EK BAAP KA DARD (DAHEJ)

by NETRAPAL on May 12, 2009, 05:26:37 AM
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Vipdaa kaisee mujh pe ye ayee hai
aankhe meree nam ho aayee  hai
kaise jheloo ees vipdaa ko mai..
Laash betee kee ghar me aayee hai

Jad sa khadaa hooaa hai beta
Beewee murchi padee hooyee hai
Kaise samjhaao  apne man ko mai
Kafan se betee dakhee huyee hai

laal jode me sajee huyee wo
ragolee bhee rachee huyee hai…
kaise rokoo apne ansoo mai,
arhtee betee kee sajee huyee hai

nahi jhuke the kandhe mere tab
bojh dolee kai maine dhoyaa tha
toot gaye kandhe mere ab
bojh arthee ka kaise dhoun  ab

bade armaano se isko paalaa tha
dhoom-dhaam  se vidaa kiyaa tha
lutaa diyaa tha sab kuch maine tab
unkaa daaman fir bhee khalee tha

hanstee thee wo, sab kuch sahtee thee
chup-cup kar rotee rahtee thee
kisse kahatee vipdaa apnee wo
aayaa ban kar us ghar me rahtee thee

unke ghar fir bas jayengee
ansoo mere kab sookh paayenge
kisse batoo dukh apnaa mai..
dukh pe mere sab hanste jayegne….

(Netrapal Singh)
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Pooja
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«Reply #1 on: May 12, 2009, 05:33:04 AM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applausehamesha ki tarah bahoot khoob Netra ji
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«Reply #2 on: May 12, 2009, 05:43:47 AM »
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netra ji samaj ki ek burai par bohut hi saral shabdo mei aapne har baap k dard ko prakat kiya hai .......kis tarah taarif karu mein aapki is poetry ki really amazingggggggggggggg

Applause Applause 


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«Reply #3 on: May 12, 2009, 06:00:43 AM »
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thanks pooja ji...

netra...
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«Reply #4 on: May 12, 2009, 06:03:19 AM »
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bhawnaa apne padhaa aur ek baap ke dard ko samjhaa ye hee bahut achee bat hai mere liye.......agar se padh kar koi bhee sadh ek bar is par vichaar kar le yahee meree safaltaa hai...

Netra...
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«Reply #5 on: May 12, 2009, 06:18:38 AM »
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Bahut Khoob Netra Ji, Applause  Applause  Applause

Really u writte wonderfull on every social matter.

Shally/
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«Reply #6 on: May 12, 2009, 06:27:25 AM »
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netrapal ji,bahut acha likha aapne,dil bhar aayee.
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«Reply #7 on: May 12, 2009, 07:28:16 AM »
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Quote from: k.shael on May 12, 2009, 06:18:38 AM
Bahut Khoob Netra Ji, Applause  Applause  Applause

Really u writte wonderfull on every social matter.

Shally/

thanks shaily ji...

netra..
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«Reply #8 on: May 12, 2009, 07:29:44 AM »
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Hamesha ki tarah Bahoot bahoot Umda likha hai aapne. Bahoot bahoot khoob. Man kar raha hai yahan tareef karti hi rahu...Usual Smile
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«Reply #9 on: May 12, 2009, 09:28:59 AM »
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thanks sophi ji...

netra...
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Rajbir
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«Reply #10 on: May 12, 2009, 09:32:01 AM »
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Netra,

Aaj subah se yeh poem kayi baar padhi !

Kayi logon ko iske baare mein bataya bhi !

Keep the revolutionary writing going on ! Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #11 on: May 12, 2009, 09:46:35 AM »
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Mashallah
bahut hi umda likha hai Netrapal ji
bahut bahut accha laga aapka yeh kalaam...
i agree with Rajbir Sir
keep the revolutionary writing going on !!! Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #12 on: May 12, 2009, 09:48:26 AM »
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Diya,

Thanks for supporting my views !  notworthy
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«Reply #13 on: May 12, 2009, 10:07:05 AM »
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Quote from: madhuwesh on May 12, 2009, 06:27:25 AM
netrapal ji,bahut acha likha aapne,dil bhar aayee.

thanks madhuvesh ji,

netra...
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«Reply #14 on: May 12, 2009, 10:08:21 AM »
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very very thanks rajbir ji...

Netra...
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