Ek Masoom Ki Maut... (Shikha)

by Shikha12 on December 27, 2006, 11:09:19 AM
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«Reply #15 on: December 29, 2006, 11:14:05 AM »
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wah shika sis.... its really very nice and emotional.... !! keep it up!!

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«Reply #16 on: December 29, 2006, 01:54:09 PM »
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Thanks a lot... Ranju di, Vikas, Pooja di, Jagdish, Meena...

Vikas... Lovely Creation by you... and thanks so much..
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«Reply #17 on: December 29, 2006, 10:40:00 PM »
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Hi
 Shikha ji
Khyal bahut achcha laga
Maza aagaya agar aap zaban ka zara sa istemal seekh lain phir kia baat hai aap ko khud maza aayega
yeh baat likhna meri majboori hai
Ummeed hai meri baat samajh rahin hoon gi
any way verygood
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«Reply #18 on: January 12, 2007, 01:06:07 PM »
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Thanks for Suggestions...   notworthy
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«Reply #19 on: January 16, 2007, 03:24:28 PM »
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yaar di ... the best thing about your poetry is that the thoghts are really amazing ... u think a lot like me.

per ... thoda chota likha karo yaar Winking tongue3

Love it!!
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«Reply #20 on: January 19, 2007, 06:37:38 PM »
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Quote from: Tosha
yaar di ... the best thing about your poetry is that the thoghts are really amazing ... u think a lot like me.

per ... thoda chota likha karo yaar Winking tongue3[/b]

Love it!!


Can't help it... tongue3 

Neways... Thanks a lot :D :D
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«Reply #21 on: August 13, 2008, 03:32:22 PM »
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Shikhaaa... bahut khoob. Aaj hi mere nazar lagi is shayri pe.
Fantastic creation Shikha... Bahut accha laga padkar.  Applause
Superb  Thumbs UP
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«Reply #22 on: September 08, 2008, 08:54:28 PM »
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A well balanced and nicely knitted poem. Though the poem wanted to say more but Shikha gave it a wise end.

In short .. very good work, rather wonderful Usual Smile
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«Reply #23 on: September 09, 2008, 12:34:13 PM »
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Quote from: Roja on August 13, 2008, 03:32:22 PM
Shikhaaa... bahut khoob. Aaj hi mere nazar lagi is shayri pe.
Fantastic creation Shikha... Bahut accha laga padkar.  Applause
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Quote from: Ricky on September 08, 2008, 08:54:28 PM
A well balanced and nicely knitted poem. Though the poem wanted to say more but Shikha gave it a wise end.

In short .. very good work, rather wonderful Usual Smile

Usual Smile
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«Reply #24 on: September 09, 2008, 03:10:16 PM »
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Bahut Bahut Khoob.. Applause Applause Applause

shikha main aapki soch ko Salaam karta hoon. icon_salut bahut ache..
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«Reply #25 on: November 07, 2008, 05:06:04 AM »
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Mahiya, aapka yeh kalam lajawab .. Applause  Applause
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«Reply #26 on: November 07, 2008, 05:25:27 AM »
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Just wonderful
So beautiful
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«Reply #27 on: November 07, 2008, 05:33:45 AM »
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BAHUT KHOOB MAHIYA JI,
 Applause  Applause  Applause
UMDA AUR LAJAWAAB SACHAI SE RO-B-RO
KARWATA AAPKA YE KALAM SACH ME EK
ANJANE DARD KA EHSAAS KARWA GAYA...
BY. K.SHAEL
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«Reply #28 on: November 10, 2008, 06:05:57 AM »
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waaahhhhh awesome poetry......it is like masterpiece i had ever read in my life.....Ultimate poem Mahiya ji...Usual Smile
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«Reply #29 on: November 17, 2008, 05:34:28 PM »
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Abhi ji app Mahiya ki baki poems bhi parre.. ek se bad kar ek master piece hai Usual Smile

Again a very good creation Mahiya!!!
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