***HAKIKAT***_________Baadal

by baadal102 on November 19, 2008, 01:32:11 PM
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Aaj bechain ho ke nikle kuch dur hum,
Fir dekh ke kuch akelapan wanhi baith gaye hum,

Thori hi der mai kuch bacche nazar aaye,
Intzaar wo kisi ka karte nazar hume aaye,

Bechaine thi un ki ankho mai besumaar,
Aur labo pe gaali bhi thi un ke lagataar,

Fir ek chota sa ladka wanha aaya,
Maila sa ek thaila kandhe pe laaya,

Aankho mai the us ke aanshu bahut,
Fir kamai na hone ki baat pe bahut jhalaaya,

Dane lage wo sabhi fir use santwana,
Fir baato baato main un ka chehra muskuraya,

Dur se aate hue ek ladka mujhe bhi dikha,
Sayad us ke haatho mai kuch tha aisa mujhe laga,

Jaise hi wo pass aaya sabne poocha late kanha hua,
Bagair bole wo jo laaya tha use kholne laga,

Ye dekh sab apne haath kapdo se pochne lage,
Aur utsuktawas us khulti polithin ko dekhne lage,

Us se nikle kuch rotian or kuch sabji,
Fir jaldi hi wo sab main batne lagi,

Kisi ko aadhi to kisi ko poori roti mili,
Lakin ye hakikat hai bhook kisi ki na miti,

Ye dekh mera man bahut bhar aaya,
Fir socha yeh mera desh hume kanha le aaya,

Sapno mai jeene or khelne ki hai jin ki ummar,
Chin ke un ka bachpan de di kon se dagaar,

Sochte hue mai or bechain ho gaya,
Gaya tha thora chain paane ke liye,

Baadal to apni ruh ko bhi lahu luhaan ker aaya,
Baadal to apni ruh ko bhi lahu luhaan ker aaya................




Baadal
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«Reply #1 on: November 19, 2008, 02:41:41 PM »
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Kya yaar achcha khasa mood tha tumne aakhe num kardi  Crying

Sun kar teri dastaan ghabra gaya hu main
Na jane q is nateeje pe aa gaya hu main
Main na rahu kaun dega meri betiyo ko rotiya
Is haqeeqat pe aaj khud hi jhunjla gaya hu main

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«Reply #2 on: November 19, 2008, 03:05:13 PM »
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wow! nice words... yoon tho awareness karna humara farz hai... tab bhi tho dunya mein tabdeelee aatee hai... nice work!
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«Reply #3 on: November 19, 2008, 03:29:59 PM »
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Quote from: sajid_ghayel on November 19, 2008, 02:41:41 PM
Sun kar teri dastaan ghabra gaya hu main
Na jane q is nateeje pe aa gaya hu main
Main na rahu kaun dega meri betiyo ko rotiya
Is haqeeqat pe aaj khud hi jhunjla gaya hu main

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Bahut khoob sajid ji



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«Reply #4 on: November 19, 2008, 03:30:32 PM »
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thanx a lot dhadkan ji




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«Reply #5 on: November 19, 2008, 04:29:40 PM »
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wah baadal ji kaya baat hai, dil ko chu gai apki kavita, behad achi likhi hai apne... kamal kar diya.... yah lines to bahoot achi lagi:

Kisi ko aadhi to kisi ko poori roti mili,
Lakin ye hakikat hai bhook kisi ki na miti,

Ye dekh mera man bahut bhar aaya,
Fir socha yeh mera desh hume kanha le aaya,

Sapno mai jeene or khelne ki hai jin ki ummar,
Chin ke un ka bachpan de di kon se dagaar,

Sochte hue mai or bechain ho gaya,
Gaya tha thora chain paane ke liye,

Baadal to apni ruh ko bhi lahu luhaan ker aaya,
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«Reply #6 on: November 20, 2008, 04:53:29 AM »
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tearyeyed   baadal ji aapki is kavita ne sach mei rula hi diya
bohut achey se aapne har shabd ko kavita ka roop dekar sachai kehne ki koshish ki hai
gud work baadal ji  Applause
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«Reply #7 on: November 20, 2008, 05:12:32 AM »
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badal
  aap to bahut acha likta ho
sach main pad kar bahut acha laga
                            mamta
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«Reply #8 on: November 20, 2008, 05:27:38 AM »
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bahut bahut sukriya aap ka jo aap
ne time nikal ke isse padha or samjha bhi,
thanx a lot all of u

Pooja ji
Bhawna ji
N
Mamta ji




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«Reply #9 on: November 20, 2008, 05:57:14 AM »
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 Applause  Applause  Applause
BAHUT KHOOB BAADAL JI,
BAHUT AACHA LIKHA HAI, KISI GARIB KE
HALATOON KO U KALAM KE SAHARE LIKHNA
SACH ME EK AACHI BAAT HAI...
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UMEED HAI LOG AAPKE ISS KALAM KO PADNE
KE BAAD KUCH SIKHE JAROOR.. icon_salut
BY. K.SHAEL
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«Reply #10 on: November 20, 2008, 06:07:51 AM »
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bahut bahut sukriya shally ji notworthy






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«Reply #11 on: November 20, 2008, 01:49:27 PM »
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Kis tarah se is haqiqat ko likha hai aapne Baadal....apne khaane ka niwala bhi bhari sa laga hai.....aur gale main kuch phans gaya hai.......jaane kitne masoom bhook se bilak rahe hain, aur phir khali pet hi thand / garmi / barsaat so rahe hain.........Aap ko koshish ko salam.
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«Reply #12 on: November 21, 2008, 10:20:37 AM »
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bahut bahut sukriya celmira ji


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«Reply #13 on: November 22, 2008, 09:00:21 AM »
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KYA LIKHA HAI BAADAL APNE
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«Reply #14 on: November 22, 2008, 09:02:04 PM »
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Quote from: baadal102 on November 19, 2008, 01:32:11 PM





Aaj bechain ho ke nikle kuch dur hum,
Fir dekh ke kuch akelapan wanhi baith gaye hum,

Thori hi der mai kuch bacche nazar aaye,
Intzaar wo kisi ka karte nazar hume aaye,

Bechaine thi un ki ankho mai besumaar,
Aur labo pe gaali bhi thi un ke lagataar,

Fir ek chota sa ladka wanha aaya,
Maila sa ek thaila kandhe pe laaya,

Aankho mai the us ke aanshu bahut,
Fir kamai na hone ki baat pe bahut jhalaaya,

Dane lage wo sabhi fir use santwana,
Fir baato baato main un ka chehra muskuraya,

Dur se aate hue ek ladka mujhe bhi dikha,
Sayad us ke haatho mai kuch tha aisa mujhe laga,

Jaise hi wo pass aaya sabne poocha late kanha hua,
Bagair bole wo jo laaya tha use kholne laga,

Ye dekh sab apne haath kapdo se pochne lage,
Aur utsuktawas us khulti polithin ko dekhne lage,

Us se nikle kuch rotian or kuch sabji,
Fir jaldi hi wo sab main batne lagi,

Kisi ko aadhi to kisi ko poori roti mili,
Lakin ye hakikat hai bhook kisi ki na miti,

Ye dekh mera man bahut bhar aaya,
Fir socha yeh mera desh hume kanha le aaya,

Sapno mai jeene or khelne ki hai jin ki ummar,
Chin ke un ka bachpan de di kon se dagaar,

Sochte hue mai or bechain ho gaya,
Gaya tha thora chain paane ke liye,

Baadal to apni ruh ko bhi lahu luhaan ker aaya,
Baadal to apni ruh ko bhi lahu luhaan ker aaya................




Baadal
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Bohat khoob badal... acha hay...... bohat khoob...
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