Dhool

by Roja on April 26, 2009, 05:15:16 PM
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«Reply #15 on: April 27, 2009, 06:03:06 PM »
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der aaye durust aaye...chaliye ab to aap kp pta lag gya pooja ji
Quote from: Pooja on April 27, 2009, 05:58:09 PM
Phir se Yoindia per do do Pooja Shocked Even More.... bahoot na-insaafi hai yah  NaNaNa

Just kidding... Mujhe nahi pata tha apka naam Pooja hai.. main to apko Male member samjhati rahi ab tak  DOH
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«Reply #16 on: April 29, 2009, 08:24:57 AM »
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Mashallah, Ek Zabardast peshkash Aapne hume Di Hai,.
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«Reply #17 on: April 29, 2009, 08:43:18 AM »
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Quote from: Roja on April 26, 2009, 05:15:16 PM
Band Gharon Ki Diwaron Ke Andher-Baher Dhool
Aaine Per Dhool Jami Hai Aur Chehre Per Dhool

Din-ber Jinke Paane Ko Dil Rehta Hai Betab
Shaam Ki Aandhi Ker Jaati Hai Sare Manzer Dhool

Itni Shararat Karti Hai Sab Log Kare Tauba
Bersat Aane Se Pehle Shehar Mein Aksar Dhool

Dhool Mein Khele, Dhool Hi Fanki, Dhool Hi Unka Gaov
Dhool Hi Unke Tann Ki Chadar Unka Bistar Dhool

Kishton Mein Sab Safar Kiye Hai, Kishton Mein Aaraam
Dhur Gayee Baiti Fir Chal Di, Toda Rukkar Dhool

Sadiyon Pehle Is Sehra Mein Ek Samandar Tha
Chod Gaya Jo Apni Jagah per Ek Samandar Dhool




kya hi khoob likha hai roja....ek behad umda pesh-kash...daad kabool ho Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #18 on: April 29, 2009, 12:51:09 PM »
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Quote from: poppoetry on April 26, 2009, 05:52:08 PM
bhut khub roja ji.

Baat kya kre diwaron ki,mekhano ki,dharmshalon ki
insaaniyat k rishto  pr b chad chuki h dhool

Baat kre insano ki,un pr chadti heywaniyat ki
insaan hi insaan k upar udata h dhool

Thanks PP dear. (Waise mai b confuse hogayi thi pehle Celmira sis ne Pooja likha padkar.. tongue3. Nice lines dear.  Usual Smile
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«Reply #19 on: April 29, 2009, 12:52:04 PM »
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Quote from: Celmira on April 26, 2009, 05:58:00 PM
Bohot Khoob Roja Applause

Nice lines from you, Pooja Ji

Thanks dear Talat
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«Reply #20 on: April 29, 2009, 12:53:16 PM »
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Quote from: sajid_ghayel on April 27, 2009, 03:52:07 AM
Wah Roja wahhhhhhhhh mind blowing super bohat bohat khoobsurat ek mazbooooooooooot peshkash, Kasam se maza aa gaya  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley


Nice addition PP... Applause

Bahut bahut dhanyawad Sajid ji aapne hamara likha pada aur pasand kiya thanks again  Usual Smile
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«Reply #21 on: April 29, 2009, 12:54:41 PM »
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Quote from: Pooja on April 27, 2009, 04:45:49 PM

bahoot khoob Roja

Thanks dear Pooja di
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«Reply #22 on: April 29, 2009, 12:57:04 PM »
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Quote from: khwaish on April 27, 2009, 05:27:44 PM
Bahut Khoob Roja... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley


Thanks Khwaish Bhaiya
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«Reply #23 on: April 29, 2009, 12:58:08 PM »
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Quote from: {Angel} on April 27, 2009, 05:32:45 PM
Bahut khoob Roja...

Really a good one...
Loved it..

Thank you very much for reading me dear Hasina  Usual Smile
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«Reply #24 on: April 29, 2009, 01:00:45 PM »
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Quote from: Pooja on April 27, 2009, 05:58:09 PM
Phir se Yoindia per do do Pooja Shocked Even More.... bahoot na-insaafi hai yah  NaNaNa

Just kidding... Mujhe nahi pata tha apka naam Pooja hai.. main to apko Male member samjhati rahi ab tak  DOH

hahaha... aap mere liye Pooja didi and Wo Pooja ? Meri Maa?  tongue3.. But naam toh bahut sunder hai...  Usual Smile
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«Reply #25 on: April 29, 2009, 01:45:37 PM »
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Quote from: Azeem on April 29, 2009, 08:24:57 AM
Mashallah, Ek Zabardast peshkash Aapne hume Di Hai,.

Thanks Azeem bro
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«Reply #26 on: April 29, 2009, 01:46:27 PM »
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Quote from: bekarar on April 29, 2009, 08:43:18 AM

kya hi khoob likha hai roja....ek behad umda pesh-kash...daad kabool ho Applause Applause Applause Applause

Shukriya Sanjeev Bhaiya
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«Reply #27 on: April 29, 2009, 02:25:33 PM »
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Quote from: Roja on April 26, 2009, 05:15:16 PM
Band Gharon Ki Diwaron Ke Andher-Baher Dhool
Aaine Per Dhool Jami Hai Aur Chehre Per Dhool

Din-ber Jinke Paane Ko Dil Rehta Hai Betab
Shaam Ki Aandhi Ker Jaati Hai Sare Manzer Dhool

Itni Shararat Karti Hai Sab Log Kare Tauba
Bersat Aane Se Pehle Shehar Mein Aksar Dhool

Dhool Mein Khele, Dhool Hi Fanki, Dhool Hi Unka Gaov
Dhool Hi Unke Tann Ki Chadar Unka Bistar Dhool

Kishton Mein Sab Safar Kiye Hai, Kishton Mein Aaraam
Dhur Gayee Baiti Fir Chal Di, Toda Rukkar Dhool

Sadiyon Pehle Is Sehra Mein Ek Samandar Tha
Chod Gaya Jo Apni Jagah per Ek Samandar Dhool



ROJA Sis.. Bahut Alag Sosh Ke Sath Likha hai aapne..!! Really Nice Creation.. Bahut Bahut khoooooooob.. Applause Applause


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«Reply #28 on: April 30, 2009, 02:58:04 AM »
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Quote from: @kaash on April 29, 2009, 02:07:42 PM
waah Roja ji behad ache ashaar likhe hain aapne.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

a touchy composition...keep writing dear..

Thank you very much @kaash ji
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«Reply #29 on: April 30, 2009, 02:59:32 AM »
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Quote from: Mann on April 29, 2009, 02:25:33 PM
ROJA Sis.. Bahut Alag Sosh Ke Sath Likha hai aapne..!! Really Nice Creation.. Bahut Bahut khoooooooob.. Applause Applause


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Vicky bhaiya.. Thank you very much for appreciating.
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