EK BAAP KA DARD (DAHEJ)

by NETRAPAL on May 12, 2009, 05:26:37 AM
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«Reply #30 on: May 15, 2009, 11:54:31 AM »
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bahut achche bro...........dil ko chhu kar gayi hai har ek line.......kasam se dard ko is bakhoobi se bayaan kiya hai aapne kii kya kahoon lafz khat.m se ho gaye hain.........
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«Reply #31 on: May 15, 2009, 12:01:48 PM »
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kab aaayegaa wo pal bharat me
baap betee ka muskaayegaa....
kyaa tootegee bediyaa bharat me
har betee ka bhawishat sawar jayegaa....

nahi hai har betee indiragandhi
gaaon gaon me bharee padee
agaantaa kee bahee bhee aandhee
kyaa intaa bhawishya swar payegaa
wo pal bhee kyaa ayegaa bharat me

laalach lobh me doob raeh ham
21 wo sadee me jee rahe ham
bediyo jakade agyaantaa ke
betiyaa kya muskaayegee bharat me..


Netra....
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«Reply #32 on: May 15, 2009, 12:03:02 PM »
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Quote from: salil2002 on May 15, 2009, 11:54:31 AM
bahut achche bro...........dil ko chhu kar gayi hai har ek line.......kasam se dard ko is bakhoobi se bayaan kiya hai aapne kii kya kahoon lafz khat.m se ho gaye hain.........

thanks salil ji....

Netra...
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«Reply #33 on: May 16, 2009, 10:18:13 AM »
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Netra,

Bahut acha kiya tumne, jo us bachhi ko sahi waqt par medical help dilai aur uski jaan bachayi Applause Applause Applause

Magar mujhe ek baat kehni aur poochni hai aap sabse...shayad main galat bhi ho sakta hoon apni assessment mein.

Dalej ki pratha ko badhawa kaun deta hai?

Jahan bhi maine news dekhi hain ya society mein dekha hai...woh yahi dekha gaya hai zyadatar...ki ladki ki saas, nanad, ya koyi aur female member of the family, ladki ko kam dahej laane ke liye ya dahej na laane ke liye taane maarti hain. Use apne mayake se aur dahej laane ko kehti hain. Agar woh na laaye to use maarti peet.ti hain. Bhooka rakhti hain. Ghar ka saara kaam us se karwati hain. List kaafi lambi hai...aap sab ko pata he hoga. Mujhe afsos ke saath kehna pad raha hai ki ek aurat he doosri aurat ki dushman hai. Mard log to aap sabko maaloom he hai ki joru ke ghulam kehlaye jaate hain. I think it is a vicious circle. Bahut kuch kehna chahta hoon, magar waqt kam hai...is liye apne views yahin khatam karta hoon.

In our family, no one takes or gives dowry.
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«Reply #34 on: May 16, 2009, 11:40:24 AM »
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Rajbir ji,

aapne jo kaha wo shatprtishat sahee hai dahej ko badhawaa aurt hee detee hai aur wo kam hee aurte hotee jo bahoo ko betee or saas ko maa samjhtee hai or jo samjtee hai wo ghar swarg ban jaataa hai.

Magar iske liye ham aurto ko hee dosh nahee de sakte kamee purosho mee bhee hai jis ghar me antim nirnay purusho kaa hotaa hai waha ye samasyaa kam hee hotee hai or kai jagah purush bhee laalchee hote hai we apnee wife kee kandho par bandook rakh kar chalate hai badnaam aurte hotee hai or ye amaanviy kartaya purush karte hai.......

Netra.....
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«Reply #35 on: May 16, 2009, 11:58:21 AM »
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Netra,

Bilkul sahi kaha tumne ! I agree with you 100% !

Your are one of my favorite poets here on Yoindia !

God Bless you !

Keep giving words to your revolutionary thoughts and keep expressing them through your marvellous poetry ! Applause
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«Reply #36 on: June 17, 2009, 04:52:27 PM »
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Quote from: Rajbir on May 16, 2009, 10:18:13 AM
Netra,

Bahut acha kiya tumne, jo us bachhi ko sahi waqt par medical help dilai aur uski jaan bachayi Applause Applause Applause

Magar mujhe ek baat kehni aur poochni hai aap sabse...shayad main galat bhi ho sakta hoon apni assessment mein.

Dalej ki pratha ko badhawa kaun deta hai?

Jahan bhi maine news dekhi hain ya society mein dekha hai...woh yahi dekha gaya hai zyadatar...ki ladki ki saas, nanad, ya koyi aur female member of the family, ladki ko kam dahej laane ke liye ya dahej na laane ke liye taane maarti hain. Use apne mayake se aur dahej laane ko kehti hain. Agar woh na laaye to use maarti peet.ti hain. Bhooka rakhti hain. Ghar ka saara kaam us se karwati hain. List kaafi lambi hai...aap sab ko pata he hoga. Mujhe afsos ke saath kehna pad raha hai ki ek aurat he doosri aurat ki dushman hai. Mard log to aap sabko maaloom he hai ki joru ke ghulam kehlaye jaate hain. I think it is a vicious circle. Bahut kuch kehna chahta hoon, magar waqt kam hai...is liye apne views yahin khatam karta hoon.

In our family, no one takes or gives dowry.

Raj ji.. aapne sahi kaha... Kuch Ladkiyon se hi Ladkiyon ko taklif hoti hai.

But Husband bi kam nahi hai. Kayi jagah Aadmi hi apna shauk poora karne ke liye

Khud apni hi beti ko Vegetable samajkar bazar mein bikwa dete hai shaadi ke

naam  pe..So mai yahi kahungi ke yeh dehej ka silsila Male/Female  dono hi karan hai.
 
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