Chaa Raha Hai Dhuaan....!!!

by Talat on February 26, 2010, 12:00:43 PM
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Ek koshish ki hai, aap ke suggestions/comments ka intezar rahega.

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«Reply #1 on: February 26, 2010, 12:22:13 PM »
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Talat ji, shayad aapne apni creation image file ki form mein post ki hai. Mere PC mein show nahi ho rahi hai. Pata nahi kya baat hai. Shayad baad mein nazar aa jaye.
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«Reply #2 on: February 26, 2010, 12:27:31 PM »
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Riyaz Ji, main to apni sabhi shayari image format main post karti hoon, pata nahin aapko ye waali poetry kyun nahin dikh rahi. Agar kisi aur ko bhi na dikh rahi ho to please let me know.
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«Reply #3 on: February 26, 2010, 01:02:46 PM »
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Mashallah Bohat Achcha LIkha Hai talat Sis,.

Nice One,.
Great Work
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«Reply #4 on: February 26, 2010, 01:12:51 PM »
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Thanks a lot Azeem
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«Reply #5 on: February 26, 2010, 01:21:40 PM »
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Talat Di.. Humesha Ki Tarah Lajawab Alfaazon, aur Behtreen Soch Ke sath Likhi Hui Kavita hai aapne.. Bahut Khoooooooooooob.. Applause Applause



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«Reply #6 on: February 26, 2010, 02:19:24 PM »
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WAH KYA BAAT HAI    CELMIRA JI...


"CHAA RAHA HAI DHUAAN"
NA JAANE KAB KYUN HUAAN
HAR EK DIL ME JALAN PALAA
DOST BHI DUSHMAN BANA
YE CHINGAARI RAAKH KAR DENGI
ROKO YE MULK KO BARBAAD KAR DENGI...
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«Reply #7 on: February 26, 2010, 02:28:33 PM »
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WAAH WAAH CARA JI,  AND TALAT JI

FIKRA NA KAR ISSKI TAASEER  HALKI HAI.
NA RAHEGA ZAMEEN PE UUD JAYEGA DHUAN

KALA HO SAFIAD HO KUCH PAL KA MEHMAAN HAI
AASMAANO SE AAGE KHUD CHALA JAYEGA DHUAN 

WAH KYA BAAT HAI    CELMIRA JI...


"CHAA RAHA HAI DHUAAN"
NA JAANE KAB KYUN HUAAN
HAR EK DIL ME JALAN PALAA
DOST BHI DUSHMAN BANA
YE CHINGAARI RAAKH KAR DENGI
ROKO YE MULK KO BARBAAD KAR DENGI...
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«Reply #8 on: February 26, 2010, 02:40:16 PM »
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Talat di .. Main Bhi Puri creation Nahi dekh pa rahi hun.. its showing half of the creation !
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«Reply #9 on: February 26, 2010, 02:54:27 PM »
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Bahut Bahut Khoob Talat Dost!!!

Bahut Acha Likha Hai Aapne Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #10 on: February 26, 2010, 02:54:32 PM »
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Behatarin ghazal hai Celmira Ji, wah
SARVESH RASTOGI
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«Reply #11 on: February 26, 2010, 03:35:08 PM »
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Talat Di.. Humesha Ki Tarah Lajawab Alfaazon, aur Behtreen Soch Ke sath Likhi Hui Kavita hai aapne.. Bahut Khoooooooooooob.. Applause Applause



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Thanks a lot Vicky for the appreciation...
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«Reply #12 on: February 26, 2010, 03:35:41 PM »
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WAH KYA BAAT HAI    CELMIRA JI...


"CHAA RAHA HAI DHUAAN"
NA JAANE KAB KYUN HUAAN
HAR EK DIL ME JALAN PALAA
DOST BHI DUSHMAN BANA
YE CHINGAARI RAAKH KAR DENGI
ROKO YE MULK KO BARBAAD KAR DENGI...

Thanks Cara Ji...and nice lines from you....
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«Reply #13 on: February 26, 2010, 03:36:18 PM »
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WAAH WAAH CARA JI,  AND TALAT JI

FIKRA NA KAR ISSKI TAASEER  HALKI HAI.
NA RAHEGA ZAMEEN PE UUD JAYEGA DHUAN

KALA HO SAFIAD HO KUCH PAL KA MEHMAAN HAI
AASMAANO SE AAGE KHUD CHALA JAYEGA DHUAN 


Thanks Suresh Ji...Nice lines...
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«Reply #14 on: February 26, 2010, 03:39:23 PM »
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Talat di .. Main Bhi Puri creation Nahi dekh pa rahi hun.. its showing half of the creation !

I don't know Divs what's the problem..Maine phir se upload kiya hai image....Maine 3 different PCs se dekha, mujhe to dikh rahi hai aur kuch aur members ko bhi dikh rahi hai...I can't say aapko aur Riyaz ji ko kyun nahin dikh rahi.
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