Ek Aurat Ka Safar "Khwaish" -Panna 4:Tanziya aur Tehreekbaksh Shayariyan

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«Reply #45 on: July 05, 2011, 09:42:56 AM »

Quote from: dr rakesh jain on June 09, 2011, 10:59:25 AM

Wonderful excellent laughing4

Thankyou So Much Dr.Rakesh Jain Ji..


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Re: Ek Aurat Ka Safar "Khwaish"

«Reply #46 on: July 21, 2011, 03:45:12 PM »

Quote from: Celmira on June 09, 2011, 12:33:57 PM

Bohot mubarak ho iss khoobsurat shayari likhne pe Khwaish Dost.... Har daur, har mazhab main aurat ko ek khaas rutba diya gaya hai aur uski wajah uski qurbaaniyaan hain jo wo apne ghar, apni family ke liye karti hai....Mere paas lafz ki kami hai aapki iss shayayari ki taareef main likhne ki.....Aapne humesha social issues pe likha hai aur bohot behtareen likha hai...Keep writing always.

Talat Dost, Aapka Bahut bahut bahut AUr bahut shukriya jo aapne aapna waqt diya..main jaanta hoon aap yopar khaas iss Nazm ke liye aaye the..thankyou soooooooooooooo much!!!! aur dost, bas jazbaat hi yeh kuch aise the ke kalam par utaarana Laazmi sa ho gaya..yeh nazm huemsha mere dil ke bahut kareeb rahegi..thankyou soooooooooooooooooooooo much once again..


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«Reply #47 on: August 21, 2011, 12:07:18 PM »

very gud,aaj kal to aurat hona hi gunaah hai,bas bhagwan se yehi duaa karungi ke mujhe itni himat de ke,apne mama papa ko duniya ki har khushi de sakun,aaj bina wajah aankhon ne aasun nikal rhe hain


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Re: Ek Aurat Ka Safar "Khwaish"

«Reply #48 on: October 17, 2011, 07:49:16 AM »

Quote from: SURESH SANGWAN on June 12, 2011, 03:09:27 PM

khwaishji aapne bahut hi jordaar dhamaakedaar likha hai.
tahe dil tareef hazir hai.

par aapse ek baat kehni hai wo ye ki log apni behan aur maan ko hi aurat kyun samajhte hain biwi ko 1% log hi iss kadar sochte honge,unke rishte ke to joke ka patra banti hain....................
aisa kyun.?

Ji Sureshji, Yeh baat To maine Bhi Note Ki Hai ke Jokes To kabhi Bhi Biwiyon Par Hi bante Hai..par Aisa Nahi Ke Log Sirf Apni Maa Aur behan Ko Hi Aurat Samajhte Hai..baaki To Yahan Har kisam Ka Insaan basta Hai..Kisi Ki Soch Uski Pehchaan Banti Hai..Agar Insaan Bhed-baau kare Rishton ke Mutaabik to woh sabse bada Murk Hai Aur kuch Nahi..

Aapne apna waqt diya Thankyou Sooooooooooooooo Much!!!!


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Re: Ek Aurat Ka Safar "Khwaish"

«Reply #49 on: October 17, 2011, 08:02:49 AM »

Quote from: adil bechain on June 14, 2011, 10:18:26 AM

ye poem likhna namumkin to nahin par haan bahut mushkil hai.jis tarah se aapne ise lafzo.N mein utara hai bahut hi qaabil-e-tarif hai. aur aap ke ehsasat ko dikhata hai. mujhe ye shubha ho chala hai kahin aap aurat to nahin. ya phir is rishte ki gahraai par aapne shayad research kiya hai. yaqeen maane main bilkul seriously kah rahaa hoon janaab. Clapping Smiley

Hahahaha Adil Ji Main Bilkul Bhi Aurat Nahi bas Kuch Jazbaat Aise the jisse maine bahut kareeb se Mehsoos Kiye The..Aur Jahan Jazbaaton Ko Mehsoos Kiya Jaaye Waha Koi Research Ki zaroorat Hi nahi..

Aapne Izzat-Afzai Ki, Aapka bahut bahutttttttt Shukriya


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Re: Ek Aurat Ka Safar "Khwaish"

«Reply #50 on: October 18, 2011, 06:31:12 AM »

Quote from: Sheba on June 20, 2011, 08:00:24 AM

AAPKE IS NAZAM KE BAAD MAIN SIRF YEHI KAH SAKTI HOON KI WAQAI AAP EK ACHE AUR SHARIF INSAAN HO AGAR AAP NE AURAT KE DARD KO MAHSOOS KIYA HAI.

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Aapka Bahut Bahut Shukriya Shebaji


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«Reply #51 on: October 18, 2011, 07:06:36 AM »

Quote from: khwaish on June 05, 2011, 01:11:20 PM

Bahut Kam Aisa Hota Hai ke Kuch Likhne Par Apni Hi Aankhein Nam Ho jaaye,
Darasal Yeh Kavita Maine Tab likhi
Jab Main Main Apni Didi Ko Vaapas Airport Drop Karke Apne Office Aaya..
Jaise Yahan Par Summer Vacations Par sab Betiyan Apne ghar jaati hai,
waise hi meri Didi Bhi Yahan Rehne aayi thi,
Kisi Apno Se Bichadkar ya Door Jaate Waqt
Aankhon Ko Nam Ho Jaana Laazmi Sa Ho jata Hai..
Aise Mein Main Khud Se Ek sawaal sa Kar Gaya Ke Aakhir
Ek Aurat Ka Safar Kya Hota Hai???

Kuch Ankahe Jazbaaton Mein Behkar Kuch Likh Raha Hoon..Padhiyega Zaroor.

Kya Hai Aurat???

Kisi Ke Ghar mein Beti Bankar Janam Leti Hai
Baap Ki Izzat,Maa Ki Parchai Bankar Rehti Hai
Apne Bhaiyon Ke Saath hasti-Khelti Rehti Hai
Inhi Rishte-Naato Ko Yeh Apni Duniya Samaj Leti Hai!!!

Phir Ek Din............

Naye Rishte, Nayi Zimmedariyon Se Usse Hum Jod Jaate Hai
Vidaai Par Peeche Bas Kuch Yaadein yeh Chodd Jaate Hai

Kuch Aur Rishto Ko Nibhaane Ke Liye,
Yeh Beti Auron Ke Ghar Ko sajaane Jaati hai
APni Mehak Se Kisi Aur Ke Ghar Ko Mehakaati Hai
Ek Beti Kisi Ki Patni, Kisi Ki Bahu, Kisi Ki Bhabi Ban Jati hai
Yeh Ek Ladki, Naa Jaane Kitne Rishto mein Dhal Jaati Hai!!!!

Har Ek Rishte Ko Nibhaana Iske Liye Ek Farz keh Lata Hai
Iske hirday mein Sab ke Liye Sirf pyaar Hi Pyaar Reh Jaata Hai
Pehle Beti, Phir Behan, Phir Patni,Phir Bahu, Phir Maa,Phir Daadi-Naani....

Yeh Aurat Naa Jaane Kitne Rishto mein Simat Jaati hai
Ek Nanhi Si Jaan Khaandaano Ko Chalaati Hai!!!!!!!

Eh Aurat Teri Koi paribhaasa Teri Koi Ek pehchaan Nahi!!
Teri Mahima "Khwaish" Darsha Sake,Itni Uski Kavita mein Jaan Nahi

Eh AUrat Tujhe Tujhe Kya Kahoon, Teri Har Baat Niraali Hai!!!!
Tu Ek Aisa pauda Hai Jis Ghar Rahe Waha hariyali Hi hariyali Hai

Ek Aurat Ko Kabhi Parayapan ka Ehsaas Na Dilaao
Jisne Har Kadam Par APne Ehsaaso Ka Balidaan Diya
Kabhi Uski Zindagi Ko Kareeb Se Jaan Paao..

Teri Shaan Mein "Khwaish" Sirf Itna keh sakta Hai
Teri Unchaiyon Ke Saamne Aasman Bhi Nahi Reh Sakta Hai!!!

Iss Kavita Se Mera Sirf Itna Sa Ek paighaam Hai!!!!
Eh Aurat!!! Tujhe Mera Sar Jhuka Kar Salaam Hai!!!!!

~~~~~Khwaish~~~~~

Khwaish ji,

Simply Superb!

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«Reply #52 on: September 09, 2012, 02:33:08 PM »

Bohat Aache!!!! Applause


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«Reply #53 on: March 07, 2013, 04:02:49 PM »

kya khoob aapne likha khwaishji. Mom ki yaad aayi. Dil ro gaya. Sach hai mai ise khoob achci tarah feel kar sakti hoon.


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