Dard ke ehsaas........ manju

by manjum on June 06, 2011, 04:07:44 AM
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Dard ke ehsaas dil se mar gaye.
Zakhm apne itna asar kar gaye.

Ab chalo fir se karo chhalni mujhe,
Zakhm dil ke dhire dhire bhar gaye.

Jang ladne ki niyat se aaye jo,
Unn sabhi logon ke dhad se sar gaye.

Ghar se nikle duniyan ko jab janne,
Log aise aise dekhe darr gaye.

Aur uncha uncha udne ki lagan main,
Jitne bhi hasil the wo bhi par gaye.

Char diwaren thi aur kuchh na mila,
Laut kar "mann“ jab apne ghar gaye.

Manju "mann"
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«Reply #1 on: June 06, 2011, 04:15:33 AM »
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gud manju ji sahi kaha logon ko pehchanana mushkil nahi namumkin hai
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bahut bahut shukriya saahilji....

yun hi sath rahie.....
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bht bht khoob di...
luv d 2nd one....
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bahut bahut shukriya priya....

thanks.. sath rahna........
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«Reply #5 on: June 06, 2011, 06:18:22 AM »
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Waah..waah manjum ji kya baat hai

khoobsurti se bandha hai chhoti behr
ki ghazal men.

all the best..

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«Reply #6 on: June 06, 2011, 06:26:35 AM »
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satishji... aapka bahut bahut shukriya.....

bahut bahut shukriya sath dene ke lie.. sath rahie...
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«Reply #7 on: June 06, 2011, 06:28:55 AM »
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hey! dard ki devi…ye alg typ ka dard bhi khub hai…
intehan e dard kah du ise to kya galat hoga…
kbi kbi khus bhi rah lije to acha hi hoga…

asar e dard me kuch kasar e jaam baki hai
thoda muskura le hum jisme !mann! tera wo kalaam abi baki hai……

khus rahiye
muskurati rahiye
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«Reply #8 on: June 06, 2011, 06:35:13 AM »
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bahut bahut shukriya niralaji..... ghazal pasand karne ke lie aur "dard ki devi" ka khitab dene ke lie.... khushi par likhne ki koshish ki thi wo bhi to shuru khushi se hua aur khatan dard par hua zindgi ki tarah.... sikhenge khushi par likhna bhi....

sath rahie.....
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«Reply #9 on: June 06, 2011, 06:43:48 AM »
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ok…
aap kosis kariye hum sarahenge
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«Reply #10 on: June 06, 2011, 06:50:46 AM »
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ji.. shukriya.... hausla dene ke lie...
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«Reply #11 on: June 06, 2011, 06:52:54 AM »
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KHUB
HUM TO PURI RAAT MEHFIL SAJATE SAJATE MAR GAYE
AUR WO CHEHRA DIKHAKAR HE ROSHANE MEHFIL KAR GAYE
Quote from: manjum on June 06, 2011, 04:07:44 AM
Dard ke ehsaas dil se mar gaye.
Zakhm apne itna asar kar gaye.

Ab chalo fir se karo chhalni mujhe,
Zakhm dil ke dhire dhire bhar gaye.

Jang ladne ki niyat se aaye jo,
Unn sabhi logon ke dhad se sar gaye.

Ghar se nikle duniyan ko jab janne,
Log ese ese dekhe dar gaye.

Aur uncha uncha udne ki lagan main,
Jitne bhi hasil the wo bhi par gaye.

Char diwaron thi aur kuchh na mila,
Laut kar "mann“ jab apne ghar gaye.

Manju "mann"
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«Reply #12 on: June 06, 2011, 07:14:58 AM »
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very nice creation
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«Reply #13 on: June 06, 2011, 07:28:54 AM »
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Quote from: manjum on June 06, 2011, 04:07:44 AM
Dard ke ehsaas dil se mar gaye.
Zakhm apne itna asar kar gaye.

Ab chalo fir se karo chhalni mujhe,
Zakhm dil ke dhire dhire bhar gaye.

Jang ladne ki niyat se aaye jo,
Unn sabhi logon ke dhad se sar gaye.

Ghar se nikle duniyan ko jab janne,
Log ese ese dekhe dar gaye.

Aur uncha uncha udne ki lagan main,
Jitne bhi hasil the wo bhi par gaye.

Char diwaron thi aur kuchh na mila,
Laut kar "mann“ jab apne ghar gaye.

Manju "mann"

Bahut Bahut Khooooob Anju ji..

Kya Khoob Andaaz-e-Bayaan Hai..bahut Ache..

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«Reply #14 on: June 06, 2011, 08:54:37 AM »
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 manju aapke kalaam ke liye 
 
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