Ek Masoom Ki Maut... (Shikha)

by Shikha12 on December 27, 2006, 11:09:19 AM
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आज भी सफ़र वोही है, आज भी सड़क वोही है…
मगर एक यह कमी है… आज "वो" नहीं है…   

वो मासूम लड़की, वो भोला सा चेहरा,
धानी रंग उसका जो चमकता था सुनहरा…
पसीने में भीगा कुम्हलाया बचपन,
ज़िंदगी से भरा लेकिन नटखट लड़कपन…

आवाज़ें लगा कर उसका लोगो को लुभाना,
और रंगीन गुब्बारे लिए सड़कों पर आना…
वो छोटी उम्र ओढ़े थी कई ज़िम्मेवारिया,
बूढे पिता की शराब और माँ की बीमारिया…

फिर इक रोज़ जब पूछी गयी सारी मज़बूरिया,
पैसे पैसे को मोहताज़ वो हालात की कमज़ोरिया…
उदास से लब बोले “पड़ना चाहती हूँ मैं”
“नाम दुनिया में कुछ करना चाहती हूँ मैं”... 

आज सड़क पर वो ही ऐसे बेसुध पड़ी है,
एक टूटी बोतल शराब की, सिरहाने पड़ी है…
खून से सना उसका वोही मासूम सा चेहरा,
उखड़ी उखड़ी आज उसकी साँसों की लड़ी है…

एक शक्श पास उसके बेचैन सा खड़ा है,
लोगों से पता चला की यही उसका पिता है…
शराब की बोतल की अब भी जिसको फ़िक्र है,
कफ़न लाए या बोतल उसकी मुश्किल बड़ी है…

बोतल को उठा कर वो कुछ बड़बड़ा रहा था,
गुस्से में चेहरा उसका तमतमा रहा था...
और "वो"?? आँसुओं को अपनी पलकों में छुपाए,
आँखों से कह रही थी ये विदाई की घड़ी है...

आज भी वोही सफ़र है और सड़क भी वोही है…
कमी तो है उसकी फिर भी दिल को राहत बड़ी है,
ज़िम्मेवारियाँ से वो अपनी आज़ाद हो चली है,
मैं खुश हूँ की… अब वो मर चुकी है…
हाँ, खुश हूँ मैं की, वो मर चुकी है… 
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Aaj bhi safar wohi hai, Aaj bhi sadak wohi hai…
Magar ek yeh kami hai… Aaj "Woh" Nahin hai…  sad7

Woh masoom ladki, woh bhola sa chehra,  icon_flower
Dhaani rang uska jo chamktaa tha sunhera…
Paseene mey bheega kumlahaaya bachpan,
Zindagii sey bhara lekin nattkhat ladakpan…

Aawaazein laga  kar uska logo ko lubhaanaa,
Aur Rangeen gubaarey liye  sadkon par aana…
Woh chotti umr odhey thi kaii jimmewaariyaa,
Buudhhe pitaa ki sharaab aur maa ki bimaariyaa…

Phir Ek roz jab poonchhi gayi saari majbooriya,
Paise Paise ko mohtaaz wo haalaat ki kamzoriyaa…
Udaas se labb bole “Padnaa chahtii hoon main”
“Naam duniya mein kuch karna chahtii hoon main”... 

Aaj sadak par woh hi aise besudh padii hai,
Ek tooti botal sharaab ki, sirhaane padii hai…
Khoon se sana uska wohi masoom saa chehra,
Ukhhdii Ukhhdii aaj uskii saanson ki ladii hai…

Ek shaksh paas uske bechain saa khadaa hai,
Logo.n sey pata chala ki yehi uska pitaa hai…
Sharaab ki botal ki ab bhi jisko fikar hai,
Kafan laaye ya botal uski mushkil badii hai…

Botal ko utthaa kar woh kuch badbadaa raha tha,
Gusse mein chehraa uska tamtamaa rahaa thaa...
Aur "Woh"?? Aansuon ko apni palakon mein chupaaye,
Aankhon se Keh rahi thi yeh vidaai ki ghadii hai... sad7

Aaj bhi wohi safar hai aur sadak bhi wohi hai…
Kami toh hai uski phir bhi dil ko raahat badi hai,
Jimewaariyon se woh apni aazaad ho chalii hai,
Main khush hoon ki…  Ab Woh Marr Chukii Hai…
Haan, khush hoon main ki, Woh Marr Chukii hai…  crybaby2  crybaby2
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pyarikudi1983
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«Reply #1 on: December 27, 2006, 12:03:05 PM »
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:oops: Beautiful!
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Shikha12
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«Reply #2 on: December 27, 2006, 12:39:45 PM »
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Thanks PK....

I have done some modifications, kuch kamii lag rahi thii...
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«Reply #3 on: December 27, 2006, 04:35:11 PM »
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Waah..Shikha....dont have words ...just amazing......you are really amazing.....!!!!  =D>  =D>  =D>
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«Reply #4 on: December 27, 2006, 04:39:11 PM »
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Quote from: Mahiya on December 27, 2006, 11:09:19 AM


Aaj bhi safar wohi hai, Aaj bhi sadak wohi hai…
Magar ek yeh kami hai… Aaj "Woh" Nahin hai…  sad7

Woh masoom ladki, woh bhola sa chehra,  icon_flower
Dhaani rang uska jo chamktaa tha sunhera…
Paseene mey bheega kumlahaaya bachpan,
Zindagii sey bhara lekin nattkhat ladakpan…

Aawaaz laga laga kar uska logo ko lubhaanaa,
Rangeen gubaarey le kar uska sadkon par aana…
Woh chotti umr odhey thi kaii jimmewaariyaa,
Buudhhe pitaa ki sharaab aur maa ki bimaariyaa…

Phir Ek roz jab kisi ne poonchhi uski majbooriya,
Paise Paise ko mohtaaz wo haalaat ki kamzoriyaa…
Udaas se labb bole “Padnaa chahtii hoon main”
“Naam duniya mein kuch karna chahtii hoon main”... 

Aaj sadak par woh hi aise besudh padii hai,
Ek tooti botal sharaab ki, sirhaane padii hai…
Khoon sey lipta hua wohi uska masoom chehra,
Ukhhdii Ukhhdii aaj uskii saanson ki ladii hai…

Ek shaksh paas uske bechain saa khadaa hai,
Logo.n sey pata chala ki yehi uska pitaa hai…
Sharaab ki botal ki ab bhi jisko fikar hai,
Kafan laaye ya botal uski mushkil badii hai…

Botal ko utthaa kar woh kuch badbadaa raha tha,
Gusse mein chehraa uska tamtamaa rahaa thaa...
Aur "Woh"?? Aansuon ko apni palakon mein chupaaye,
Aankhon se Keh rahi thi yeh vidaai ki ghadii hai... sad7

Aaj bhi wohi safar hai aur sadak bhi wohi hai…
Kami toh hai uski phir bhi dil ko raahat badi hai,
Jimedaariyon sey woh apni aazaad ho gayii hai,
Main khush hoon ki…  Ab Woh Marr Chukii Hai…
Haan, khush hoon main ki, Woh Marr Chukii hai…  crybaby2  crybaby2


WOW.....Kya baat hai.....Its Amazing...Shikha....Hatts Off for u...!!!!!
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anjani_si
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«Reply #5 on: December 27, 2006, 05:19:36 PM »
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shikha didi just toooooo gud!!!!!
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nikki
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«Reply #6 on: December 27, 2006, 05:22:02 PM »
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super duper hit hai....really wonderfull Shikha sis.....
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Rajbir
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«Reply #7 on: December 27, 2006, 06:16:05 PM »
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Shikha

Ek baar phir se tumne social issue ke ooper bahut achcha likha hai....=D>

Alfaaz kam hain tumhein sarahne ke liye !

Shabash...Keep it up !
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«Reply #8 on: December 27, 2006, 07:08:55 PM »
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wah  Shikha.........  awesome.........  mujhe  bahot  accha laga  padhkar.....  dil  ko  choo  gayee..... har lafz  bahot acche lage......  bahot khoob......
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«Reply #9 on: December 27, 2006, 07:29:05 PM »
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Thanks so much....  

Talat, Gaurav, Anjani, Nikki, Rajbir ji, Waheed...  
Hauslaa afjaaii ka Bahut Bahut Shukriyaa ji... :D
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«Reply #10 on: December 27, 2006, 07:33:17 PM »
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ur  Welcome   Moti.......  :lol:
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ranjana
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«Reply #11 on: December 28, 2006, 04:40:42 AM »
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Quote from: Mahiya on December 27, 2006, 11:09:19 AM


Aaj bhi safar wohi hai, Aaj bhi sadak wohi hai…
Magar ek yeh kami hai… Aaj "Woh" Nahin hai…  sad7

Woh masoom ladki, woh bhola sa chehra,  icon_flower
Dhaani rang uska jo chamktaa tha sunhera…
Paseene mey bheega kumlahaaya bachpan,
Zindagii sey bhara lekin nattkhat ladakpan…

Aawaaz laga laga kar uska logo ko lubhaanaa,
Rangeen gubaarey le kar uska sadkon par aana…
Woh chotti umr odhey thi kaii jimmewaariyaa,
Buudhhe pitaa ki sharaab aur maa ki bimaariyaa…

Phir Ek roz jab kisi ne poonchhi uski majbooriya,
Paise Paise ko mohtaaz wo haalaat ki kamzoriyaa…
Udaas se labb bole “Padnaa chahtii hoon main”
“Naam duniya mein kuch karna chahtii hoon main”... 

Aaj sadak par woh hi aise besudh padii hai,
Ek tooti botal sharaab ki, sirhaane padii hai…
Khoon sey lipta hua wohi uska masoom chehra,
Ukhhdii Ukhhdii aaj uskii saanson ki ladii hai…

Ek shaksh paas uske bechain saa khadaa hai,
Logo.n sey pata chala ki yehi uska pitaa hai…
Sharaab ki botal ki ab bhi jisko fikar hai,
Kafan laaye ya botal uski mushkil badii hai…

Botal ko utthaa kar woh kuch badbadaa raha tha,
Gusse mein chehraa uska tamtamaa rahaa thaa...
Aur "Woh"?? Aansuon ko apni palakon mein chupaaye,
Aankhon se Keh rahi thi yeh vidaai ki ghadii hai... sad7

Aaj bhi wohi safar hai aur sadak bhi wohi hai…
Kami toh hai uski phir bhi dil ko raahat badi hai,
Jimedaariyon sey woh apni aazaad ho gayii hai,
Main khush hoon ki…  Ab Woh Marr Chukii Hai…
Haan, khush hoon main ki, Woh Marr Chukii hai…  crybaby2  crybaby2



wonderful job shikha ....amzing hai yeh ....bahut hi khubsurti se aapne shabdo ko peeroya hai ..... Usual Smile
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«Reply #12 on: December 28, 2006, 11:07:40 AM »
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Shikha... kaya baat hai....

dil se kehna hai........ bahut khoob.....

Khush to nahi hun ke mar gai
chinta mukat zarur hun ke woh mar gayi
apni zimedariya se khud ko mukat pata hun
mar gayi wo ab chain se sota hun
raatoon ko nahi jagta ab mai sun kar siskiyan koi
Bhagwan ab nahi kehta ke tu pathhar hai
sun kar tune bechari ka rudan bulaya hoga apne paas
ek meri bhi baat man le
mujhe ek ladki ek bacchi ka vardaan de.........
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«Reply #13 on: December 29, 2006, 05:23:01 AM »
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wah Shikha kay abaat hai.... bahoot hi acha likha hai apne... hamesha aise hi acha likhati raho....

khud ki sanse khud per bojhil bani hai
mangati hai her mout, zindagi kahan akar khadi hai
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«Reply #14 on: December 29, 2006, 09:19:15 AM »
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Sabney itni tareef ki hai, ki kuchh bhi naya kehney ke liye nahi bacha.... Usual Smile

Waisey ye avtar bhi bahut pyaara hai...... :wink:
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