Chaa Raha Hai Dhuaan....!!!

by Talat on February 26, 2010, 12:00:43 PM
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«Reply #15 on: February 26, 2010, 03:43:05 PM »
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Quote from: Celmira on February 26, 2010, 12:00:43 PM
Ek koshish ki hai, aap ke suggestions/comments ka intezar rahega.


Now its Visible Di !  Sorry Pareshan hona pada aapko !

Waise Di Bahoot Bahoot Khoob Likha hai .. Bahoot Lajawaab ! Applause Applause
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«Reply #16 on: February 26, 2010, 04:00:38 PM »
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Quote from: khwaish on February 26, 2010, 02:54:27 PM
Bahut Bahut Khoob Talat Dost!!!

Bahut Acha Likha Hai Aapne Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Thanks a lot dear friend aapko ye koshish achchi lagi...Thanks so much for appreciating Khwaish Dost
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«Reply #17 on: February 26, 2010, 04:37:17 PM »
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Quote from: SARVESH RASTOGI on February 26, 2010, 02:54:32 PM
Behatarin ghazal hai Celmira Ji, wah
SARVESH RASTOGI

I m so happy to see your comments Sarvesh Ji..aap ka bohot bohot shukriya aap mere thread pe aaye aur is koshish ko sarah...Thank you so much...
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«Reply #18 on: February 26, 2010, 04:44:00 PM »
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Talat ji, kahin na kahin zaroor kuchh problem hai. Ab shuru ki 3 lines dikhai de rahi hain. Khair isse aapki puri creaton ka andazah ho raha hai. Jitna samajh mein aaya, bahut achha laga. It is a very nice creation. Sudafreen Mubarakbaad.
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«Reply #19 on: February 26, 2010, 06:45:20 PM »
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Quote from: Celmira on February 26, 2010, 12:00:43 PM
Ek koshish ki hai, aap ke suggestions/comments ka intezar rahega.


I have changed last two couplets as suggested by a friend here.

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«Reply #20 on: February 26, 2010, 07:06:58 PM »
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BEHATREEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEN Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #21 on: February 27, 2010, 10:43:16 AM »
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Quote from: Sophi on February 26, 2010, 03:43:05 PM
Now its Visible Di !  Sorry Pareshan hona pada aapko !

Waise Di Bahoot Bahoot Khoob Likha hai .. Bahoot Lajawaab ! Applause Applause

Thanks a lot Divs..nahin is main pareshaan hone ki koi baat nahin...Thanks for appreeciating dear.
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«Reply #22 on: February 27, 2010, 11:05:56 AM »
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Quote from: riyaz106 on February 26, 2010, 04:44:00 PM
Talat ji, kahin na kahin zaroor kuchh problem hai. Ab shuru ki 3 lines dikhai de rahi hain. Khair isse aapki puri creaton ka andazah ho raha hai. Jitna samajh mein aaya, bahut achha laga. It is a very nice creation. Sudafreen Mubarakbaad.

Thanks a lot Riyaz Ji, meri ghazal ko padhne aur qeemti suggestions ke liye..Maine wo changes kar diye hain aur ab wo behtar bhi lag rahi hai...Ummeed hai aage bhi aap isi tarah apne suggestions dete rahenge.
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«Reply #23 on: February 27, 2010, 11:06:48 AM »
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Quote from: Shihab on February 26, 2010, 06:47:54 PM
Bahut Khub Talat Ji


Thanks a lot Shihab
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«Reply #24 on: February 27, 2010, 11:43:59 AM »
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Quote from: Celmira on February 26, 2010, 12:00:43 PM
Ek koshish ki hai, aap ke suggestions/comments ka intezar rahega.

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Applause Applause
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«Reply #25 on: February 27, 2010, 04:54:59 PM »
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Quote from: marhoom bahayaat on February 26, 2010, 07:06:58 PM
BEHATREEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEN Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Aap ka tah-e-dil se shukriya, MB ji
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«Reply #26 on: February 28, 2010, 01:13:31 PM »
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Quote from: -Rahim- on February 27, 2010, 11:43:59 AM
Applause Applause

Thanks a lot Rahim
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«Reply #27 on: February 28, 2010, 05:42:20 PM »
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Bohot bohot shukriya Kaash Ji aap humesha yunhi hausla badhate hain...Thanks a lot for always reading....
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«Reply #28 on: February 28, 2010, 06:10:35 PM »
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waah ji waah bahut hi khoob celmira ji...
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«Reply #29 on: March 01, 2010, 11:52:53 AM »
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Thanks a lot BBL Ji
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