BHIKAREE

by NETRAPAL on November 18, 2008, 05:58:33 AM
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saloni bharani
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«Reply #15 on: November 21, 2008, 07:02:45 AM »
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nice
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Prateek Mardia
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«Reply #16 on: November 24, 2008, 09:31:02 AM »
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kya baat hey netrapal ji...jub jub aapko pudhtey hey..tub tub andar chupa insaan bahar aaney ko taakne lagta hey..kamal hey aapki shaayri aur shaayri ke subject.

Prateek
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Rajesh Harish
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«Reply #17 on: December 02, 2008, 12:06:57 AM »
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Nice one Netrapal Ji
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NETRAPAL
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«Reply #18 on: December 02, 2008, 03:36:23 AM »
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thanks prateek ji or rajesh ji

netra...
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«Reply #19 on: December 02, 2008, 04:19:43 AM »
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jajbaat kee roh me bahk gay ham
apnaa sab kuch lutaa gaye ham
aaj fir pachtaa rahe hai ham
de kar mat apnaa unko
unse jee khud ko lutaa rahe hai ham

kai barso ke bad wo aataa hai
bar bar ek  pitraa saath laataa hai
bas pitaar hee dikhaata hai
jhoote waado kee been bajaata hai
ham saanp ban jaate hai
uske pitaar me fans jaate hai
wo muskaaraata hai chalaa jataa hai

wo ab paanch saal ham nachaayegaa
khud khayegaa hame bhooka sulaaygaa
ye aisaa ajab samaay ayaa hai
ek bhikaaree aaj mere ghar ayaa hai..

netra....
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Pooja
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«Reply #20 on: December 02, 2008, 05:32:57 AM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause

wah kaya baat hai... hamesha ki tarah lajawab Netra ji.... bahoot khoob!!
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NETRAPAL
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«Reply #21 on: December 02, 2008, 07:22:41 AM »
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Quote from: Pooja on December 02, 2008, 05:32:57 AM
Applause Applause Applause Applause

wah kaya baat hai... hamesha ki tarah lajawab Netra ji.... bahoot khoob!!

thanks pooja ji

netra....
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Roja
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«Reply #22 on: January 08, 2009, 04:01:16 PM »
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Wah Netra ji... bahut accha topic pe likha hai aapne. aur accha likha hai...  Applause Applause  sab ke sab bahut accha likha hai....
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