*Chingari AIDS ki* -Panna 2:Tanziya aur Tehreekbaksh Shayariyan

Roja

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«Reply #15 on: May 14, 2008, 11:15:25 AM »

Quote from: NETRAPAL on May 14, 2008, 10:04:49 AM

bahoot hee social topic hai or bhoot ache se likha bhee gaya hai
badhayee aapko roja ji.

aisee hee ye aag hee hotee hai
ismee jalan hee jalan hotee hai
miljatee hai jannt bhee kabhee
jab kisee ko jisme aag jlaatee hai

ho jata hai parvaanaa bhee aadam
hawash me, rooh tak kho jaatee hai
hosh ataa hai, khultee hai jab nayan
jab jindgee barbaad ho jatee hai..

netra...

Netra when i write something different i really wait for your comments.
Thank you very much for appreciating my work.

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ho jata hai parvaanaa bhee aadam
hawash me, rooh tak kho jaatee hai
hosh ataa hai, khultee hai jab nayan
jab jindgee barbaad ho jatee hai..

Very well said... Applause


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NETRAPAL

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Re: *Chingari AIDS ki*

«Reply #16 on: May 15, 2008, 11:57:37 AM »

roja jee jis social topic par aapne likha hai "Aids"
usne n jane kitne ghar barbaad kiye hai
par mujhe dukh hooa itne kam reply dekh kar
par aap likhte rahee ek sachhe shayar kaa kaam hai"

netra.....


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Roja

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Re: *Chingari AIDS ki*

«Reply #17 on: May 15, 2008, 01:15:52 PM »

Quote from: NETRAPAL on May 15, 2008, 11:57:37 AM

Netra ji, hum padnewale ka quantity nahi dekhte na.
Dil ko kuch baathein chu jaati hai. Un kuch topic main se
ek hai AIDS...I really feel sorry for them .. The most
sufferer is the Kids

Aapne pada. yahi mere liye kafi hai ji. Thanks ji aapko hamara
likha topic pasand aaya.


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Pooja

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Re: *Chingari AIDS ki*

«Reply #18 on: November 10, 2008, 09:17:45 PM »

Good work Roja and Netra ji!!!

Thanks Sonia, is thread ki yaad taza karne ke liye....


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Roja

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Re: *Chingari AIDS ki*

«Reply #19 on: February 23, 2009, 02:58:20 PM »

Quote from: Pooja on November 10, 2008, 09:17:45 PM

Good work Roja and Netra ji!!!

Thanks Sonia, is thread ki yaad taza karne ke liye....

Thanks Pooja di.. aapne hamara likha pada yehi
mere liye fakr ki baat hai. Thanks onceagain.


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Azeem Azaad

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Re: *Chingari AIDS ki*

«Reply #20 on: February 23, 2009, 03:12:48 PM »

Waah Wah Kya Khoob LIkha Hai, Bohat Hi Umda Lajawaab,.

Sahi Sabak Bataaya Hai Aapne,. Nice One,.
Thank U Roja Sis,.


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Talat

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Re: *Chingari AIDS ki*

«Reply #21 on: February 24, 2009, 11:02:53 AM »

Roja...aapne is dehekte hue subject pe bohot achcha likha hai...Very good creations dear

Netra Ji ne bhi achcha saath nibhaya hai yahan par


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Roja

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Re: *Chingari AIDS ki*

«Reply #22 on: February 28, 2009, 08:10:55 AM »

Thank you very much Azeem ji and Celmira dear.
Aapne tarif ki yeh mere liya bahut hai.


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