Dehek Ker Jali Hu

by Roja on May 03, 2009, 07:28:23 AM
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Dehek ker jali hu bhujungi babak ker
Ki le jayegi maut mujhko lapak kar

Lagi dukhne aankh, nahi neend fir bi,
Sula de koyi aake mujhko taptapakar..

Tamannawon ka carvaan reh gaya hai,
Mere dil ki viraniyon mein batak kar

Na basti, na ghar na derkhaton ke saaye
Ki mai be-tarah ho gayi chur thak kar

Kahan tak karu sabr aakhir kahan tak?
Koyi ro uta pass aake fafak ker

Nigahein mili aur kafa ho gaye tum
Na jao meri Jaan yu haat jatka kar

Nahi mujhse nata koyi bi tumhara
Magar kuch toh kehta hi hai dil dadak ker

Yeh paigam dengi hawayein jahan ko
Kahi ho gaya khaak shola badak kar..
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«Reply #1 on: May 03, 2009, 07:34:33 AM »
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Bohat bohat khoob Roja.. but i beleive it would have been posted in Shayri-e-Dard Forum, as i did not notice any Tanz.

Anyway its a beautiful presentation....
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«Reply #2 on: May 03, 2009, 03:39:36 PM »
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Wah Roja Ji Waah
Bahut hiiiiiii shaandar aur asardar peshkash hai, Mubarak ho.
Maine kai baar padhi.  Ghazal ka matla bada impressive hai.
Very veryyyyy  Good.
SARVESH RASTOGI
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«Reply #3 on: May 05, 2009, 03:45:59 PM »
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Thanks Sajid ji and Sarvesh Rastogi ji  Usual Smile
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«Reply #4 on: May 07, 2009, 09:58:28 AM »
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Quote from: Roja on May 03, 2009, 07:28:23 AM
Dehek ker jali hu bhujungi babak ker
Ki le jayegi maut mujhko lapak kar

Lagi dukhne aankh, nahi neend fir bi,
Sula de koyi aake mujhko taptapakar..

Tamannawon ka carvaan reh gaya hai,
Mere dil ki viraniyon mein batak kar

Na basti, na ghar na derkhaton ke saaye
Ki mai be-tarah ho gayi chur thak kar

Kahan tak karu sabr aakhir kahan tak?
Koyi ro uta pass aake fafak ker

Nigahein mili aur kafa ho gaye tum
Na jao meri Jaan yu haat jatka kar

Nahi mujhse nata koyi bi tumhara
Magar kuch toh kehta hi hai dil dadak ker

Yeh paigam dengi hawayein jahan ko
Kahi ho gaya khaak shola badak kar..








VERII GUD.................ROJA
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«Reply #5 on: May 07, 2009, 05:24:28 PM »
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Waah...bohot achcha likha hai Roja dear  icon_thumleft
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«Reply #6 on: May 07, 2009, 11:06:10 PM »
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bhut %Ub roja jI     
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«Reply #7 on: May 08, 2009, 10:56:38 AM »
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Bohat Achche Roja Sis,.
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«Reply #8 on: May 09, 2009, 03:55:29 PM »
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Quote from: khamosh_aawaaz on May 07, 2009, 09:58:28 AM

VERII GUD.................ROJA

Quote from: Celmira on May 07, 2009, 05:24:28 PM
Waah...bohot achcha likha hai Roja dear  icon_thumleft

Quote from: @kaash on May 07, 2009, 08:44:09 PM
very nice..acha likha hai aapne Roja ji.. 

Quote from: Rajesh Harish on May 07, 2009, 11:06:10 PM
bhut %Ub roja jI    

Quote from: Azeem on May 08, 2009, 10:56:38 AM
Bohat Achche Roja Sis,.

Thank you very much for reading me Khamosh ji, dear Talat, @Kaash ji, Rajesh Harish ji and Azeem  Usual Smile
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«Reply #9 on: May 10, 2009, 10:55:10 AM »
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very nice roja...............lagta hai time ki kami hai jo sabko ek hi reply mai nibta dya........lol
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«Reply #10 on: May 12, 2009, 02:17:41 PM »
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Quote from: aaina on May 10, 2009, 10:55:10 AM
very nice roja...............lagta hai time ki kami hai jo sabko ek hi reply mai nibta dya........lol

Thanks dear Aslam ji  Usual Smile
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«Reply #11 on: May 13, 2009, 07:36:42 PM »
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wow kaya baat hai Roja... bahoot khoob!!! kamal ka likha hai !!
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«Reply #12 on: July 18, 2009, 05:50:15 PM »
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Quote from: Pooja on May 13, 2009, 07:36:42 PM
wow kaya baat hai Roja... bahoot khoob!!! kamal ka likha hai !!

Thanks Pooja di
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«Reply #13 on: July 18, 2009, 06:02:36 PM »
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Roja My Dear.. Wah Kya Baat Hai.. Lajawab Alfaazon ke Sath Saji Aapki Yeh Rachna Bahut Acchi Lagi.. Bahut Bahut Khooooob.. Applause


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«Reply #14 on: July 18, 2009, 06:10:26 PM »
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It is really a very Beautiful Ghazal written by you, Roja Ji! Bahut Bahut Khoob! Applause
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