Bhroona Hatya - Ladke ladki me aakhir kab tak bhedbhav rakhoge -Panna 2:Tanziya aur Tehreekbaksh Shayariyan

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«Reply #15 on: August 04, 2009, 03:04:43 PM »

Bahut bahut accha likha hai aapne Yash ji. Nice subject.


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Re: Bhoorna Hatya - Ladke ladki me aakhir kab tak bhedbhav rakhoge

«Reply #16 on: August 04, 2009, 03:09:52 PM »

Quote from: Rajbir on August 04, 2009, 02:53:13 PM

Yash bro,
Pehle toh aap ko salute ki aap ne itne ache subject par likha ! Hats off to you!

Mujhe aise subjects par likha padhna bahut acha lagta hai...

Aap ne jis saralta se ek unborn girl child ki gaatha sunayi...jhanjhod kar rakh diya usne sad5

Na jaane kab log padhe likhe banenge in real sense Crying

Pehle bhi maine kahin is subject par likha tha...ki zyadatar aise kukarm mein ek aurat he ek aurat ki dushman hoti hai...aap dekhenge ki samaaj mein saas, nanad, devarani, etc he aise ghanone kukarm ki zimmedaar hoti hain. Ooper se doctors, woh bhi aurat gynaecologists iski zimmedaar. Hadd hai...is par ek poora chapter likh doon main. Magar yeh debate ka thread nahi hai, is liye apne comments yahin takk seemit rakhoonga.

Saahil, Madhu, Abd ji aap sab ka bhi shukriya jo aap ne Yash ka saath diya ! Applause

Keep going !

Thanks Rajbir ji!
- abd bundeli


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Re: Bhoorna Hatya - Ladke ladki me aakhir kab tak bhedbhav rakhoge

«Reply #17 on: August 04, 2009, 03:21:49 PM »

Kaash Ji, Bohot Khoob....Well done Applause

Babu Ji, Salil, Madhu, aapne khoob saath nibhaya hai...!!

Good work friends for writing on this bitter but prevailing truth of many households. Applause


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Re: Bhoorna Hatya - Ladke ladki me aakhir kab tak bhedbhav rakhoge

«Reply #18 on: August 04, 2009, 04:50:33 PM »

Bahut Bahut Bahut Khooob Kaashji..

Iss Kavita Ke saath Aapne To Dil Hi Jeet Liya..

Har Ek Lafz Ek Aaene Ke Jaisa Hai..Kaash Yeh Kavita Har Ek Insaan Padhe Aur Samjhe...Hat's Off To you..

Bahut Khoob Madhu,Aapne bahut Achi koshish Ki..

Bahut Bahut Khoob Abd Saheb Ji..

Bahut Ache Salil Bhai..

Rajbir Paaji,Aapki Baaton ne Dil Ko Chua..Great Thoughts Bro..

Main Bhi Kuch Likhna Chaahunga..Iss Kavita Mein Main Ek Aisi Ladki Ki Baat kahunga Jo APni Maa Se Kuch Keh rahi hai,Aaj Kae Daur mein Logon ki Soch Ko Dekh kar,Khud Apni Maa Se Woh Kehti hai Ke Maa,Maar Hi Daal Mujhe, Main Marna Chaahti hoon...Yeh likhte waqt Mera Mann Bhar Aaya..Agar Kuch Galat keh Diya To Maaf karna..

Maa,Main Bhi To Jeena Chahti hoon,
Tera Hi Saaya Bankar Rehna Chaahti hoon...

Maa, Mujhe Maarne Se Pehle Sirf Ek Baar Zara Sochna,
Main Ek ladki Hoon, Kya Sirf Yehi Ek mera kasoor Hai!!!
Maa, main To sirf Teri Hatheliyon Mein Khelna Chaahti Hoon...

Sharam Aati Hai mujhe, Ke Main Iss Yug mein Janam Le Rahi hoon,
Jahan Ek Aurat Hi Aurat Ki Dushman Hai!!!
Ek kaam Kar Maa!!! Maar Hi Daal Mujhe,
Main Iss Yug mein Janam Lene Se Pehle Hi marna Chaahti Hoon....

Ek Jageh Kehte Hai log ke Beti Hui Hai Mujhe,
Yeh to Lakhsmi Ka Roop Hai!!!

Ek Jageh kehte Hai,Ladki Hui Hai Muje,
Aakhir Mila Mujhe Kya Fal Swaroop Hai??

Maa Mujhe Roshni naa De, Main Andhero Mein Hi Rehna Chaahti hoon,
Maa Meri Saansein Bahut Mehangi hai Par Yahan iski Koi Kadar Nahi,
Main Ab Apni Pehchaan Ko nahi Khona Chaahti hoon,

Yeh Sab Dekh kar,Bahut Afsos Hota hai Mujhe,
Maa,Maar Daal Mujhe, Main Bas Marna Chaahti hoon..


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Roja

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Re: Bhoorna Hatya - Ladke ladki me aakhir kab tak bhedbhav rakhoge

«Reply #19 on: August 04, 2009, 05:03:24 PM »

Quote from: khwaish on August 04, 2009, 04:50:33 PM

Main Bhi Kuch Likhna Chaahunga..Iss Kavita Mein Main Ek Aisi Ladki Ki Baat kahunga Jo APni Maa Se Kuch Keh rahi hai,Aaj Kae Daur mein Logon ki Soch Ko Dekh kar,Khud Apni Maa Se Woh Kehti hai Ke Maa,Maar Hi Daal Mujhe, Main Marna Chaahti hoon...Yeh likhte waqt Mera Mann Bhar Aaya..Agar Kuch Galat keh Diya To Maaf karna..

Maa,Main Bhi To Jeena Chahti hoon,
Tera Hi Saaya Bankar Rehna Chaahti hoon...

Maa, Mujhe Maarne Se Pehle Sirf Ek Baar Zara Sochna,
Main Ek ladki Hoon, Kya Sirf Yehi Ek mera kasoor Hai!!!
Maa, main To sirf Teri Hatheliyon Mein Khelna Chaahti Hoon...

Sharam Aati Hai mujhe, Ke Main Iss Yug mein Janam Le Rahi hoon,
Jahan Ek Aurat Hi Aurat Ki Dushman Hai!!!
Ek kaam Kar Maa!!! Maar Hi Daal Mujhe,
Main Iss Yug mein Janam Lene Se Pehle Hi marna Chaahti Hoon....

Ek Jageh Kehte Hai log ke Beti Hui Hai Mujhe,
Yeh to Lakhsmi Ka Roop Hai!!!

Ek Jageh kehte Hai,Ladki Hui Hai Muje,
Aakhir Mila Mujhe Kya Fal Swaroop Hai??

Maa Mujhe Roshni naa De, Main Andhero Mein Hi Rehna Chaahti hoon,
Maa Meri Saansein Bahut Mehangi hai Par Yahan iski Koi Kadar Nahi,
Main Ab Apni Pehchaan Ko nahi Khona Chaahti hoon,

Yeh Sab Dekh kar,Bahut Afsos Hota hai Mujhe,
Maa,Maar Daal Mujhe, Main Bas Marna Chaahti hoon..

Kavita padkar aankhein nam si ho gayi. Bahut sahi likha hai aapne bhaiya


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Re: Bhoorna Hatya - Ladke ladki me aakhir kab tak bhedbhav rakhoge

«Reply #20 on: August 04, 2009, 05:20:41 PM »

Quote from: Roja on August 04, 2009, 05:03:24 PM

Kavita padkar aankhein nam si ho gayi. Bahut sahi likha hai aapne bhaiya

Sorry Behna!!!!Ke Maine Aapki Aankhein Nam Ki,Par Mujhse Bhi raha Na Gaya,Iss Liye lIkh Gaya...


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Rajbir

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Re: Bhoorna Hatya - Ladke ladki me aakhir kab tak bhedbhav rakhoge

«Reply #21 on: August 04, 2009, 05:44:00 PM »

Khwaish bro,

Bravo ! We need people like you in the society to bring about a change... A NEW CHANGE


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«Reply #22 on: August 04, 2009, 06:26:29 PM »

Aapne jo likha hai uske liye aapki jitni taarif ki jaye utni kam hai kaash ji.....

Saahil ji,abd ji,madhu ji aapne bhi behad behtrin likha....

Aapne bahut sahi kha Raj ji....aaj ek aaurat hi aaurat ki dushman hai...
khud kisi ki beti hokar beti se hi nafrat....

Khwaish ji aapne ek beti ki hataash ichhaon ko ek naya hi roop diya hai...
Pta nahi kab tak ye kehar barpega....Rab mehar kare...
Mujhe to iss baat ka dukh hota hai ki ek taraf to ye duniya Devi ko pujti hai wahi dusri taraf ladki ko bura maanti hai....

Aap sabne bahut khub likha......


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Re: Bhoorna Hatya - Ladke ladki me aakhir kab tak bhedbhav rakhoge

«Reply #23 on: August 05, 2009, 05:07:05 AM »

Quote from: poppoetry on August 04, 2009, 06:26:29 PM

Thanks poppoetry ji!
- abd bundeli


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«Reply #24 on: August 05, 2009, 07:30:22 AM »

Wah wah Khwaish ji,bahut khoob,mindblowing creation,really touching, icon_thumleft

thank you so much Khwaish ji,Kaash ji,Rajbir ji,Punam ji,Celmira ji.Pop ji,
Sophi ji, love4


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Re: Bhoorna Hatya - Ladke ladki me aakhir kab tak bhedbhav rakhoge

«Reply #25 on: August 05, 2009, 12:36:51 PM »

Quote from: khwaish on August 04, 2009, 04:50:33 PM

Bohot Khoob Dost.... Bohot hi dard hai is main.... Bohot Khoob Applause


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abdbundeli

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Re: Bhoorna Hatya - Ladke ladki me aakhir kab tak bhedbhav rakhoge

«Reply #26 on: August 05, 2009, 01:15:57 PM »

Quote from: @kaash on August 05, 2009, 12:33:03 PM

shukriya Abd ji,thanks for it
asha hai yun hi saath dete rahenge
bahot acha likha hai aapne

aaj ladki aur ladke me fark nahi raha
ladki bhi har kaam kar sakti jo ladka kar raha
apne mata pita ke saath samaaj ka bhi sir buland karti hain ye
ladki aur ladke me bhed karna ka vaqt ho aaya

Thanks!
Yea, you're right @kaash! The females are harvesting fast at all the opportunities that are available around the globe! Their flags are also fluttering high in the sky with pride, in close vicinities of other such flags.
Even the worst kind of parents are realizing their unique worth! Who knows not that both the males & females are essential for the continuance of life, particularly the human life!
The human life is all bound to run into dry deserts if it will not be irrigated by the eternally overflowing love of the mothers and all their other ancestral or successor incarnations.
- abd bundeli


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Re: Bhoorna Hatya - Ladke ladki me aakhir kab tak bhedbhav rakhoge

«Reply #27 on: August 10, 2009, 11:09:23 AM »

Quote from: @kaash on August 08, 2009, 12:45:13 PM

naari ko devi mana phir use janm kyun nahi lene dete hain hum
kali,sarasvati ko pooja,phir naari ko naari ka dushman kyun banate hain hum
Laxmi Bai,Mother Teresa,Indira aur Kalpana ko bhi mane hum
Jija Bai,Kiran Bedi aur P.T.Usha ko bhi jane hum
Fatima,Azia,Mariyam ko bhi dil se apne mane hum
phir kyun aadhunik yug me bhi mansikta ko peechhe karte ja rahe hain hum
ye samay ki maang hai ladki ko ladke ke barabar hi jaane aur mane hum
unmukt vatavaran banaye ladkiyun ko ladkon se kum na mane hum
unhe sachha maan deke sachhe aadar ke haqdaar ban jayen hum

such a great work kaash ji........ Hats off to you!


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abdbundeli

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Re: Bhoorna Hatya - Ladke ladki me aakhir kab tak bhedbhav rakhoge

«Reply #28 on: August 18, 2009, 05:29:30 PM »

Quote from: Nikhaar on August 04, 2009, 06:26:29 PM

Thanks Nikhaar ji!
- abd bundeli


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Re: Bhoorna Hatya - Ladke ladki me aakhir kab tak bhedbhav rakhoge

«Reply #29 on: August 21, 2009, 03:42:04 PM »

Good sharing Kaash ji!!!


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