GAON:Tanziya aur Tehreekbaksh Shayariyan

NETRAPAL

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Jab bhee mai kisi gaono ko dekhta hoo
Ek khwab ko mai jagte hooe dekhta hoo
Dekhta hoo jab sunahare bhavishy ko galiyo me
Khushboo ko mashoos karta hoo sarso ke kaliyo me
Man ka mayoor naach utha hai mera
jab mai kise gaon ko dekhta hoo

Murjaye hooey chere dikhte hai yaha
Umgan magar unme najar aatee hai
Jhuuree hai chehero pe jinke
Apnepan kee jahalk najar unme hee atee hai
Katte fate kathor hath jab ate hai sar par pata hoo
Apne pan kee chaya me befir sa hojata hoo
Jab bhee….

Desh ka bhavishya ujjwal dikhta hai mujhe
Kheto me jab pasine kee fasal dekhta hoo
Ganavar or anpad samjha jata hai jinhe
Sanskaro ko unhee me panapte hue dekhta hai hoo
Sadiyo se mai…..

Hare bhare khet, khaprel ke makaan,
Poore gaon me baniye ke sirf ek dukaan
Baniya ka uudhar, udhar par byaj
Usee baniye se poore gaon ko lute dekhta hoo

Jagmgate gaon dekhte hai mujhe
Rat me din kee tarah timtimate hai sahar
Dukh bhoot hoota hai mujhe
Jab gaon me roshnee ke chand
jugnuO ko he timtimate hooe dekhta hoo…
jab bhee……..


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Rajbir

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Re: GAON

«Reply #1 on: April 07, 2008, 07:39:34 AM »

Netra

Kya poem likhi hai ! Applause

Excellent ! Superb !

Bahut he khoob !

Ek kraantikari shayar jo main har baar tum mein dekhta hoon Applause

Nice to see you back after so long !


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Shikha12

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Re: GAON

«Reply #2 on: April 07, 2008, 11:44:55 AM »

Very Very Very Nice One... Netra Applause

Its always a pleasure reading your work...

Keep Writing... icon_smile


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Pooja

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Re: GAON

«Reply #3 on: April 11, 2008, 11:51:24 PM »

wah kay abaat hai Netra ji.. bahoot khoob


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harashmahajan

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Re: GAON

«Reply #4 on: April 12, 2008, 03:28:39 AM »

Bahoot badia janaab....


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mistufer

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Re: GAON

«Reply #5 on: April 13, 2008, 08:02:27 PM »

netra ji

bahut badhiya likha hai
gaon he ankhon ke samne aagaye,

Jagmgate gaon dekhte hai mujhe
Rat me din kee tarah timtimate hai sahar
Dukh bhoot hoota hai mujhe
Jab gaon me roshnee ke chand
jugnuO ko he timtimate hooe dekhta hoo…
jab bhee……..

yeh panktiyan bahut achi lagi


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NETRAPAL

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Re: GAON

«Reply #6 on: April 15, 2008, 06:45:21 AM »

thanks aab sab ko, pooja ji, harsh mahajan, ji neera jee, mahiya ji, raj beer jee, pooja jee shikayat hai aapse aapne kuch likha nahi.....

netra....


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honeyrose

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Re: GAON

«Reply #7 on: April 15, 2008, 07:05:39 AM »

Bohat khoob likha hai netra.. Usual Smile


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Sonia01

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Re: GAON

«Reply #8 on: April 18, 2008, 03:08:38 PM »

Netrapal jee bahut accha likha hai aur jaise nira jee ne kaha
mujhe b wo lines bahut accha laga Applause


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NETRAPAL

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Re: GAON

«Reply #9 on: April 19, 2008, 04:57:40 AM »

Quote from: Sonia01 on April 18, 2008, 03:08:38 PM

Netrapal jee bahut accha likha hai aur jaise nira jee ne kaha
mujhe b wo lines bahut accha laga Applause

thanks sonia jee

netra....


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Prateek Mardia

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Re: GAON

«Reply #10 on: April 21, 2008, 03:50:13 AM »

netrapal ji,

behad khoobsurat bhaav.sochne pe mazboor karti he appki kavita.meri bhee badhai sweekar kare aap.

Prateek


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NETRAPAL

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Re: GAON

«Reply #11 on: April 21, 2008, 06:16:49 AM »

Quote from: Prateek Mardia on April 21, 2008, 03:50:13 AM

netrapal ji,

behad khoobsurat bhaav.sochne pe mazboor karti he appki kavita.meri bhee badhai sweekar kare aap.

Prateek

thanks Prateek ji,

netra....


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Pooja

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Re: GAON

«Reply #12 on: November 10, 2008, 09:06:57 PM »

here is example of good thread but not good responses.

Missing your shayri Netra ji!!


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NETRAPAL

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Re: GAON

«Reply #13 on: November 11, 2008, 03:56:09 AM »

thanks pooja ji,

netra....


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