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sakhi1909
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dosto aaj ek new peshkash apke samne rakh rahi hun...
samshya wohi purane hai par ek ladkee uske liye khadi ho jaye sudhar ke liye ye kuch kam hi hota hai aaj bhi...
yahan is post mein yahi sab hai...asha hai aapko ye samshya ka samaadhan kuch sahi lage...
apki raai ki muntzeer
sakhi
Sir ko jukhaye pita khada hai bebash aur lachar
Maang raha hai beti ka sasur Honda city car
Nagad bhi dena sath mein uske dena tum javraat
Le jaunga warna bapac tere ghar se mein baarat
Pita ye bola suno samdhi ji, samjhho tum haalaat
Sundar hai beti meri, sundar hai uske khyaalaat
Ghar ko sawrg bana degi who khub karegi seva
Ghar me laxmi vaas karegi, dhan bhagwan apko dega
Garahsthi ka saman mein dunga hai jis jis ki darkar
Nahi de paaunga apko mein abhi Honda city car
Sasur ye bola byaah karna hee hai phir to bekaar
Mujhe chahiye har halat mein byaah mein iske car
Tabhi aake andar se beti pita se apne who bolee
Nahi bharegee suno pita ji is bhikharee ki jholee
Kitna doge kab tak doge ye hai bhikharee pakke
Dete dete haar jaaoge ek din tum bhi thak ke
Nahi kahrungi byaah yahan Karungi puri padayee
Kitni hi ladkiyoin ne padke kismat apnee banayee
Khadi houngee peroin pe apne tabhi karungi shaadi
Bina huye aatmnirbhar shaadi karna hai barbaadi
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Sahiba Zehra
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«Reply #1 on: August 12, 2007, 03:52:29 PM » |
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ache se apne vichar utare hai poem mein kuch din pehle baraat ko ek dulhan ne lauta diya tha , news ayi thi.. apki kavita to nahi padhi usne  :D :D :D |
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Ricky
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«Reply #2 on: August 12, 2007, 07:13:22 PM » |
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Its a good attempt.
Nicely knitted words together!
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Pooja
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«Reply #3 on: August 12, 2007, 11:08:03 PM » |
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bahoot khoob sakhi ji.. bahoot hi acha topic apne shuru kiya hai.. aor bahoot hi acha likha bhi hai!! Good job!!
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Shikha12
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«Reply #4 on: August 13, 2007, 03:34:52 AM » |
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Very Nice Issue Raised Sakhi... Something is required to be done in these Cases... And if we can distribute this thought in even a small group of people (through our Poetry) it could be of great Help... Very nicely Distributed by you... Good Work... =D> Keep Writing... Waiting for more from you Pen... |
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sakhi1909
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«Reply #5 on: August 13, 2007, 06:34:42 PM » |
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ache se apne vichar utare hai poem mein kuch din pehle baraat ko ek dulhan ne lauta diya tha , news ayi thi.. apki kavita to nahi padhi usne :D :D :D shahiba ji meri kavita ki dulhan ne dulhan bannane se pahle hi apna faisla suna diya apne pita ko. barat lautane ki naubat aane se pahle hi. shukriya apne pada aur samjha. sakhi |
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Sahiba Zehra
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«Reply #6 on: August 13, 2007, 07:47:20 PM » |
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he he
I was just thinking
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sakhi1909
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«Reply #7 on: August 14, 2007, 04:46:51 PM » |
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bahoot khoon sakhi ji.. bahoot hi acha topic apne shuru kiya hai.. aor bahoot hi acha likha bhi hai!! Good job!! shukriya pooja ji apne pasand kiya par ise samjhan hoga ham sabko hai na sakhi |
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sakhi1909
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«Reply #8 on: August 18, 2007, 07:14:22 PM » |
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Its a good attempt.
Nicely knitted words together! thnx ricky ji sakhi |
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«Reply #9 on: August 20, 2007, 06:20:52 AM » |
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Sakhi.. its a nice topic. Aur kafi bakkobi pesh kiya hai tumne apne sabdo se....
Duniya.. mea aisi kabro newspaper k 3 ya 4 page pe ak choti si headline dekhar kisi kone me
Wonderfull ..attempt by u
Divya
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sakhi1909
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«Reply #10 on: August 21, 2007, 06:09:03 PM » |
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Very Nice Issue Raised Sakhi... Something is required to be done in these Cases... And if we can distribute this thought in even a small group of people (through our Poetry) it could be of great Help... Very nicely Distributed by you... Good Work... =D> Keep Writing... Waiting for more from you Pen... thnx dear shika sorry for dealy keeps ssmile always on ur face love sakhi |
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sakhi1909
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«Reply #11 on: November 30, 2007, 07:10:30 AM » |
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Sakhi.. its a nice topic. Aur kafi bakkobi pesh kiya hai tumne apne sabdo se....
Duniya.. mea aisi kabro newspaper k 3 ya 4 page pe ak choti si headline dekhar kisi kone me
Wonderfull ..attempt by u
Divya
shukriya divya padne aur sarahne ke liye love sakhi |
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«Reply #12 on: December 18, 2007, 04:30:34 PM » |
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sakhi1909 kafi umda nazm hai balkey yoon kahey keh aajkal ki shaadiyon key haal ka ek manzar hai.mujhey khud soch kar dukh hota key log mangtey hai ghalat hain woh sub. aaj kal ki larhkiya self depend hain phir pata nahin kyon dahej mangney ki logon ki hammat hoti hai.mera ek khayal aur hai agar log chahtey hain key yeh dahej pratha band ho to larhkon ko khud aagey aana hoga larhkiyon ka haath thaam kar apni behnon key liyeh neik larhkey dhoond kar na key ammer log dhoond kar.
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«Reply #13 on: December 18, 2007, 04:47:04 PM » |
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sakhi1909 kafi umda nazm hai balkey yoon kahey keh aajkal ki shaadiyon key haal ka ek manzar hai.mujhey khud soch kar dukh hota key log mangtey hai ghalat hain woh sub. aaj kal ki larhkiya self depend hain phir pata nahin kyon dahej mangney ki logon ki hammat hoti hai.mera ek khayal aur hai agar log chahtey hain key yeh dahej pratha band ho to larhkon ko khud aagey aana hoga larhkiyon ka haath thaam kar apni behnon key liyeh neik larhkey dhoond kar na key ammer log dhoond kar.
Nek kayalat hai ali ji... magar asal zindagi main koyi larka aage aata nahi hai larkiyon ke haat dhamne... |
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baadal102
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«Reply #14 on: December 18, 2007, 04:49:51 PM » |
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thik kaha roja ji
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on eTI community..
