GUZARISH.!!

by qalb on October 11, 2011, 10:27:50 AM
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                        karo chori per dekho dakaa na dalo.
                        do kam khaane ko per faqaa na dalo.

                        rahne do mulk ek abb buss bhi karo.
                        apna apna yahaan ilaqaa na dalo.

                        kardo puree zarurat bunaydi hee meri.
                        nakshe mein mustaqbil ka khaqaa na dalo.

                        raftaar zindagi ki khud hee dhire hai.
                        apni garz ki khatir nakaa na dalo.

                        kho gaya bachpan aaj ke daur mein.
                        qalb inke khilono mein budhapaa na dalo.


                                                    faqaa == starved
                                                     khaqaa== sketch
                                                     nakaa==  bandish



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«Reply #1 on: October 11, 2011, 10:50:50 AM »
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Too good.

Infact, the last line was superb.
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«Reply #2 on: October 11, 2011, 02:35:51 PM »
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Quote from: qalb on October 11, 2011, 10:27:50 AM


                       
                        rahne do mulk ek abb buss bhi karo.
                        apna apna yahaan ilaqaa na dalo.


                        kho gaya bachpan aaj ke daur mein.
                        qalb inke khilono mein budhapaa na dalo.


                                               


                                                     

Wah! Wah! qalb ji, bahut khubsurat khayalat pesh kiye hain apne.
Bahut Khooooo...b! Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #3 on: October 12, 2011, 03:26:01 AM »
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«Reply #4 on: October 12, 2011, 03:39:53 AM »
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«Reply #5 on: October 12, 2011, 07:53:22 AM »
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Quote from: purani_jeans_aur_guitar on October 11, 2011, 10:50:50 AM
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Infact, the last line was superb.


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«Reply #6 on: October 12, 2011, 08:46:19 AM »
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Quote from: qalb on October 11, 2011, 10:27:50 AM


                        karo chori per dekho dakaa na dalo.
                        do kam khaane ko per faqaa na dalo.

                        rahne do mulk ek abb buss bhi karo.
                        apna apna yahaan ilaqaa na dalo.

                        kardo puree zarurat bunaydi hee meri.
                        nakshe mein mustaqbil ka khaqaa na dalo.

                        raftaar zindagi ki khud hee dhire hai.
                        apni garz ki khatir nakaa na dalo.

                        kho gaya bachpan aaj ke daur mein.
                        qalb inke khilono mein budhapaa na dalo.


                                                     faqaa == starved
                                                     khaqaa== sketch
                                                     nakaa==  bandish



                                                      qalb(HEART)
                                                     
                                                      RATH BRAND GHEE HOUSE
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Waah waah waah!!! Kya kehne Qalb Ji..

Umda Pashkash..Bahut Gehre Aur Khoobsurat Khayaalaat..Infact Dusra A'shaar To Main Jis Shehar mein rehta Hoon, Uss Par bahut Apt Baithta Hai..

Bahut AChe Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #7 on: October 12, 2011, 11:23:26 AM »
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Quote from: usha rajesh on October 11, 2011, 02:35:51 PM
Wah! Wah! qalb ji, bahut khubsurat khayalat pesh kiye hain apne.
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«Reply #9 on: November 20, 2011, 09:28:32 AM »
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Quote from: khwaish on October 12, 2011, 08:46:19 AM

Waah waah waah!!! Kya kehne Qalb Ji..

Umda Pashkash..Bahut Gehre Aur Khoobsurat Khayaalaat..Infact Dusra A'shaar To Main Jis Shehar mein rehta Hoon, Uss Par bahut Apt Baithta Hai..

Bahut AChe Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley


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