Ek Aurat Ka Safar "Khwaish"

by khwaish on June 05, 2011, 01:11:20 PM
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«Reply #15 on: June 06, 2011, 06:15:10 PM »
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Simply Amazing Creation Khwaish ji...

Itne Sache aur Dabe aurat ke ehsaas ko aaj apne Aksharo ka roop de bahoot umda sakal di hai.. Yea rachana wakai mea kai dilo se judi hai..

Bahoot Bahoot Bahoot Umda aur Behtareen Peshkash .. !!! Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

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«Reply #16 on: June 07, 2011, 06:38:02 AM »
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Quote from: bekarar on June 05, 2011, 06:09:39 PM
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daad daad daad aur daad......... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Aapka Bahut bahut Aur Bahut Shukriya Mere Bhai..

Aapki Daad Mere Liye bahut Maayne Rakhti Hai..

Aapka Teh Dil Se Shukriya.. icon_flower
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«Reply #17 on: June 07, 2011, 06:59:48 AM »
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 :icon_salut:Aapke dil mein itni izzat ek aurat ke liye Khwaish ji,aapke soch aur ehsaaso ko main salute karti hun.superb creation.dil ko chu gayi aapke kavita. Hats off to you! Hats off to you!  Both Thumbs Up Thankyou ! Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #18 on: June 07, 2011, 07:33:51 AM »
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yakeenan khoobsurat peshkash....koi shaq ki gunjaish hi nahi....bahut khoob khwaish ji....par aaj ka waqt kaafi badal chuka hai ya kahe k badal rha hai...aurat hi hoti hai jo ghar ko sawaarati hai aur ghar ko tabaah bhi wahi karti hai.....afsos k baat hai k aaj aisi ladkiyon ki tadad badh rahi hai jo ghar ko swarg banaane mein nahi unhe todne mein vishwas karti hai.....kher...bahut khoob likha hia aapne.....good going
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«Reply #19 on: June 07, 2011, 08:12:40 AM »
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Quote from: Nikhaar on June 07, 2011, 07:33:51 AM
yakeenan khoobsurat peshkash....koi shaq ki gunjaish hi nahi....bahut khoob khwaish ji....par aaj ka waqt kaafi badal chuka hai ya kahe k badal rha hai...aurat hi hoti hai jo ghar ko sawaarati hai aur ghar ko tabaah bhi wahi karti hai.....afsos k baat hai k aaj aisi ladkiyon ki tadad badh rahi hai jo ghar ko swarg banaane mein nahi unhe todne mein vishwas karti hai.....kher...bahut khoob likha hia aapne.....good going


Pooja Ji, Aapke Comments Par Reply Dena Zaroori Ho gaya Hai,Sabse Pehle Aapka Bahut Bahut Shukriya Pooja..Jo Aapne Apna keemti Waqt Diya..Aur Rahi Aapki Baat, Bilkul Sach Hai Par pooja Sirf Ek Aurat Hi ghar Ko tabaah Nahi karti..Jis Insaan Ki Soch Buri Ho,Woh Bura Hi karega chaahe Woh Ek AUrat Ho Yaa Koi Mard. Aur Ache Bure Insaan To Har Jagah baste Hai..Yeh Hi duniya Hai, har Insaan Apne Aap mein Kabhi Mukammal Nahi Rehta..
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«Reply #20 on: June 07, 2011, 08:20:22 AM »
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Quote from: Sajid_Ghayel on June 05, 2011, 10:29:25 PM
Tumhari is rachna ko Ghayel ka salam mere bhai.

Aapne Apna Waqt Diya, Aapka Bahutt Bahutt Shukriya Bhai..
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«Reply #21 on: June 07, 2011, 08:28:10 AM »
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no words
just hats off to you
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«Reply #22 on: June 07, 2011, 11:12:57 AM »
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Quote from: manjum on June 06, 2011, 03:48:30 AM
wah wah khwaishji.. ye wo sawal hain hain jo har aurat... aur sabhi mata pita aur bhaiyeo ke dil main jarur aaye honge.... is dard se koi anjan nai hai.... par aap ise itne ache se shabdon main bandh sake... khub hai... bahut bahui shukriya aapka ki aapne ise itne ache se likha.....

khub..... Applause Applause Applause

Anju Ji Aap Kyon Shukriya Keh rahe hai Balki Mujhe Aapka Shukriya Ada karna Chahiye Ke Aapne Apna Waqt Diya Iss kavita Ko..

Iss kavita Ka Udesh Sirf Yehi Tha Ke Kabhi Koi Ek Aurat Ki Zindagi Ko Kareeb Jaankar dekhe To Usse Mehsoos Ho Ke Ek Aurat Ki Zindagi Kya Hoti Hai..

Bas Yuhi Humesha Saath Dete Rahiyega
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«Reply #23 on: June 07, 2011, 11:33:47 AM »
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khwaishji..  aapko shukriya islie kaha ki aap logo se hm aurto ki zindgi ko karib se janne ke lie kah rahe ho... aur aap khud samjh pa rahe ho ki ham kya mahsus karte hain.... jo ki log dekh kr bhi nai dekhte..... aur aap ese muddo ko uthate ho....

bahut khub lkha hai aapne....
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«Reply #24 on: June 07, 2011, 11:38:41 AM »
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Quote from: manjum on June 07, 2011, 11:33:47 AM
khwaishji..  aapko shukriya islie kaha ki aap logo se hm aurto ki zindgi ko karib se janne ke lie kah rahe ho... aur aap khud samjh pa rahe ho ki ham kya mahsus karte hain.... jo ki log dekh kr bhi nai dekhte..... aur aap ese muddo ko uthate ho....

bahut khub lkha hai aapne....

Ohh!!! Soooo Sweeeet Of You..Thanks a lottttt For Those Kind Words.. icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower
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«Reply #25 on: June 07, 2011, 11:46:17 AM »
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shukriya.... khwaishji....
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«Reply #26 on: June 07, 2011, 12:02:03 PM »
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Ek beti bankar maine bhi Janam lia,
Achcha laga hum betiyon ko bhi dunia ke beto ne samaj lia,
dil mein jo khushi aayi hai, woh bayaan karu..aise alfaaz mere paas nahi,
Chahkar bhi agar kuch kehna chahu, toh kami poori hogi nahi..
abhi ke liye bas itna hi ki likhte rahiye apni jubaani kuch aisi hi nayi kahaani..
Bahut khoob !! God Bless !
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«Reply #27 on: June 07, 2011, 12:39:49 PM »
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apki is kavita ki tareef karna mere bas ki bat nahi par aapne jin asan shabdo me ek aurat ki jindagi ko likha aapki vichaardara aapki soch ko mera salam hai

bhagwan aapko har khushi de
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«Reply #28 on: June 07, 2011, 02:54:54 PM »
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Quote from: manzil-e-ishq on June 06, 2011, 05:49:32 AM
excellent creation khwaish ji....
no words to say anething abt ur dis creation...
hats off to u....


Thankyou Soooooooooo Much Priyaji..

Thanks a Million For the Appreciation!!! icon_flower
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«Reply #29 on: June 07, 2011, 02:56:20 PM »
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Quote from: AbhiTamrakar on June 06, 2011, 06:46:38 AM
and that is why they deserve a lot respect.....

good one khwaish bhai.....
Aap Ka bahut bahut Shukriya Abhiji icon_flower
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