Dard ke ehsaas........ manju

by manjum on June 06, 2011, 04:07:44 AM
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«Reply #15 on: June 06, 2011, 09:40:33 AM »
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bahut bahut shukriya manojji....

sath rahie.....
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«Reply #16 on: June 06, 2011, 09:41:45 AM »
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bahut bahut shukriya tamannaji....
sath rahie....
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«Reply #17 on: June 06, 2011, 09:44:05 AM »
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bahut bahut shukriya khwaishji.... bas aapki duaon ka asar hai....

yun hi sath rahiega......
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«Reply #18 on: June 06, 2011, 10:33:45 AM »
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Bhoot acha
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«Reply #19 on: June 06, 2011, 10:36:21 AM »
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bahut bahut shukriya shihabji....

shukriya ye kahne ke lie ki "har bar ki tarah"........ aapka sujhao sar aankho par..... yun hi sath rahiega.........
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«Reply #20 on: June 06, 2011, 10:40:50 AM »
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bahut bahut shukriya khamerji........

sath rahie.......
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«Reply #21 on: June 07, 2011, 05:54:38 AM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
 bahut khoob Manju .......
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«Reply #22 on: June 07, 2011, 06:20:56 AM »
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Wah bahut khoob Manjum ji.lajawab peshkash.excellent Hats off to you! icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #23 on: June 07, 2011, 06:40:14 AM »
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bahutbahut shukriya mamtaji...

sath rahiega.....
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«Reply #24 on: June 07, 2011, 06:42:47 AM »
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bahut bahut shukriya madhuweshji.....

yun hi sath rahiega.....
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«Reply #25 on: June 07, 2011, 07:02:29 AM »
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Quote from: manjum on June 06, 2011, 04:07:44 AM
Dard ke ehsaas dil se mar gaye.
Zakhm apne itna asar kar gaye.

Ab chalo fir se karo chhalni mujhe,
Zakhm dil ke dhire dhire bhar gaye.

Jang ladne ki niyat se aaye jo,
Unn sabhi logon ke dhad se sar gaye.

Ghar se nikle duniyan ko jab janne,
Log ese ese dekhe dar gaye.

Aur uncha uncha udne ki lagan main,
Jitne bhi hasil the wo bhi par gaye.

Char diwaren thi aur kuchh na mila,
Laut kar "mann“ jab apne ghar gaye.

Manju "mann"


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«Reply #26 on: June 07, 2011, 07:07:33 AM »
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bahut bahut shukriya adilji.....

sath rahiega........
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«Reply #27 on: June 08, 2011, 11:30:06 AM »
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Manjum Jee Aadaab!


Kia khub kalaam kahi hai aapne.. Kavish achchi hai
aur aapne ise adaa bhi behad achcha kiya hai.. Usual Smile

Sabhi ashaar khoob rahe ...
Humari daad kabul kijiye Usual Smile         


Quote from: manjum on June 06, 2011, 04:07:44 AM
Dard ke ehsaas dil se mar gaye.
Zakhm apne itna asar kar gaye.

Kafi achcha matla kaha hai..
Daad janab Usual Smile         

Ab chalo fir se karo chhalni mujhe,
Zakhm dil ke dhire dhire bhar gaye.

Achcha sher hai Usual Smile         

Jang ladne ki niyat se aaye jo,
Unn sabhi logon ke dhad se sar gaye.

Kia kahne bahut khoob ...
Aap to inqalaabi shayar ban rahi hai Usual Smile         

Ghar se nikle duniyan ko jab janne,
Log ese ese dekhe dar gaye.

Yah sher humari samjh ke bahar gaya ..?
Shayad kuch spel mistakes hai yaa phir thik se kahne meiN nahi aaya aap jo kahna chaaH rahi hai:)         

Aur uncha uncha udne ki lagan main,
Jitne bhi hasil the wo bhi par gaye.

Kia kahne bahut khoob daad Usual Smile         

Char diwaren thi aur kuchh na mila,
Laut kar "mann“ jab apne ghar gaye.

Waah janab waah sadaa sa Maqta kaha hai
par behad umdaa kaha hai daad daad daad Usual Smile         

Manju "mann"

Manjum jee apki is khub koshish par dil se daad hazir hai... koshish jaari rakhiye... Usual Smile

Likhate rahiye..
Khush O aabaad rahiye..
Khuda Hafez Usual Smile

         
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«Reply #28 on: June 09, 2011, 03:24:56 AM »
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bahut bahut shukriya parwazji.... shukriya ki aapne apne andaz main is kalaam par nazar dali.....

parwazji... is sher main hmne kahna chaha ki jab ye dekhna chaha ki duniya kaisi hai to jo anubhav mile usse dar gaye ghabara gaye.... shayad samjha nai paye.... bataiyega....

sath rahie...
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