Gareeb Ki Daastaan

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«Reply #15 on: February 16, 2009, 06:47:41 AM »
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Bohat hi umda likha hai Bhaijaan...wonderfull lines... 
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«Reply #16 on: February 16, 2009, 07:35:19 AM »
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Bohat hi umda likha hai Bhaijaan...wonderfull lines... 

Shukriya Didi,.
Aap Aaye Bahaar Aayi..
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«Reply #17 on: February 16, 2009, 07:49:23 AM »
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Bahut badiya bahut khoob likha hai aapne Azeem dear.  Thumbs UP
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«Reply #18 on: February 16, 2009, 07:51:04 AM »
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Bahut badiya bahut khoob likha hai aapne Azeem dear.  Thumbs UP

Shukriya Didijaan,.
Thank U,.

Khushi Hui Ke Aap Is Thread Pe Entry Di Apni,.
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«Reply #19 on: February 16, 2009, 07:54:13 AM »
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Quote from: Jaanasheen on February 16, 2009, 07:51:04 AM
Shukriya Didijaan,.
Thank U,.

Khushi Hui Ke Aap Is Thread Pe Entry Di Apni,.

arre my dear aapka likha toh sab mai padleti hu and comments b
dediya karti hu...
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«Reply #20 on: February 16, 2009, 08:04:11 AM »
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Quote from: Jaanasheen on February 16, 2009, 07:35:19 AM
Shukriya Didi,.
Aap Aaye Bahaar Aayi..

Shukriya BhaiJaan aapne yaad kiya hum aaye

Uss bachpan ke dino ko na bhool saki mein
Aapne kismat ki lakeeron ko na badal sake mein
Aab bhi yaad aaye woh dard -e-daastan
Gam ke bistar pe soye aur kaanton ki chuban ko na bhool saki mein
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«Reply #21 on: February 16, 2009, 08:07:30 AM »
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Shukriya BhaiJaan aapne yaad kiya hum aaye

Uss bachpan ke dino ko na bhool saki mein
Aapne kismat ki lakeeron ko na badal sake mein
Aab bhi yaad aaye woh dard -e-daastan
Gam ke bistar pe soye aur kaanton ki chuban ko na bhool saki mein



Nice One Sis,.

Phoolon Ke Bistar Pe Sokar Bhi, Ehsaas Un Zakhmon Ka Hota Hai,.
Us Daur Mein Kis Kadar, Kaanton Ke Bistar Pe Maine Raatein Guzaari Thi,.
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«Reply #22 on: February 16, 2009, 08:18:38 AM »
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Quote from: Jaanasheen on February 11, 2009, 04:01:12 PM
Ye Daastaan Maine Gareeb Logon Ki Sunaai Hai, Agar Kisi Ko Buraa Lage To Maaf Karna,.


Hay Main Gareeb Hua, Ye Kaisa Mera Naseeb Hua,.
Roti Kapdon Se Door Hua, Tangdasti Ke Kareeb Hua,.

Ghar Ki Chatt Tooti Hai, Kismat Bhi Apni Roothi Hai,.
Ghamon Ke Raaste Pe Khada Hoon Dekho,.
Khushiyon Ki Gaadi Chooti Hai,.

Biwi Ke Sab Kharche Uthaaoon, Tohfe Use Main Kya Dilaaoon..
Bachche Khilone Maangte Hain, Bachchon Ko Kaise Samjhaaoon,.
Maa Ki Bimaari Door Karne Ko, Paise Main Kahaan Se Laaoon,.
Behan Bhi Meri Badi Hogayi, Iski Doli Kab Sajaaoon,.

Hay Main Gareeb Hua, Ye Kaisa Mera Naseeb Hua,.
Roti Kapdon Se Door Hua, Tangdasti Ke Kareeb Hua,.

Bhai Pardhaai Karta Hai, Kismat Se Apni Wo Lardta Hai,.
Bojh Uspe Main Kaise Daalon, In Sab Cheezon Se Wo Darta Hai,.

Main Akela Hi Ghar Sambhaaloon, Main Akela Hi Sabko Paaloon,.
Mere Bachche Bhyi Bade Hogaye Inhe School Mein Kab Daaloon,.

Sochta Hoon Aur Rota Hoon,.
Jaagta Zyada Aur Kam Sota Hoon,.
Gareebi Ka Daag Jo Daaman Mein Laga Hai,.
Use Main Har Roz Mehnat Se Dhota Hoon,.

Phir Bhi Jaane Log Kyun, Dekhte Nahi Hume,.
Pyaar Ke Do Meethe Bol Kehte Nahi Hume,.

Hay Main Gareeb Hua, Ye Kaisa Mera Naseeb Hua,.
Roti Kapdon Se Door Hua, Tangdasti Ke Kareeb Hua,.

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«Reply #23 on: February 16, 2009, 08:20:32 AM »
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Quote from: pandit on February 16, 2009, 08:18:38 AM
gud one ..jaaann....

Shukriya Pandit Ji,.
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«Reply #24 on: February 16, 2009, 08:23:33 AM »
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Quote from: Jaanasheen on February 16, 2009, 08:07:30 AM
Nice One Sis,.

Phoolon Ke Bistar Pe Sokar Bhi, Ehsaas Un Zakhmon Ka Hota Hai,.
Us Daur Mein Kis Kadar, Kaanton Ke Bistar Pe Maine Raatein Guzaari Thi,.


Nice lines BhaiJaan...

Phoolon ke bistar par sona naseeb na hua humen
Unn zakhmon ko aaj bhi tanhai mein yaad kiya karte hain...
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«Reply #25 on: February 16, 2009, 08:24:48 AM »
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Quote from: Jaanasheen on February 16, 2009, 08:20:32 AM
Shukriya Pandit Ji,.

u r most welcome jeee...
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«Reply #26 on: February 16, 2009, 08:25:49 AM »
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Quote from: Jaanasheen on February 16, 2009, 07:35:19 AM
Shukriya Didi,.
Aap Aaye Bahaar Aayi..

Shukriya Bhaijaan...
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«Reply #27 on: February 16, 2009, 08:28:39 AM »
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Quote from: honeyrose on February 16, 2009, 08:23:33 AM
Nice lines BhaiJaan...

Phoolon ke bistar par sona naseeb na hua humen
Unn zakhmon ko aaj bhi tanhai mein yaad kiya karte hain...

Waah Kya Khoob Kaha hai,.
Nice One,.
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«Reply #28 on: February 16, 2009, 08:48:30 AM »
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Quote from: Jaanasheen on February 16, 2009, 08:28:39 AM
Waah Kya Khoob Kaha hai,.
Nice One,.

Shukriya BhaiJaan...

Jab yuhi baithe the kuch yaadein satane lagi
Har baat se dil Be-kas sa hone laga purane zakhm yaad aane lagi
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