Gareeb Ki Daastaan

by Jaanasheen on February 11, 2009, 04:01:12 PM
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Ye Daastaan Maine Gareeb Logon Ki Sunaai Hai, Agar Kisi Ko Buraa Lage To Maaf Karna,.


Hay Main Gareeb Hua, Ye Kaisa Mera Naseeb Hua,.
Roti Kapdon Se Door Hua, Tangdasti Ke Kareeb Hua,.

Ghar Ki Chatt Tooti Hai, Kismat Bhi Apni Roothi Hai,.
Ghamon Ke Raaste Pe Khada Hoon Dekho,.
Khushiyon Ki Gaadi Chooti Hai,.

Biwi Ke Sab Kharche Uthaaoon, Tohfe Use Main Kya Dilaaoon..
Bachche Khilone Maangte Hain, Bachchon Ko Kaise Samjhaaoon,.
Maa Ki Bimaari Door Karne Ko, Paise Main Kahaan Se Laaoon,.
Behan Bhi Meri Badi Hogayi, Iski Doli Kab Sajaaoon,.

Hay Main Gareeb Hua, Ye Kaisa Mera Naseeb Hua,.
Roti Kapdon Se Door Hua, Tangdasti Ke Kareeb Hua,.

Bhai Pardhaai Karta Hai, Kismat Se Apni Wo Lardta Hai,.
Bojh Uspe Main Kaise Daalon, In Sab Cheezon Se Wo Darta Hai,.

Main Akela Hi Ghar Sambhaaloon, Main Akela Hi Sabko Paaloon,.
Mere Bachche Bhyi Bade Hogaye Inhe School Mein Kab Daaloon,.

Sochta Hoon Aur Rota Hoon,.
Jaagta Zyada Aur Kam Sota Hoon,.
Gareebi Ka Daag Jo Daaman Mein Laga Hai,.
Use Main Har Roz Mehnat Se Dhota Hoon,.

Phir Bhi Jaane Log Kyun, Dekhte Nahi Hume,.
Pyaar Ke Do Meethe Bol Kehte Nahi Hume,.

Hay Main Gareeb Hua, Ye Kaisa Mera Naseeb Hua,.
Roti Kapdon Se Door Hua, Tangdasti Ke Kareeb Hua,.

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«Reply #1 on: February 11, 2009, 04:10:49 PM »
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very nice... kya ye sub yunhee dimaagh mei aajata hai? ya kuch mehsus kartay hain lihkne se pehlay?
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«Reply #2 on: February 11, 2009, 04:25:43 PM »
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Quote from: anjaan dharkan on February 11, 2009, 04:10:49 PM
very nice... kya ye sub yunhee dimaagh mei aajata hai? ya kuch mehsus kartay hain lihkne se pehlay?

Rab Ne Hume Insaan Banaaya Hai, Aur Har Insaan Ka Farz Hai ke Wo sabka Dard Mehsus Kare, Taaki Wo Rab Ka Shukriya Adaa Kar Sake,.

Bas Main Likhne Se Pehle Khudko Us Rang Mein Dhal Deta Hoon, KHud Ko Wahaan Le Jaata Hoon, Jis Topic Pe Likhta Hoon,.

Thank U,.
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«Reply #3 on: February 11, 2009, 07:01:50 PM »
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Quote from: Jaanasheen on February 11, 2009, 04:01:12 PM
Ye Daastaan Maine Gareeb Logon Ki Sunaai Hai, Agar Kisi Ko Buraa Lage To Maaf Karna,.


Hay Main Gareeb Hua, Ye Kaisa Mera Naseeb Hua,.
Roti Kapdon Se Door Hua, Tangdasti Ke Kareeb Hua,.

Ghar Ki Chatt Tooti Hai, Kismat Bhi Apni Roothi Hai,.
Ghamon Ke Raaste Pe Khada Hoon Dekho,.
Khushiyon Ki Gaadi Chooti Hai,.

Biwi Ke Sab Kharche Uthaaoon, Tohfe Use Main Kya Dilaaoon..
Bachche Khilone Maangte Hain, Bachchon Ko Kaise Samjhaaoon,.
Maa Ki Bimaari Door Karne Ko, Paise Main Kahaan Se Laaoon,.
Behan Bhi Meri Badi Hogayi, Iski Doli Kab Sajaaoon,.

Hay Main Gareeb Hua, Ye Kaisa Mera Naseeb Hua,.
Roti Kapdon Se Door Hua, Tangdasti Ke Kareeb Hua,.

Bhai Pardhaai Karta Hai, Kismat Se Apni Wo Lardta Hai,.
Bojh Uspe Main Kaise Daalon, In Sab Cheezon Se Wo Darta Hai,.

Main Akela Hi Ghar Sambhaaloon, Main Akela Hi Sabko Paaloon,.
Mere Bachche Bhyi Bade Hogaye Inhe School Mein Kab Daaloon,.

Sochta Hoon Aur Rota Hoon,.
Jaagta Zyada Aur Kam Sota Hoon,.
Gareebi Ka Daag Jo Daaman Mein Laga Hai,.
Use Main Har Roz Mehnat Se Dhota Hoon,.

Phir Bhi Jaane Log Kyun, Dekhte Nahi Hume,.
Pyaar Ke Do Meethe Bol Kehte Nahi Hume,.

Hay Main Gareeb Hua, Ye Kaisa Mera Naseeb Hua,.
Roti Kapdon Se Door Hua, Tangdasti Ke Kareeb Hua,.

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«Reply #4 on: February 11, 2009, 07:04:15 PM »
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Bohot achcha likha hai Azeem..Khuda sab ki pareshaniyan door kare..kisi ko muflis na banaye...!
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«Reply #5 on: February 11, 2009, 07:06:11 PM »
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 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

bahoot khoob lil bro.. kamaal ka likha hai... Good creation
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«Reply #6 on: February 12, 2009, 12:41:02 PM »
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Quote from: Asghr on February 11, 2009, 07:01:50 PM
BHAI JAAN ALLAH NE AAP KO KHLOOS KI DAULAT BAKSHI HAI MERI NAZAR MAIN AAP BAUT AMEER HAIN SDAA ISSI TARAH LIKHTE REHAIN.ASGHR


Shukriya Ashgr Bhaiya, May Allah Bless You Too,.
Khush Raho,.
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Quote from: Celmira on February 11, 2009, 07:04:15 PM
Bohot achcha likha hai Azeem..Khuda sab ki pareshaniyan door kare..kisi ko muflis na banaye...!


Aameen,.

Shukriya Talat Didi,.

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«Reply #8 on: February 12, 2009, 12:42:34 PM »
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Quote from: Jaanasheen on February 11, 2009, 04:25:43 PM
Rab Ne Hume Insaan Banaaya Hai, Aur Har Insaan Ka Farz Hai ke Wo sabka Dard Mehsus Kare, Taaki Wo Rab Ka Shukriya Adaa Kar Sake,.

Bas Main Likhne Se Pehle Khudko Us Rang Mein Dhal Deta Hoon, KHud Ko Wahaan Le Jaata Hoon, Jis Topic Pe Likhta Hoon,.

Thank U,.

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Quote from: Pooja on February 11, 2009, 07:06:11 PM
Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

bahoot khoob lil bro.. kamaal ka likha hai... Good creation

Shukriya Didijaan,.Bas Duaa Karein,.
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«Reply #10 on: February 13, 2009, 01:41:32 PM »
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jo ghareeb hoon unpar Allah ki rehmat hai, kyu k hashr k din unka hisaab wagairah jaldi hoga kyu k doulat k use k bary mai thoray sawal jawab hongay

isi liyay apnay aap ko khushnaseeb samajh lijiyay
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jo ghareeb hoon unpar Allah ki rehmat hai, kyu k hashr k din unka hisaab wagairah jaldi hoga kyu k doulat k use k bary mai thoray sawal jawab hongay

isi liyay apnay aap ko khushnaseeb samajh lijiyay

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  :clapping:very beautiful,x
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«Reply #14 on: February 15, 2009, 12:27:09 PM »
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