from: sajid_ghayel on November 18, 2008, 04:02:15 PM
Bohat khoob netra jee shayed meri itni aukat nahi ke main is mahan rachna pe tippani du bas aapse prathna hain hamesha yuhi likhte rahiyega

ek choti si bhet...

Jab bhi dil karta hain uska bohat rone ko
Woh aisi baat karta hain ke zamane ko hasee aa jati hain
Aur itna na akad apni shayri pe tu ghayel
Natrapal ki rachnao ko tujpe hasee aa jati hain

                    -sg-

aapne bhee khoob kahi

aise bhee insaan hote hai
gairo pe karam karte hai
bhool kar mahaanttaa apnee
ham jaiso ko gale lagate hai

teree shayree bhee wo cheej ghayal
kabhee hansaayaa hame to
kabhee rulayaa hai ghaayal...

netra...

netraa..
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«Reply #10 on: November 19, 2008, 06:53:58 AM »
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Quote from: NETRAPAL on November 19, 2008, 04:35:57 AM
thanks bekrar ji, clemira ji, sajid bhai or pooja ji....

netra....
sajid bhai or pooja jee  DOH aisa lagta hain ghayel aur pooja ek hi hain  Giggle aapne aur ki bajay or likh diya, aapki galtiya bhi khushi deti hain  Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #11 on: November 19, 2008, 02:03:54 PM »
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NETRAPAL ji!
Maangney waaley yeh, rah-rah ameer bantey hain!
Aur, jo deytey hain, rah-rah faqeer bantey hain!
In kee jholi mein zar aataa hai, chalaa aataa hai:
Jaal mein jaisey machhliyoun key dhheir tantey hain!!
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«Reply #12 on: November 20, 2008, 03:32:40 AM »
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Quote from: sajid_ghayel on November 19, 2008, 06:53:58 AM
sajid bhai or pooja jee  DOH aisa lagta hain ghayel aur pooja ek hi hain  Giggle aapne aur ki bajay or likh diya, aapki galtiya bhi khushi deti hain  Clapping Smiley

chalo koi nahi sir, kabhi kabhi aisaa bhee ho jataa hai......

netra
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«Reply #13 on: November 20, 2008, 03:36:42 AM »
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Quote from: abdbundeli on November 19, 2008, 02:03:54 PM
NETRAPAL ji!
Maangney waaley yeh, rah-rah ameer bantey hain!
Aur, jo deytey hain, rah-rah faqeer bantey hain!
In kee jholi mein zar aataa hai, chalaa aataa hai:
Jaal mein jaisey machhliyoun key dhheir tantey hain!!
                                     - abd bundelib]

bahoot khoob kahi sir aapne,

jholee bhar jatee hai fakeer kee
dene wale fakeer ban jate hai
yahee adaa hai us parvardigar kee
rah jataa hai kahlee haath rishee
dev daanav ko mil jate hai....

netra.....
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«Reply #14 on: November 20, 2008, 04:20:41 AM »
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NETRAPAL ji!
 Dhanyawaad!
        - abd bundeli
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