Duniya Ka Alag Chehra,.

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Duniya Ka Ek Alag Hi Chehra Dekhaa Maine,.
Dekh Kar Bebasi Logon Ki, Ye Sochaa Maine,.

Sach Kaha Zamaane Ne Ke Duniya Ne Aasmaaan Ko Choo Liya,.
Shayad Isliye Dilon Ko, Taaron Ki Tarah Toot-te Dekhaa Maine,.

Sach Hai, Ke Duniya Ne Tarrakhi Kar Li "Azeem,.
Shayad Isliye Mohabbat Ko, Mit-te Dekhaa Maine,.

Bijli Ki Ab Kisi Ko Bhi Pareshaani Nahi Yahaan,.
Nafraton Ki Aag Se, Gharon Ko, Sulag-te Dekhaa Maine,.

Wo Daur Hi Kitna Pyaara Tha "Azeem, Jab Duniya Peeche Thi,.
Is Daur Mein, Bhai Ko, Bhai Ka Dushman Ban-te Dekhaa Maine,.

Bhale Aaj Duniya Mein Kami Nahi Paison Ki "Azeem,.
Magar Jagaah Jagaah, Insaanon Ko Bhook Se Mar-te Dekhaa Maine,.

__________________________________________-Jaanasheen-
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«Reply #1 on: January 21, 2009, 02:18:16 PM »
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kya baat hai jaanasheenji......bahut hi zorka likh diya hai....

aajkal bhai,bahen,bhookh -baahti kisko hai yeh baaten,
aajkal toh uthe subha zameen par,raat aasmaan par jaake kaaten.

yeh duniya ka hai alag chehra,jo le dubegaa ,sab ko bahut gehera,
ek din aisa yaigaa,apno ka toh kya,khud ka hi nahin pehechan payega chehra.
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«Reply #2 on: January 21, 2009, 02:22:32 PM »
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kya baat hai jaanasheenji......bahut hi zorka likh diya hai....

aajkal bhai,bahen,bhookh -baahti kisko hai yeh baaten,
aajkal toh uthe subha zameen par,raat aasmaan par jaake kaaten.

yeh duniya ka hai alag chehra,jo le dubegaa ,sab ko bahut gehera,
ek din aisa yaigaa,apno ka toh kya,khud ka hi nahin pehechan payega chehra.


Shukriya Cara Ji,.
And Nice One From Ur Side,.
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«Reply #3 on: January 21, 2009, 02:25:47 PM »
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Wah Azeem Jee,
Your poetry is really unique!

Waise To Poora Hi Shair Zaberdast Hai,
But I Just Loved These Sentences:

"Bhale Is Duniya Mein Paison Ki Na Kami Ho 'Azeem',
Magar Jagah Jagah, Insaanon Ko Bhook Se Marte Dekha Maine"

Allah Swt Aapko Khush Rakhe, Ameen.
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«Reply #4 on: January 21, 2009, 02:41:24 PM »
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Wah Azeem Jee,
Your poetry is really unique!

Waise To Poora Hi Shair Zaberdast Hai,
But I Just Loved These Sentences:

"Bhale Is Duniya Mein Paison Ki Na Kami Ho 'Azeem',
Magar Jagah Jagah, Insaanon Ko Bhook Se Marte Dekha Maine"

Allah Swt Aapko Khush Rakhe, Ameen.



Shukriya,.
Ke Aapko Ye Pasand Aaya,.
May Allah SWT Bless You Too,.
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«Reply #5 on: January 21, 2009, 02:45:54 PM »
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Azeem Jee,
Aapko Apne Sawalon Ka Jawab Shayad Meri Ek Post Mein Mil Jaye.
Check In The Topic "Fact About True.. Fake Friends"..
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«Reply #6 on: January 21, 2009, 03:36:31 PM »
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Quote from: Jhuki Palkein on January 21, 2009, 02:45:54 PM
Azeem Jee,
Aapko Apne Sawalon Ka Jawab Shayad Meri Ek Post Mein Mil Jaye.
Check In The Topic "Fact About True.. Fake Friends"..

Shukriya,.
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«Reply #7 on: January 21, 2009, 07:07:59 PM »
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Quote from: Jaanasheen on January 21, 2009, 01:36:07 PM
Duniya Ka Ek Alag Hi Chehra Dekhaa Maine,.
Dekh Kar Bebasi Logon Ki, Ye Sochaa Maine,.

Sach Kaha Zamaane Ne Ke Duniya Ne Aasmaaan Ko Choo Liya,.
Shayad Isliye Dilon Ko, Taaron Ki Tarah Toot-te Dekhaa Maine,.

Sach Hai, Ke Duniya Ne Tarrakhi Kar Li "Azeem,.
Shayad Isliye Mohabbat Ko, Mit-te Dekhaa Maine,.

Bijli Ki Ab Kisi Ko Bhi Pareshaani Nahi Yahaan,.
Nafraton Ki Aag Se, Gharon Ko, Sulag-te Dekhaa Maine,.

Wo Daur Hi Kitna Pyaara Tha "Azeem, Jab Duniya Peeche Thi,.
Is Daur Mein, Bhai Ko, Bhai Ka Dushman Ban-te Dekhaa Maine,.

Bhale Aaj Duniya Mein Kami Nahi Paison Ki "Azeem,.
Magar Jagaah Jagaah, Insaanon Ko Bhook Se Mar-te Dekhaa Maine,.

__________________________________________-Jaanasheen-

Nice one Chote Bhai
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«Reply #8 on: January 22, 2009, 05:32:19 AM »
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Quote from: Jaanasheen on January 21, 2009, 01:36:07 PM
Duniya Ka Ek Alag Hi Chehra Dekhaa Maine,.
Dekh Kar Bebasi Logon Ki, Ye Sochaa Maine,.

Sach Kaha Zamaane Ne Ke Duniya Ne Aasmaaan Ko Choo Liya,.
Shayad Isliye Dilon Ko, Taaron Ki Tarah Toot-te Dekhaa Maine,.

Sach Hai, Ke Duniya Ne Tarrakhi Kar Li "Azeem,.
Shayad Isliye Mohabbat Ko, Mit-te Dekhaa Maine,.

Bijli Ki Ab Kisi Ko Bhi Pareshaani Nahi Yahaan,.
Nafraton Ki Aag Se, Gharon Ko, Sulag-te Dekhaa Maine,.

Wo Daur Hi Kitna Pyaara Tha "Azeem, Jab Duniya Peeche Thi,.
Is Daur Mein, Bhai Ko, Bhai Ka Dushman Ban-te Dekhaa Maine,.

Bhale Aaj Duniya Mein Kami Nahi Paison Ki "Azeem,.
Magar Jagaah Jagaah, Insaanon Ko Bhook Se Mar-te Dekhaa Maine,.

__________________________________________-Jaanasheen-


Wah Wah Subhan Allah Mere Bhai Kya Likha hai tune bade bhai ka dil khush kar diya tone azeem subhan allah is sher pe qurbaan jaun !!

Jagha jagha insanoo ko bhool se maarte dekha maine !!

Kya tamacha diya hai duniya ke un rishwat quroon ko jo aise mahool ko janam dete hain !! wah azeem wah mere bhai jhinjood diye re tune ajj !!

allah tumhe khush rakhe !!

Qadeer Toopchi
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«Reply #9 on: January 22, 2009, 08:51:49 AM »
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Wah Wah Subhan Allah Mere Bhai Kya Likha hai tune bade bhai ka dil khush kar diya tone azeem subhan allah is sher pe qurbaan jaun !!

Jagha jagha insanoo ko bhool se maarte dekha maine !!

Kya tamacha diya hai duniya ke un rishwat quroon ko jo aise mahool ko janam dete hain !! wah azeem wah mere bhai jhinjood diye re tune ajj !!

allah tumhe khush rakhe !!

Qadeer Toopchi


Shukriya Bhaijaan,.
Inkhilaabi Likhne Ki Koshish Kar Raha Hoon,.

Kya Ye Shayari Inkhilaabi Kehlaai Jaa Sakti Hai,.
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«Reply #10 on: January 22, 2009, 09:18:02 AM »
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Quote from: Jaanasheen on January 21, 2009, 01:36:07 PM
Duniya Ka Ek Alag Hi Chehra Dekhaa Maine,.
Dekh Kar Bebasi Logon Ki, Ye Sochaa Maine,.

Sach Kaha Zamaane Ne Ke Duniya Ne Aasmaaan Ko Choo Liya,.
Shayad Isliye Dilon Ko, Taaron Ki Tarah Toot-te Dekhaa Maine,.

Sach Hai, Ke Duniya Ne Tarrakhi Kar Li "Azeem,.
Shayad Isliye Mohabbat Ko, Mit-te Dekhaa Maine,.

Bijli Ki Ab Kisi Ko Bhi Pareshaani Nahi Yahaan,.
Nafraton Ki Aag Se, Gharon Ko, Sulag-te Dekhaa Maine,.

Wo Daur Hi Kitna Pyaara Tha "Azeem, Jab Duniya Peeche Thi,.
Is Daur Mein, Bhai Ko, Bhai Ka Dushman Ban-te Dekhaa Maine,.

Bhale Aaj Duniya Mein Kami Nahi Paison Ki "Azeem,.
Magar Jagaah Jagaah, Insaanon Ko Bhook Se Mar-te Dekhaa Maine,.

__________________________________________-Jaanasheen-


bahut khoob Azeem
kamaal likha hai aapne Applause Applause
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«Reply #11 on: January 22, 2009, 09:20:32 AM »
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Quote from: cara on January 21, 2009, 02:18:16 PM
kya baat hai jaanasheenji......bahut hi zorka likh diya hai....

aajkal bhai,bahen,bhookh -baahti kisko hai yeh baaten,
aajkal toh uthe subha zameen par,raat aasmaan par jaake kaaten.

yeh duniya ka hai alag chehra,jo le dubegaa ,sab ko bahut gehera,
ek din aisa yaigaa,apno ka toh kya,khud ka hi nahin pehechan payega chehra.


nice lines Cara Applause Applause
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«Reply #12 on: January 22, 2009, 09:21:23 AM »
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Quote from: Jaanasheen on January 21, 2009, 01:36:07 PM
Duniya Ka Ek Alag Hi Chehra Dekhaa Maine,.
Dekh Kar Bebasi Logon Ki, Ye Sochaa Maine,.

Sach Kaha Zamaane Ne Ke Duniya Ne Aasmaaan Ko Choo Liya,.
Shayad Isliye Dilon Ko, Taaron Ki Tarah Toot-te Dekhaa Maine,.

Sach Hai, Ke Duniya Ne Tarrakhi Kar Li "Azeem,.
Shayad Isliye Mohabbat Ko, Mit-te Dekhaa Maine,.

Bijli Ki Ab Kisi Ko Bhi Pareshaani Nahi Yahaan,.
Nafraton Ki Aag Se, Gharon Ko, Sulag-te Dekhaa Maine,.

Wo Daur Hi Kitna Pyaara Tha "Azeem, Jab Duniya Peeche Thi,.
Is Daur Mein, Bhai Ko, Bhai Ka Dushman Ban-te Dekhaa Maine,.

Bhale Aaj Duniya Mein Kami Nahi Paison Ki "Azeem,.
Magar Jagaah Jagaah, Insaanon Ko Bhook Se Mar-te Dekhaa Maine,.

__________________________________________-Jaanasheen-


wah wah jahansheen. bahut kamaal ka likha hai aap neh

jasbir singh
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«Reply #13 on: January 22, 2009, 09:32:54 AM »
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Quote from: Jaanasheen on January 22, 2009, 08:51:49 AM
Shukriya Bhaijaan,.
Inkhilaabi Likhne Ki Koshish Kar Raha Hoon,.

Kya Ye Shayari Inkhilaabi Kehlaai Jaa Sakti Hai,.

Han Yahi hai wo shayari jo jhinjood de subko lage raho azeem kamiyabi milegi tumhe !!

Qadeer Toopchi
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«Reply #14 on: January 22, 2009, 09:48:55 AM »
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jaanasheen ji aapki soch ka jawaab nahi
bohut dino k baad ham is site par aayei aur aapki ye rachna padhi
sach mei ek ek shabd sachaai ki karwahat se gunj raha hai agar har ek insaan ismei chipe pehluon ko samajh jaayei to sach mei fir wahi hindustaan hoga jo pehle kabhi hua karta tha
god bless u jaanasheen ji
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