Bhujta Howa Charag !!

by abdulqadeer on February 02, 2009, 04:12:04 AM
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«Reply #15 on: February 02, 2009, 10:07:45 AM »
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Subhan allah , subhan allah , kya kahon is kalam ko talat ji ..eak aise sawgath de hai apne is nacheez ko kea b yoindia se khuch mangne ke qabil hi nahi rahe !! kya nazam nazar ki hai janab !! Allah apke sare ghazlon ko miyari izzath de ..aur janab apne eak baar fir se mera qalam ko rok diya janab !! Allah apko khush o qurram rakhe !! Ameen !!


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«Reply #16 on: February 02, 2009, 10:31:03 AM »
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Bohot shukriya Qadeer Ji, ye to aapka badappan hai ki is choti si peshkash ko aapne itni izzat bakshi.....Aapki qalam koi rok de, aisi jurrat kaun kar sakta hai.
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«Reply #17 on: February 02, 2009, 11:49:09 AM »
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Quote from: Celmira on February 02, 2009, 10:31:03 AM
Bohot shukriya Qadeer Ji, ye to aapka badappan hai ki is choti si peshkash ko aapne itni izzat bakshi.....Aapki qalam koi rok de, aisi jurrat kaun kar sakta hai.

ur welcome talat ji !!

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«Reply #18 on: February 02, 2009, 12:41:31 PM »
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Quote from: Celmira on February 02, 2009, 09:51:20 AM
Waah waah...jitni taareef ki jaaye kam hi hogi is kalaam ke liye.bohot khoobsurat..bohot khoob Qadeer Ji..  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Kuch likhne ki koshish ki hai aap ki tarz par,

Gar roshni ki chaah hai to aana na mere paas,
Andheron main lipti raat hoon, mahtaab nahin hoon main

Angaaron main har roz jalta hai mera wujood,
Tapti ret ki deewaar hoon, saraab nahin hoon main

Khol ke aankhain zara dekho meri jaanib,
Ek Talq haqeeqat hoon, khwaab nahin hoon main

Zamane ki aandhi ne sulga diya itna,
Ab aag ka shola hoon, aab nahin hoon main



Bahut-bahut khoob Dr. Talat! It's a lovely remarkable creation!
                                   - abd bundeli
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«Reply #19 on: February 02, 2009, 12:48:47 PM »
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Quote from: abdbundeli on February 02, 2009, 12:41:31 PM
Bahut-bahut khoob Dr. Talat! It's a lovely remarkable creation!
                                   - abd bundeli


Dili Khushi howi ye jaan ke talat jabeen Docter hain !! Mashallah !! talimi miyar bhi shayari ki tarah bahoth umda hai janab ka !! Allah unhe khush rakhe !!

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«Reply #20 on: February 02, 2009, 05:00:39 PM »
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Quote from: abdulqadeer on February 02, 2009, 04:12:04 AM

ghazal se mil jao agar to nawaz dena !! Tawajo chahonga !!

Muflisi ka badshah hon, ,sartaj nahi hon mai !!
Bhujhta howa charaq hon   aftaab nahi hon mai !!

Asolon pe ladna meri adath purani hai !!
Sacha-e-ki awaz hon , inqalaab nahi hon mai !!

Aur meri saqawath zamane ki har-yali se puchiye !!
jo apne hi gulistan ke liye gire wo barsath nahi hon mai !!

Mere bad bhi duniya meri tariq padegi !!
Jo asani se mit jaye wo itehas nahi hon mai !!

 meri tishnagi bhujana hai to samandaron ko bula lo !!
Jo qataron se mit jaye wo pyaas nahi hon mai !!

Aur apni tarraqi ke liye meri lambi umra ki duva manglo !!
Jo bin mange mil jaye wo sawgath nahi hon mai !!

Meri har ghazal yaad karegi duniya mere bad Qadeer!!
padke jise bhula sako wo kitaab nahi hon mai !!

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Bahut Bahut Khoob Qadeer saheb!!
Ab Aapki Tareef Mein Mujhe Naye Lafz Dhoondne Padhenge..
Behetereen Ghazal Pesh Ki Hai Aapne..Bahut Ache.. Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #21 on: February 02, 2009, 07:27:38 PM »
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Quote from: Jaanasheen on February 02, 2009, 09:58:34 AM
Sahi Kaha Aapne Talat Didi,.
Ye Ghazal Bohat Hi Badhiya Hai,.

Waise Aapne Bhi Kamaal Ka Likha Hai,.'
Nice One,.
Shukriya Janasheen
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«Reply #22 on: February 02, 2009, 07:30:42 PM »
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Quote from: abdbundeli on February 02, 2009, 12:41:31 PM
Bahut-bahut khoob Dr. Talat! It's a lovely remarkable creation!
                                   - abd bundeli


Thank You Abd Ji for always encouraging me with your sweet words.

Quote from: abdulqadeer on February 02, 2009, 12:48:47 PM
Dili Khushi howi ye jaan ke talat jabeen Docter hain !! Mashallah !! talimi miyar bhi shayari ki tarah bahoth umda hai janab ka !! Allah unhe khush rakhe !!

Qadeer Toopchi

Shukriya Qadeer Ji iss qadar izzat-afzaai ka...bas Maan Baap ki duaain hain aur Allah ka karam.
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«Reply #23 on: February 03, 2009, 03:58:45 AM »
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Quote from: khwaish on February 02, 2009, 05:00:39 PM
Bahut Bahut Khoob Qadeer saheb!!
Ab Aapki Tareef Mein Mujhe Naye Lafz Dhoondne Padhenge..
Behetereen Ghazal Pesh Ki Hai Aapne..Bahut Ache.. Applause Applause Applause

shukriya kuwish sahab is nacheez ko itni izzath dene ke liye !!tahe dil se shukar guzar hon apka janab !! waise tarif karne ka ye andaz hi bada nirala hai janab apka !! allah apko khush rakhe !!

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«Reply #24 on: February 03, 2009, 04:02:30 AM »
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Quote from: abdbundeli on February 02, 2009, 06:14:06 AM
Bahut hi umdah hai yah sher:

meri tishnagi bhujana hai to samandaron ko bula lo !!
Jo qataron se mit jaye wo pyaas nahi hon mai !!

Waah bhai waah!
               - abd bundeli

Bohat khoob Abd ji... Applause
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«Reply #25 on: February 03, 2009, 04:04:18 AM »
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Quote from: Celmira on February 02, 2009, 09:51:20 AM
Waah waah...jitni taareef ki jaaye kam hi hogi is kalaam ke liye.bohot khoobsurat..bohot khoob Qadeer Ji..  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Kuch likhne ki koshish ki hai aap ki tarz par,

Gar roshni ki chaah hai to aana na mere paas,
Andheron main lipti raat hoon, mahtaab nahin hoon main

Angaaron main har roz jalta hai mera wujood,
Tapti ret ki deewaar hoon, saraab nahin hoon main

Khol ke aankhain zara dekho meri jaanib,
Ek Talq haqeeqat hoon, khwaab nahin hoon main

Zamane ki aandhi ne sulga diya itna,
Ab aag ka shola hoon, aab nahin hoon main



 Applause

bohat khoob Celmira sis..
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«Reply #26 on: February 03, 2009, 06:37:33 AM »
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Quote from: Celmira on February 02, 2009, 07:30:42 PM

Shukriya Qadeer Ji iss qadar izzat-afzaai ka...bas Maan Baap ki duaain hain aur Allah ka karam.

Ur welcome talat Ji !!

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«Reply #27 on: February 03, 2009, 09:38:29 AM »
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Bahoot khoob abdul ji Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #28 on: February 03, 2009, 10:00:26 AM »
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Quote from: salma786 on February 03, 2009, 09:38:29 AM
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Shukriya salma ji !! Apne hamari ghazal ko waqath diya !! allah apko khush rakhe !! Ameen !!

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«Reply #29 on: February 03, 2009, 01:41:11 PM »
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waah qadeer ji...subhanallah...bahut pyare lines hai...dil khush hogaya padkar... Applause
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