bussss bhii karo yaar

by khamosh_aawaaz on August 17, 2012, 09:28:03 PM
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                                merii diwaangi pe itnaa aitraaz naa kar.!
                                abb to pyaar kar le, naraaz naa kar.!!

                                
                                toot  jaayein  ge  dekh saarey pankh terey.!
                                oonchi-oonci  itnii parwaaz naa kar.!


                                rahney de khamoshi kuch to pyaar mein.!
                                nazm mein lambey-lambey alfaaz naa kar.!


                                chupii huii  baat  jab oojaagar kar gayaa.!
                                jaantaa zamanaa jisey,  usey raaz naa kar.!


                                seekh tariqa mujh se ishq kaa khamosh.!
                                dil kii baato.n ka dil se aaghaaz naa kar.!!


                                


                                


                                
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«Reply #1 on: August 18, 2012, 12:11:54 AM »
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Isse padhke hansi to bilkul nahi aai. Koi bhi she'r mazaahiya nahi laga. Isse aapko doosre section mein post karna chahiye thaa. Waise kalaam achha hai.
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«Reply #2 on: August 18, 2012, 12:29:45 AM »
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«Reply #3 on: August 18, 2012, 01:18:03 AM »
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bahut khoob meree aur se dilee daa mazahiya ke saath sanzeedgee liye hue shaaleentaa pasand logon ke liye
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«Reply #4 on: August 18, 2012, 08:30:53 AM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause  ek dum zabardasssttt K_A ji... bahut umda ... bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne sarkaar... mazaa aa gaya padh ke....!!!
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«Reply #5 on: August 18, 2012, 08:34:12 AM »
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Bahut bahut Khoob Khamoshji..

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«Reply #6 on: August 18, 2012, 08:46:13 AM »
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v nice........
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«Reply #7 on: August 18, 2012, 01:09:19 PM »
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Quote from: Iftakhar Ahmad on August 18, 2012, 12:11:54 AM
Isse padhke hansi to bilkul nahi aai. Koi bhi she'r mazaahiya nahi laga. Isse aapko doosre section mein post karna chahiye thaa. Waise kalaam achha hai.

aap ney bajah farmayaa maine isey tanziya thread ki jagah mazahiya mein rakh diya hai meharbaani kar ke aap isey tanzia thread mein transfer kar dein

thanx Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile
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«Reply #8 on: August 18, 2012, 01:16:50 PM »
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bahot khub...bahot khub....nazariya  alag alag hai shayad....kyoki hame to ye mazahiya hi laga
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«Reply #9 on: August 18, 2012, 02:08:03 PM »
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Quote from: sushilbansal on August 18, 2012, 12:29:45 AM
icon_king Applause Applause Applause

thanx
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«Reply #10 on: August 18, 2012, 07:50:30 PM »
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Quote from: sksaini4 on August 18, 2012, 01:18:03 AM
bahut khoob meree aur se dilee daa mazahiya ke saath sanzeedgee liye hue shaaleentaa pasand logon ke liye

thanx
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«Reply #11 on: August 19, 2012, 01:14:30 PM »
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Quote from: ~Hriday~ on August 18, 2012, 08:30:53 AM
Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause  ek dum zabardasssttt K_A ji... bahut umda ... bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne sarkaar... mazaa aa gaya padh ke....!!!

thanx
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«Reply #12 on: August 19, 2012, 04:23:02 PM »
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behtreen ...
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«Reply #13 on: August 20, 2012, 05:14:47 PM »
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Bahut khoob likha hai Khamosh jee
galti se ispe nazar hi nahee padee
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«Reply #14 on: August 20, 2012, 06:11:20 PM »
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Quote from: khwaish on August 18, 2012, 08:34:12 AM
Bahut bahut Khoob Khamoshji..

 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley


THANX
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